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| "A New Sibling" Reviews/Comments [ 87 ] | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] | Title: great!
Reviewed By: do_u_have_2_no On: June 30, 2004 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! Kuzume and Sesshomaru are EXACTLY like Kuzume and her boyfriend! we were spying on her once, and she did almost EXACTLY what you did in i think chapter 8! awesome! well, Ayumu and Suzuka have awesome personalities, PLEASE keep up your work! see yas!
| Title: cool!
Reviewed By: Inyomaru (not logged on) On: June 30, 2004 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! this is awesome! I'm one of Kuzume's friends, and Santa Claus, me, Kuzume, and some of her other friends are sleepin' over! so, we'll all send you reviews! (we read it together) Nice way to torture Inuyasha! Poor Sesshomaru! How come Suzuka has to be so mean?
| Title: yay! I'm back on!
Reviewed By: Santa Claus On: June 30, 2004 23:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
awesome story Yuki, or so Kuzume tells me to call you. Please update, and trust, me, Kuzume bugs me about updating if I don't tell her the latest, and god is she annoying. Please update soon! I'll try to keep up the reviews! Oh, I wonder what Kuzume's reaction to Naraku will be! Can't wait!
| Title: okay, it's been EXACTLY a month Yuki.
Reviewed By: TaiyoukaiKuzumeoftheeasternlands [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 23:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
would you PLEASE update?! I'm getting tired of this! I've been waiting forever!!! HURRY!!!!!
| Title: translation
Reviewed By: TaiyoukaiKuzumeoftheeasternlands [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 14:33 CDT
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Title translation: uome Review translation: You owe me another chapter and you haven't update in almost two months. fdsavgjhreaiduvgdfsvgnfdxhnb ;ouhrtAEHBJNMR hbROEjgHBNORhjy4mn bvij5gmy,h nbyio45eyaIU5DGERJGNKHBVN FRR RGHNRFHBJnbgfhbzdjhbnzrfihtojnz;nhmtiro;jh translation: bye.
| Title: sd;fjfaoirafmg
Reviewed By: TaiyoukaiKuzumeoftheeasternlands [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 14:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
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| Title: tears?
Reviewed By: rfpirecat :) On: June 03, 2004 00:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
um.... how come Ayumu was crying and Kuzume wasn't? I mean, Kuzume had had the flashback of her mother dying, and Ayumu had something a bit less, which was seeing her cousin (at age ten) injured. I wonder why Kuz (sorry, i like that nickname for Kuzume) wasn't crying. Has she gotten the trend to hide her emotions like Sesshomaru??? well, sweet supreme, Kuzume and icecream!
| Reviewed By: rfpfirecat :) On: May 30, 2004 22:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
yo, if your sisters are botherin' you, and they hog the computer, send em' to me, I'll have my paintall gun and possibly a huge amount of demon energy added to it, and that'll teach em' not to mess with me as i eagerly wait for you to update. Those annoying sisters should be thrown into the celll Suzuka and Ayumu put SEssy in when they first got back. THey deserve it. But anyways, nice descriptions, and i can't wait till' the next chappy! don't forget to e-mail mwa! :) thanx! rfpfirecat
| Title: great!
Reviewed By: rfpfireacat :) On: May 30, 2004 21:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh, besides my continuous torture of you giving me cliffies, that chapter was awesome!! man, i L-U-V love it! puh-lease update soon! ASAP to be exact. Now you are almost up to me with my story, I've already finished chapter 23. Now if you could update right now...
| Title: what?! you are sooo mean!
Reviewed By: rfpfirecat :) On: May 30, 2004 21:44 CDT
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I can't believe you! you- you- cut me off right at the best part!! you are so evill!!!! grrr!!!! it's not fair *sobs* I want more!! (I know, i'm acting like a spoiled brat, but you OWE ME ANOTHER CHAPTER!!) until you update, i shan't give another chpater. NONE! caput. u r so meen. i curse u 4 leevin' me a cliffy! I WILL have my revenge.
| Title: 21?
Reviewed By: rfpfirecat :) On: May 26, 2004 00:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey, i have written you at least 2 reviews! (not including this one) wow! :)
| Title: what?
Reviewed By: rfpfirecat :) On: May 26, 2004 00:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
what? i have no idea... hmm... whatever...
| Title: umm... boredom?
Reviewed By: rfpfirecat :) On: May 26, 2004 00:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
wut's up? I'm bored, and I just read every single review over again, along with the first four chapters, and might I add VERY throughly... anyways, i'm extremely impatient, and I am beggining to wonder whether or not I'll stay awake in the night during this long summer, cause' on tuesdays and thursdays i got to get up at 8 to teach a little girl martial arts, and on mondays wednesdays and fridays i take kickboxing, which is harder than my advanced class in martial arts, and i spend two hours a day there anyways, and it's a killer!!! i don't know how'll i'll survive!! the pain is the utmost severe! ahhh!! *ahem* oh well, i'll soon get over it. bye!
| Title: pasta, oh! and R&R
Reviewed By: rfpfiecat boo! On: May 19, 2004 01:57 CDT
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Okays, so I just read your whole story again, and it is around oh, 2:54 a.m. Pasta! and I think you should have on the other side of this tale for AYumu to wake up after that Dream/Flashback (if you haven't noticed, Kuzume was having the death of her mother replayed, and Ayumu was replaying in her mind about Suzuka getting hurt. Oh, just to et you all know, Kuzume was 21 when her mother died, and just before that, her brother disappeared and so did her father around when she was 18, so she was very young, to human AND youkai standards, although she may seem very mature in some cases...) and Kuzume to stay asleep, trapped in the horrible memories of her past. (I know, I'm so evil to my characters...) well, pasta!!! whoop, rfpfirecat
| Title: confusion again... *sigh*
Reviewed By: rfpfirecat :) On: May 12, 2004 21:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh, um... who was having the flashbacks? obviously it was i Sesshpmaru's POV.... but he was settling his own matters with *cough* Miroku *cough*... and I'm guessing Ayumu was having the flashback of the other one.... right... *ahem* please explain, I'll be waiting... and then you'll get MY next chapter! :)
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