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Reviewed By: phoenixfire17 (nli) On: July 02, 2006 13:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Never fails to amaze me at how good this story is. ^_^
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Reviewed By: brazen thought On: June 30, 2006 23:57 CDT
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I truly hope that Yukiho does not get off for what she has done to Inuyasha. Just because her kids are starting to get close to the Inu brothers, does not mean that she should be excused for the crime that she has commited. That would only suggest that anyone can get away with doing that. I don't even think she should be allowed to live, and eventually be happy seeing Inuyasha anytime she wanted. She really should be put to death, of course that is just my opinion on that matter. Sorry, but I hate the idea of someone getting off with a slap on the wrist for rape. Besides Yukiho is not a nice person. She already showed that in doing what she did to Inuyasha, plus she was trying to get Shippo to side with her in order to gain Inuyasha's trust. She does not seem like she wants to give up on him no matter what. I really hope Seshoumaru does execute her. After all Yukiho is no different than Onigumo, and he should know that.
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Title: continue!
Reviewed By: AngieBaby On: June 30, 2006 01:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to make it so that damn bitch konishi or watever, the women who claims to be inuyasha's mate, and then, make kagome mate inuyasha. Then if you want make some fluff about sessho/takara, if you feel up to it, make sango and miroku have a realtionship! IDC, asd long as you get konishi or the bitch who says shes inuyashas mate dead, and make kagome mate inuyasha, but tns of lemons! THANK YOU!!!!!!!!
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Title: THANKYOU!!!
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING . WE WERE KINDA WORRIED THAT YOU WASN'T GOING TO PUT OUT ANOTHER CHAPTER. I DO HATE THE WAY KAGOME ACT IN THE BEGINING SHE SHOULD BE MORE MATURE THAN THAT. I THOUGH SHE WOULD KNOW THAT SHE IS TO KNOW TO BE A DEMONS MATE, AND REMEMBER THAT SHE IS NOT IN HER WORLD. I STILL CAN'T BELIVE THAT INUYASHA WAS RAPE AND HAVE A CHILD. WHAT ARE THEY GOING TO DO WITH HER? JUST WONDERING BUT SHOULDN'T KAGOME HAVE TAKING OFF THE NECKLACE? EVEN AFTER WHAT HAPPPEN WITH THE WOLF SHE STILL DID NOT TAKE IT OFF. DOES SHE NOT TURE INUYASHA? WHEN DOES INUYASHA GET TO KILL THE REST OF THE WOLFS? I DID NOT MEAN THIS TO BE RUDE JUST ASKING. I HOPE SESSHOMARU FINDS HAPPINESS. PLZ UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: phoenixfire17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 15:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're right, it wasn't up to standard, but it was still written very well! Glad to see you back at the writing desk. Be well!! :D
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Title: Renion
Reviewed By: Jennuyashalove On: February 10, 2006 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is really good. The grammer was perfect including the rest of the stuff. You should write more to the story. Everything was written really well. p.s. good luck in writing the rest of the story.
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Reviewed By: perfect little girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 01:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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you need to update this is one of the best inuyasha fics i've read!!!
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Title: ....meow
Reviewed By: Mikage Aya On: December 21, 2005 14:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it very much. It is a really well conected with the manga and it is very creative. the fact that Seshoumaru had a life and is showing quite a loot of emotion is superb!! two thiumbs up for you! Keep at it...I just wished that Inuyasha would be a little morecaring with Kagome. Like sharing some good kisses...that would deepen the feeling og the story. As a tip- as I'm also a writter- it works better to consentrate attention on a particualr discussion or explanation or piece of action when the characters envolved are not so many. When they are so many the action turns slow and you sort of get torned up appart tring to twist your afection to one of them, which always happens. Try that bit. I love Takara's character. I had an idea for a fanfic pretty close in base to yours. If you're interested in hearing more, email me to hikarisama.lorena@gmail.com I'd be a pleasure to know the one who writes such good fanfiction.
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't know you were a guy... oh, right... thats not the point. point is: I just read the 40 chapters and I must say... well done! outstanding! woo hoo! please write more! your on my favorites list! PS: When do Inu and Kag get to mate 'officially'?
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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 04:18 CST
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I hope that you'll update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: DragonChic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 02:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was sooo good/sweet please update soon real soon k keep writeing
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Title: I'm Blown Away!
Reviewed By: D-Chan3 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 16:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I'm really blown away by your story. This is one of the best that I've read and I'd put it right up there with Krista Perry's Hearts of Ice! Even better than THE WHITE DOG! I really can't wait to see what happens next and I do hope that you'll update as soon as you can. I think you should also post this to Fanfiction.net!
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Title: Reviewed
Reviewed By: phoenixfire17 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, man! It has been way too long since the last time I have reviewed this fic. Sorry! I just got caught up, and I still love your writing. Just have to get that out first thing. Second, keep up the awesome work. Last, more frequent updates! :) Ta-ta.
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Title: o.o
Reviewed By: RayGirl (me again!) On: July 08, 2005 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG UPDATE!!!! (And brooke I saw that 'F' in the middle of your OMG...>_>) what will Kagura do!? What will Kagura do!? *bows* Almight lrod of fanfiction, *takes out cross* By the power of kami-sama I pray no writer's block or arm/hand injuries fall over you.
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Reviewed By: inugirlteen (nli) On: June 20, 2005 01:46 CDT
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KAGURA! OMFG! Kagura/Sesshomaru is my all time favorite pairing! I have to see what's gonna happen!
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