| "When a Heart Melts" Reviews/Comments [ 62 ] |
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Reviewed By: HIEIdude411CHICK On: November 20, 2003 21:04 CST
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SORRY FOR THE CRAZY REVIEW LAST TIME.-( I really didn't have time.) Your story is so different and creative, and I think that's what makes it so wonderful.
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Title: continue
Reviewed By: ANIMEluverFREAK On: November 20, 2003 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO I AIN'T TRYIN' 2 BUTTER YOU UP, I JUST REALLY LIKE THIS FIC FOR SOME REASON! I love your cliffhangers! Because it causes so much excitement about what the other character is going to do next. And I hope at least one of them admits there feelings soon! Also it seems funny that such a dignified person like Sesshumaru could be so silly when arguing with himself. Rin is also funny just drooling over him.
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Reviewed By: punkSESHOUMARU/Rin-rocker On: November 20, 2003 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was so funny when Rin's brother was teasing her I raelly can't to know what will happen next! Sesshoumaru is sooooooooo cute when he argues with himself(though sometimes it seems as if though he has some psychological problems). And the dream sequence was...^-* ...anyway I hope writing this story isn't getting you too distracted(after all college is tough enough without a job). Can I ask if you really like writing cliffhangers? ...but I guess that's just another thing that makes this story sooooo GREAT! Well I can't wait until the next chapter.(AND PLEASE MAKE IT LONG!)*_-
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Reviewed By: fireash [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 14:08 CST
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Reviewed By: VampirePrincessMiyu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 13:14 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the nc-17 fics were running low in rin/sess pairings so i decided to give R a try. glad i did. there's a lot of originality in your story. please update soon. i hope you get a lot more reviews. they seem to make you so happy.
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Reviewed By: fireash [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 23:38 CST
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Reviewed By: bl (fireash) [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 23:27 CST
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i don't understand mediaminer. it sent me an email today saying 6 more people reviewed but only one new one showed up and it was dated 13 days ago. thanks for reviewing! :D
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Title: DUDE!
Reviewed By: HIEIdude411CHICK On: November 12, 2003 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS FIC IS GREAT, AWESOME, AMAZING, COOL, TIGHT, WONDERFUL,YOUR A GENIUS, IT'S INCREDIBLE!
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Title: continue
Reviewed By: ANIMEluverFREAK On: November 12, 2003 21:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic actually the best i've read(SERIOUSLY). And it takes A LOT to get me impressed!continue!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: punkSESHOUMARU/Rin-rocker On: November 12, 2003 21:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I THINK I JUST FELL IN LOVE WITH THIS FREAKIN' FIC. (SESSHOUMARU/KAGOME PAIRING REALLY MAKES ME WANNA PUKE ANYWAY) I JUST LOVE THIS STORY-DID I ALREADY SAY THAT. YOU SAID THE BATTLE SEEN YOU WROTE WASN'T THAT GOOD,BUT I ACTUALLY THOUGHT IT WAS TIGHT!@.@ BUT TOO SHORT. MAYBE I'M JUST CRAZY OR MAYBE THIS STORY REALLY DOES ROCK(DOES THAT SOUND TOO CORNY). OH WELL, THOSE OF YOU OUT THERE WHO LIKE THE SESSHOUMARU/RIN PAIRING GOTTA ADMIT THIS FIC IS PRETTY TIGHT,NO,I MEAN REALLY TIGHT!-(AM I USING THE WORD TIGHT A LITTLE TOO MUCH). YOU JUST GOTTA CONTINUE. PLEASE I'M BEGGING YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I REALLY HOPE YOU HAVE TIME BECAUSE I SURE DO AND REALLY WANNA READ WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN NEXT. PLEASE DON'T STOP WRITING AND DON'T TAKE TOO LONG! MAYBE I'M ASKING TOO MUCH, BUT I JUST GOTTA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: sesshoumaruluver#1 On: November 12, 2003 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE I'M BEGGING YOU TO CONTINUE THE STORY. ALSO WHAT IS UP WIT' DA CLIFFHANGERS? (that wasn't supposed to be a bad comment)...anyway CONTINUE THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: dudethisistight!
Reviewed By: SESSHY-chan On: November 12, 2003 21:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*.*BEING THE OPPOSITE OF A PREP I CAN'T LET MY SELF GET CARRIED SO HERE GOES...*.* *.* *.* *.* *.* ILOVETHISGODDAMNFICBUTWHY'DYOUHAVE2ENDITTHERE*.*ITREALLYAWESOME.PLEASE,PLEA SE,PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEASE,continue the next chapter soon cuz' i'm VERY impatient and i just gotta read more of this!
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Title: LUVTHISFIC!
Reviewed By: animefluffyaddicit On: November 12, 2003 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely luv this fic(1 of the best RIN/SESSHOUMARU fics i've ever read). Why did u hav 2 stop there? you're seriously torturing me with these cliffhangers! Anyway please continue writing this awesome fic & don't let any bad reviews discourage u. (-_~) it's KAWAII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Angel86 On: October 29, 2003 15:44 CST
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This is coming along nicely. Please update quickly! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Title: thanks for the review
Reviewed By: Corin On: October 26, 2003 19:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay I would like to thank you for reviewing my story Kagome's Warning....um...your story is okay...but I hate the Sess/Rin pairings...because I see Rin more as a daughter to him....well that's all I have to say....
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