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Reviewed By: PJ On: May 03, 2004 16:14 CDT
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Oh I forgot one thing that I thought would have been nice for the chapter. Kagome commented on how nice Inuyasha looked it would have been nice if Inuyasha had said something about Kagome's clothes. I know sounds rather 'selfish' but has he ever seen her in anything besides her 'normal clothes' maybe it is just because he is nervous. But did she have to sit him in his new clothes I think she needs to learn a bit of restraint on using that word it seems like everytime he does something "she" thinks isn't right or irritating she 'sits' him. I can see what you mean about her not being as mature as she could be. I guess she hasn't realized that Inuyasha didn't have as much formal training as others he had to grow up by himself he didn't have anybody to teach him the finer things. But it also sounds like he may have gotten some of his impatience from his mother's side. Here I am babbling again *sorry* I am going now.
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Reviewed By: PJ On: May 03, 2004 16:04 CDT
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Great chapter! i like how you are writing Sessy (I call him that because I can't spell his name correctly without looking it up) He is still a bit stuck up and thinks of people/humans as being below him but he has grown to find out that there are some that are not. I guess those few made a heck of a good first impression so he didn't kill them right to start with. Now you have me wondering who else is waiting to see Inuyasha. Someone that has waited 50yrs I can only think of one person but I thought things had been settled between them early in the story or even in the prequel? hhmmmm.... you really have me wondering now. (not sure if that is a good thing or not) I liked how you had Kagome admit not liking to wear those kinds of clothes and why. To tell the truth I don't know how I would deal with wearing those kinds of clothes either. Being a girl I still prefer jeans and sometimes shorts but skirts/dresses bleck!! I wear them if it is required but if I can get by with pants then I do. BTW: I am glad you do not take my reviews as flames because I meant no offense I was just stating my opinions and some frustrations because sometimes it seemed things were not explained to a certain time traveling crazy girl. This is a wonderful story and I hope to see you update soon.
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: April 30, 2004 16:32 CDT
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Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Geoffrey Meeks On: April 29, 2004 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
so far this book is ok i like it ps i think robert jordan is cool i am readin his book right now "eye of the world"
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Reviewed By: InuGirlTeen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 20:31 CDT
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Thanks for mentioning my site! I also want to say that the last chater had a great ending! it was sooooo funny! Plz update soon!
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Title: luved it (once agian)
Reviewed By: QueenKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 15:15 CDT
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i just love the new chapter especially Kagome punching out that "riochi" (good going Kagome!!) any way, im looking foreward to the next chapter,pleeze update soon, QueenKagome
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Reviewed By: Morly On: April 20, 2004 14:17 CDT
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Hi, I tried the link in your AN and it says not found. www.freewebs.com/index.htm
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Reviewed By: PJ On: April 13, 2004 02:41 CDT
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Great chapter. *LOL* at poor Jaken being taken for a child. Loved that part I had make sure not to wake up anybody up while laughing (am reading late at night) Can't await to see what Kagome does about that girl wanting to scrub Inuyasha's back. This is a great story. You have trouble keeping up with one story and I haven't been able to keep up with any of mine I had to take a break only it seems to have been like almost a year long break. Anyway I really enjoy reading this story so keep posting!!
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: April 12, 2004 21:25 CDT
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If that maid touches Inuyasha's back she will pull her hair out. Can we say cat fight ^_^ update soon.
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Reviewed By: PJ On: April 10, 2004 02:48 CDT
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Just wanted to say great last couple of chapters. Still reading this wonderful story keep writing. I liked how Kagome is having Inuyasha take her shopping to make up for 'throwing the game' he should know Kagome wouldn't like him to do that. How could she improve her skill at the game if he didn''t present a challenge. I understand him not wanting to make her mad... but I don't really know if Kagome would get upset over a game of "Go" I would hope she wouldn't. I mean he could have just offered to teach her what he remembered instead of doing what he was doing. Sometimes I don't think either one of those two think clearly. *sigh* Anyway great chapters can't wait for more.
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Title: New Fan
Reviewed By: Sci-Jess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 22:25 CDT
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Very cute chapter I really enjoyed it. Its to bad it was not Sess and Inu. That would been very interesting. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: InuGirlTeen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 21:44 CDT
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Loved the update! I want more soon and if you like I will keep my eye out for any more little mistakes. i hope you continuw to write and that you update soon. I really need to update my fic. It has been such a long time that I forgot what it was about! Now that is pretty bad! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 20:34 CDT
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I love this fic.. have i reviewed that before? Anywho, glad you're still writing it. ^_^ /snicker/ and i love the thought that fluffy-sama had to learn of honor from a FLEA! ~Caliko
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Title: New Fan
Reviewed By: Sci-Jess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this chapter very much.I hope that Kagome's statement will be a reality not only for Inuyasha but for Sesshoumaru too. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: March 31, 2004 18:15 CST
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That was a powerful chapter. I wonder does Sesshoumaru loves anything know. How old is Rin in this story. Could Sess find love again? Update soon.
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