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Reviewed By: PJ On: May 20, 2004 10:34 CDT
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Great chapter loved the intros. Now i see why Inuyasha's aunt didn't make much of a comment when he introduced Kagome as his mate. Oh man how could yo do that to them? I feel bad for both of them I hope there is a good explaination for this. I hope Kagome takes the time to hear everything and doesn't just get upset like she has a tendancy to do. But if I know her she most likely will. (I still like her) But then again she might surprise me. Well I hope you update soon this last chapter was great just like the whole story.
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Reviewed By: midnightdraco On: May 20, 2004 00:06 CDT
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this story is the bomb please update fast.
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Reviewed By: InuGirlTeen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 21:59 CDT
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OHHHHHHH!!! I cannot wait until the next chapter!!! This story is getting sososososoooooo GOOD!!!!!! ^_^ PLEASE update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: phoenixfire17 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The meeting was just as envisioned...
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Ithilelda [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 19:14 CDT
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I don't review much but I have just got to say that that chapter had to be one of the best i've ever read! Chappie 22 almost made me want to cry! I loved the way every one came together as a family for Inu Yasha's and Lady Mariko's sakes! Keep this going! As McDonalds says "I'm lovin' it!"
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Reviewed By: Ithilelda [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 19:10 CDT
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Reviewed By: Stephanie B. On: May 10, 2004 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that was just plain mean. How could you leave us hanging like that. I want to read more, and I'm not a patient person! Please hurry up and write fast! I really like this story! I'll be waiting!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: May 10, 2004 17:41 CDT
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'sniff, sniff' Please I want more.
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Title: me again...u_uU
Reviewed By: Hino Mitsukiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 16:50 CDT
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Oh, and about Sesshoumaru and OOCness...yes, he's out-of-character...If he were truly in-character, he would've killed (insert the dude's name here cos I can't for the life o' me remember it) as soon as he arrived. Yes, I know it doesn't fit in with the rest, but just mentioning it. Jaa na (see ya).
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Reviewed By: Hino Mitsukiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Evil. That's what you are. Evil. eeeevil. Makin' a cliffy like that. Now then, on to the actual review *sighs* I hate having to make sense. First of all, your writing style is great. It's descriptive, but not too descriptive so it's boring to read, that's very good. Good plot 'twists', makes the story that much more enjoyable to read (even the cliffies >|). Now about the grammar/spellings...There are...some minor mistakes. Using wrong spellings and such, but it's not too bad. About teh Japanese/names....*sighs* Here's a site that'll help alot: http://www.wot-club.org.uk/Inuyasha/ it has the original translations and scans from the very first volume of Inuyasha, until the latest chapters that Takahashi writes/draws, and it's updated every week. You can catch up on your Inuyasha there, but start from Volume 1, because the anime......just plain sucks. As does the Viz manga. Name spellings: Sesshomaru = Sesshoumaru; Kikyo = Kikyou; Myoga = Myouga; also, it's not Iron Reaver Soul Stealer, it's Sankon Tessou (Soul Shattering Iron Claw). If you want the blood blades attack, it's Hijin Kessou (Airborne Blade Blood Claw), not Claws of Blood. About Sesshoumaru's 'whip attack'...he has none. The creators of the anime made it up. His actual attack, is the Dokkasou (Toxic Flower Claw), where his claws become poison. Also, it's Ah-Un, not Ah-Uhn, but that's a minor thing. I could go on and on with the minor mistakes in Japanese, but I won't because then mediaminer'll prolly delete my review...Basically, it's a great story, and I hope you can update soon. Ah, i'm only reviewing on this chapter cos I just finished reading your story, so yeah...Ganbare zo. (good luck!) Oh, and please tell your daughter that that was a wonderful poem =)
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: May 10, 2004 13:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! I've been waiting for this forever! *sniff* so happy! lol ^^
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Reviewed By: PJ On: May 10, 2004 11:34 CDT
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Yay!! I was just checking the site real quick before I left today and found the new chapter. Great chapter *sniffle* loved the whole thing. Kagome was great the way she supported Inuyasha and then just kind of stayed in the background and let Inuyasha greet his family. I like how you have Sessy standing back and letting Inuyasha have his due. This is such a wonderful story sorry for the short review but gotto go. Update when you can
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: May 04, 2004 20:04 CDT
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I hope that next chapter will involve the actual meeting. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: PJ *again* On: May 04, 2004 18:27 CDT
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i just read the last chapter again and then thought about my review and I take back what I said about Inuyasha commenting on Kagome's clothes. While it would have been nice it would have been out of character for Inuyasha he would not make a comment like that in front of others except maybe 'feh' or maybe a rude comment. He might make a comment when he is alone with Kagome and then again maybe not.
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Title: Newly Addicted Reader
Reviewed By: phoenixfire17 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! I just started reading this story, and I just have to say that I'm hooked. I finally got caught up, and I now need more to read! I love your latest chapter (21) and it was great when Kagome punched out that Riochi girl (Riochi deserved it in my opinion)! I loved it. Also, when Jaken was mistaken for a child, I burst out laughing! And I also like the past you gave Sesshomaru. It's so sad...I actually cried when I read the "Memories" chapter. Well, that's all I have to say about that...Continue with this great story and update soon!!!
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