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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 19:04 CST
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wow your good another great chapeter(31) but im confused what Kagura have to do with anything?
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Title: AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 18:08 CST
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you raped inuyasha gave him an evil mate a step daugther that reminds fluffy of someone special and then on top of that YOU GIVE HIM A SON AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH MY LIFE IS OFFICALLY OVER
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Title: yo sat WHAT!!!!!!
Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 17:25 CST
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ok what do you mean that thet girl could be mated to inuyasha that is impossible inuyasha was to young then and plus he would remember because mates share bonds and can use telopatic energy be feel and communicat and see what happening to the othe and plus to mate you have to have sez and wouldnt she be to young c'mon now istnt that illegl or somthing omg im bout to faint move over kagome here i come "THUMP"
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Title: truly beutiful
Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 17:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
chapter 22 was great i cried with inuyasha and his aunt the wait was killing me as much as them i am so happy for them :) good job
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Title: NO NO NO NO
Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 16:54 CST
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ok in chapter 2 something i forgot inuyasha's father did not give him the firerat his mother did inyasha dosent evan know what he looks like his father died the day he was born
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Title: yaayy
Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 15:56 CST
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you made me laugh i think chapter 17 is the best one ive read yet i cant wait to see what comes up next but not now gotta do home work my birthday is in two days ill be 14 yaay ttyl
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Title: yaayy
Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 15:56 CST
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you made me laugh i think chapter 17 is the best one ive read yet i cant wait to see what comes up next but not now gotta do home work my birthday is in two days ill be 14 yaay ttyl
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Title: ahhhhhh
Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 15:41 CST
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ok chapter 15 "Onigumi, you shall pay!" ok listen onigumo=naraku and onigum is the one who fell in love with the undead miko (kikyou) he was not a threat untill he sold his body to a whole bunch of demons to regain strent and to love kikyou but things changed once he became naraku!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and on chapter 17 "the staff of skulls"? you got to be kiddin me omg its the staff of two heads!!!! what year did you write this and how much do you know about inuyasha sorry 4 sounding mean but i like your plot
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Title: ok sorry i lied
Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 13:54 CST
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geuss what (ya i noe its me again srry) but its inuyasha movie marathon (except 4 afflections across time) but still it will tell u in honorble ruler how Takemaru and Inu Tashoi died and how old inuyasha id!!!:)
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Title: last reveiw
Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome On: December 20, 2006 16:52 CST
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that is impossible inuyasha is over 200 now because in the third movie when inuyasha was born his father died and siya had to sheth sounga and it was exactly
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Title: cant stop reading
Reviewed By: HALF CAT DEMON KAGOME On: December 19, 2006 21:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok im gonna tell u the truth i dont like this fic right now but i cant stop reading sorry i dont like the way you make the chapters and the way you make their personalities so fake her are some really good fanfic writers ~doggielover~~~and corise li~~so for some real good fics go to www.google.com and type live or let die fanfic, and go to mediaminer for doggie lover who is real good or go to www.google.com and seach for one month for romance, or two months to live the sequel to one month for romance.............any well your fic might not bode well(in the words of miroku) but ill keep readin and ill try to stop reveiwing cause i know you now hate me and i wish you the best of luck :) (please dont hate me too much:()
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Title: *VERY ANGRY DEMON KAGOME*
Reviewed By: half CAT demon kagome On: December 19, 2006 20:14 CST
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ok on chapter 5 people cant go thro the well only inuyasha and kagome and another thing KAGOME IS NOT THAT STUPID I AM INSULTED THAT YOU WOULD GIVE KAGOME THE PERSONALITY OF THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: just finished chapter 4
Reviewed By: cat demon kagome On: December 19, 2006 19:53 CST
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good but Iziayoi was and only child bye
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Title: me again
Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome On: December 19, 2006 19:41 CST
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ok this one is gonna be short Inu Tashoi and Lady Iziayoi were never married or mated because Inu Tashoi was mated to Shessomaru's mother and plus the family of Iziayoi wouldnt allow it ok still on chapter 4 and bye now
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Title: a lil advice
Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome On: December 19, 2006 19:34 CST
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ok here are some of the things i found wrong Lord Tanaka should be Takemaru and he did the day of InuYahsa's father they died together so far im on chapter 4 and i will let you know anything else because i beleive fanfics should have truth in it all truth fanfics is just what you think would, could, or would be really cool if happen but you are doing good could make the chapters longer and improve on the personalities to make it more realistic BYE
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