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Reviewed By: DragonChic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 02:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was sooo good/sweet please update soon real soon k keep writeing
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Title: I'm Blown Away!
Reviewed By: D-Chan3 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 16:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I'm really blown away by your story. This is one of the best that I've read and I'd put it right up there with Krista Perry's Hearts of Ice! Even better than THE WHITE DOG! I really can't wait to see what happens next and I do hope that you'll update as soon as you can. I think you should also post this to Fanfiction.net!
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Title: Reviewed
Reviewed By: phoenixfire17 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, man! It has been way too long since the last time I have reviewed this fic. Sorry! I just got caught up, and I still love your writing. Just have to get that out first thing. Second, keep up the awesome work. Last, more frequent updates! :) Ta-ta.
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Title: o.o
Reviewed By: RayGirl (me again!) On: July 08, 2005 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG UPDATE!!!! (And brooke I saw that 'F' in the middle of your OMG...>_>) what will Kagura do!? What will Kagura do!? *bows* Almight lrod of fanfiction, *takes out cross* By the power of kami-sama I pray no writer's block or arm/hand injuries fall over you.
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Reviewed By: inugirlteen (nli) On: June 20, 2005 01:46 CDT
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KAGURA! OMFG! Kagura/Sesshomaru is my all time favorite pairing! I have to see what's gonna happen!
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Title: !!!!
Reviewed By: RaGirl On: June 03, 2005 08:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh please update soon almighty lord of fanfiction! *waves hands* i wish you much luck and no writer's block!!!
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!!!!! This fic is AMAZING!!! You have Shippo and Rin down perfect! I really like the direction of this story! I started it and finished what you have so far in like 2 days, I was so hooked! Do you seriously have a job and a fam? I'm just a college student, and I havent found time to post any of my fics! Go you! Keep writting! oh yeah, your grammar all of the sudden got perfect, that made me smile.
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Title: update
Reviewed By: RayGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 00:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE!!! I'll die if you do not update and yes i swear it!!!! ISH NEEDING UPDATE So...update soon please!!!! o.o please
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Reviewed By: Simply a Lady (NSI) On: May 26, 2005 19:52 CDT
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Goody...now this should be interesting.... As to the name, I foudn a sight listing names and meanings in Japanese and I just picked it. Supposedly it means Firstborn son...and I wanted that to be in a kind of literal meaning for Taro. Even though Shippo is older and such Taro was the First BORN son to Inuyasha and Kagome... UPDATE (POKES) NOW (POKES HARDER)
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Reviewed By: inu luver 2004 not signed in On: May 26, 2005 17:42 CDT
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Once again a wonderful chapter! But shame on you for making us all wait so long!!! (shakes finger at you) Don't you ever do that again... or no cookies!! (throws cookies to everyone-writer and readers!!!)
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Reviewed By: PJ On: May 26, 2005 08:40 CDT
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Cool update. I am headed out the door right now so am in a bit of a hurry. This was great I am glad Inuyasha & his son are going to 'work together'. It looks like Inuyasha is not going to take the sins of the mothre out on her child. I think while they are gone Kagome and that "woman" are going to 'have it out' but then I could be wrong. Keep writing I know what it is like to have a big block so I will do my best to be patient.
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Reviewed By: Steffie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 03:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
All right, I just sat here for about 2 hours and read this WHOLE DARNED THING. I must say, I did enjoy it very much. I was, of course, disturbed by the rape ordeal, but all rape disturbs me. I recomend a small note somewhere that says this deals with rape. Though the R rating itself could, arguably, say that, but that is neither here nor there. In the last few chapters I did notice that your paragraphs tended to not have spaces between them and that made them harder to read. I was also wondering why you had Kagura appearing at the end of several chapters doing the same thing...? It seemed odd. It was very easy for me to jump into this fanfic with no preamble and I had to smile at the very beginning. It is also quite difficult to find a GOOD fanfic that handles Inuyasha's human roots. It is a nice change to see someone who isn't disgusted by him on the human end. Of course, I miss Kouga because I'm just highly amused by him in general. If Kouga appears, I know we're in for a good couple of eps or chapters. Your characters are VERY believable and I even manage to feel pity for Yuhiko and more than her, her children. All in all? Well done.
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Title: UPDATE!
Reviewed By: ChrisKaz958 On: April 30, 2005 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! You are the most amazing writer in the history of fanfics! Just my humbe opinion. I love your story! It's got a great plot and the characters are so well developed! But I've been checking every week and you still havn't updated. Why?! I know you must be busy with everything and this is just a pastime, but please, PLEASE! update soon! You've got me hooked on your story, and now i can't stop thinking about it. You have a duty now that you've hooked fans into reading your story, so now you have to pay the consequences and write more! lol! That doesn't seem too much like a puishment since you really seem to enjoy writing. Me too! I hope i might one day write something as good as this! It's amazing! And the story about the vampire? It's really good! It reminds me about the Darren Shan Cirque Du Freak series. Have you read it? Your story sounds a bit like it. Is that where you got the idea? It's a really good series and even most grown-ups that have read it like it. Yours seems to be at a little older level, but it's looks really good so far. If you havn't read the series, you should. The Cirque Du Freak Series by Darren Shan. It might give you some ideas, not that you would copy them. Your ideas are too creative for that!:) I hope you keep us updated with that story as well. It sounds really interesting too! Anyway, PLEASE UPDATE! I want to know how Inuyasha and Kagome will get over what happened to him, as well as what's going on with Sesshomaru and the girl, and Kagura too! |
Title: i disagree
Reviewed By: ChrisKaz958 On: April 19, 2005 06:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I disagree with the fight scene between Inuyasha and Koga. They're friendly rivals, they would never try and kill each other for real. They test their strenght against each other occaisionally and improve on their skills, and also to see if the other one will be able to protect Kagome should one of them fail/die. Koga would never try to kill Inuyasha because Kagome chose him. He would just go and mate with Ayame. And Koga forcing Kagome to mate with him and eating Inuyasha? That's sick! Koga would never eat mutt-face and he's a good guy and would never force himself on the one he loves (Kagome). It was kinda creepy too when he sucked Inuyasha's blood. He would never do that! AnywY, I haven't finished reading your story, i just thought I'd comment on that one part. I really like the rest of it, with Inuyasha meeting the human side of his family. I like how we finally learn about Inuyasha's family and past and why he was kicked out and forced to live on his own. It's a really interesting story. I really like it. I love your writing style and humor you put into your fics are great! Please keep writing! Awesome story. I'l comment on the rest when i finish it.
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Title: TOO SHORT!
Reviewed By: Patriot On: March 15, 2005 04:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Next chapter has to be much, much longer than this! Sess's actions however were surprising nonetheless.
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