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Reviewed By: Ithilelda [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 19:10 CDT
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Reviewed By: Stephanie B. On: May 10, 2004 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that was just plain mean. How could you leave us hanging like that. I want to read more, and I'm not a patient person! Please hurry up and write fast! I really like this story! I'll be waiting!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: May 10, 2004 17:41 CDT
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'sniff, sniff' Please I want more.
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Title: me again...u_uU
Reviewed By: Hino Mitsukiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 16:50 CDT
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Oh, and about Sesshoumaru and OOCness...yes, he's out-of-character...If he were truly in-character, he would've killed (insert the dude's name here cos I can't for the life o' me remember it) as soon as he arrived. Yes, I know it doesn't fit in with the rest, but just mentioning it. Jaa na (see ya).
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Reviewed By: Hino Mitsukiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Evil. That's what you are. Evil. eeeevil. Makin' a cliffy like that. Now then, on to the actual review *sighs* I hate having to make sense. First of all, your writing style is great. It's descriptive, but not too descriptive so it's boring to read, that's very good. Good plot 'twists', makes the story that much more enjoyable to read (even the cliffies >|). Now about the grammar/spellings...There are...some minor mistakes. Using wrong spellings and such, but it's not too bad. About teh Japanese/names....*sighs* Here's a site that'll help alot: http://www.wot-club.org.uk/Inuyasha/ it has the original translations and scans from the very first volume of Inuyasha, until the latest chapters that Takahashi writes/draws, and it's updated every week. You can catch up on your Inuyasha there, but start from Volume 1, because the anime......just plain sucks. As does the Viz manga. Name spellings: Sesshomaru = Sesshoumaru; Kikyo = Kikyou; Myoga = Myouga; also, it's not Iron Reaver Soul Stealer, it's Sankon Tessou (Soul Shattering Iron Claw). If you want the blood blades attack, it's Hijin Kessou (Airborne Blade Blood Claw), not Claws of Blood. About Sesshoumaru's 'whip attack'...he has none. The creators of the anime made it up. His actual attack, is the Dokkasou (Toxic Flower Claw), where his claws become poison. Also, it's Ah-Un, not Ah-Uhn, but that's a minor thing. I could go on and on with the minor mistakes in Japanese, but I won't because then mediaminer'll prolly delete my review...Basically, it's a great story, and I hope you can update soon. Ah, i'm only reviewing on this chapter cos I just finished reading your story, so yeah...Ganbare zo. (good luck!) Oh, and please tell your daughter that that was a wonderful poem =)
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: May 10, 2004 13:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! I've been waiting for this forever! *sniff* so happy! lol ^^
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Reviewed By: PJ On: May 10, 2004 11:34 CDT
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Yay!! I was just checking the site real quick before I left today and found the new chapter. Great chapter *sniffle* loved the whole thing. Kagome was great the way she supported Inuyasha and then just kind of stayed in the background and let Inuyasha greet his family. I like how you have Sessy standing back and letting Inuyasha have his due. This is such a wonderful story sorry for the short review but gotto go. Update when you can
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: May 04, 2004 20:04 CDT
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I hope that next chapter will involve the actual meeting. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: PJ *again* On: May 04, 2004 18:27 CDT
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i just read the last chapter again and then thought about my review and I take back what I said about Inuyasha commenting on Kagome's clothes. While it would have been nice it would have been out of character for Inuyasha he would not make a comment like that in front of others except maybe 'feh' or maybe a rude comment. He might make a comment when he is alone with Kagome and then again maybe not.
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Title: Newly Addicted Reader
Reviewed By: phoenixfire17 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! I just started reading this story, and I just have to say that I'm hooked. I finally got caught up, and I now need more to read! I love your latest chapter (21) and it was great when Kagome punched out that Riochi girl (Riochi deserved it in my opinion)! I loved it. Also, when Jaken was mistaken for a child, I burst out laughing! And I also like the past you gave Sesshomaru. It's so sad...I actually cried when I read the "Memories" chapter. Well, that's all I have to say about that...Continue with this great story and update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: PJ On: May 03, 2004 16:14 CDT
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Oh I forgot one thing that I thought would have been nice for the chapter. Kagome commented on how nice Inuyasha looked it would have been nice if Inuyasha had said something about Kagome's clothes. I know sounds rather 'selfish' but has he ever seen her in anything besides her 'normal clothes' maybe it is just because he is nervous. But did she have to sit him in his new clothes I think she needs to learn a bit of restraint on using that word it seems like everytime he does something "she" thinks isn't right or irritating she 'sits' him. I can see what you mean about her not being as mature as she could be. I guess she hasn't realized that Inuyasha didn't have as much formal training as others he had to grow up by himself he didn't have anybody to teach him the finer things. But it also sounds like he may have gotten some of his impatience from his mother's side. Here I am babbling again *sorry* I am going now.
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Reviewed By: PJ On: May 03, 2004 16:04 CDT
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Great chapter! i like how you are writing Sessy (I call him that because I can't spell his name correctly without looking it up) He is still a bit stuck up and thinks of people/humans as being below him but he has grown to find out that there are some that are not. I guess those few made a heck of a good first impression so he didn't kill them right to start with. Now you have me wondering who else is waiting to see Inuyasha. Someone that has waited 50yrs I can only think of one person but I thought things had been settled between them early in the story or even in the prequel? hhmmmm.... you really have me wondering now. (not sure if that is a good thing or not) I liked how you had Kagome admit not liking to wear those kinds of clothes and why. To tell the truth I don't know how I would deal with wearing those kinds of clothes either. Being a girl I still prefer jeans and sometimes shorts but skirts/dresses bleck!! I wear them if it is required but if I can get by with pants then I do. BTW: I am glad you do not take my reviews as flames because I meant no offense I was just stating my opinions and some frustrations because sometimes it seemed things were not explained to a certain time traveling crazy girl. This is a wonderful story and I hope to see you update soon.
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: April 30, 2004 16:32 CDT
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Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Geoffrey Meeks On: April 29, 2004 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
so far this book is ok i like it ps i think robert jordan is cool i am readin his book right now "eye of the world"
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Reviewed By: InuGirlTeen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 20:31 CDT
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Thanks for mentioning my site! I also want to say that the last chater had a great ending! it was sooooo funny! Plz update soon!
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