| "A New Sibling" Reviews/Comments [ 87 ] |
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Title: ha ha ha ha ha ... what?
Reviewed By: rfpfirecat :) On: May 12, 2004 21:46 CDT
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Kudos/Moi/yo! um.. where those flashbacks? Beacuse I recognize the one with Kuzume. I was confused. Oh, Miroku-SEsshomaru.... ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!!!! that was soooo funny!! thanks for FINALLY UPDATING TAIYOUKAI!!! :) rfpfirecat :)
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Title: what about my powers?!
Reviewed By: rfpfirecat :) On: May 03, 2004 14:26 CDT
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hey, you know about the powers I have already, but why didn't you use them in the chapter? It would have made a greater battle scene (not as if it wasn't already great enough ^__^), you know, with Kuzume's fire spin and all? well, I know why Kuzume recieved a chuckle from the NP (naraku puppet) and for those who don't know.. um... i don't know if our author here wants you to know yet... she'll probably put that up in the next chapter, which will probably be quite soon I might add, since we have each other in a lock with our fan fictoins, which i have to send through e-mail since i can't get my account activated yet... unfortunately.. :( well, your chapter was great! I can't wait to see what happens next! ;)
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Title: r&r
Reviewed By: rfpfirecat:) On: May 01, 2004 01:24 CDT
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hey! you're doing great! I like that description of the boiling felsh on Ayumu! it's awesome! i curse you for the clifyy!! please update soon! :) whoop, rfpfirecat
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Title: r&r
Reviewed By: rfpfirecat:) On: April 29, 2004 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome fic by the way. you are a creative writer and i luv it soo much! Kagura can never learn can she? wait, let me rephrase that. NARAKU will never learn. Even after Kuzume's affairs with him. maybe that's the reason he's a snot nosed jerk. I would too i mean gettin' dumped by a girl is the last thing on a boy's mind when they are so "deeply" in love. oh, for all you who are reading this, Kuzume had a love affair with Naraku, but she didn't like him and dumped him. Harsh, i know, and Naraku still cares for her, and Kuzume is acquanted with him, and she couldn't possibly kill him. She could severly injure him, but she would never kill. it's just the way she is. :)
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Title: magic..
Reviewed By: rfpfirecat:) On: April 29, 2004 14:11 CDT
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sooo... how did ayumu get back up? um.. was she helped by you-know-who from my e-mail? (if you remember the healing powers..) wel... please answer? i'm confused.
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Title: missed one....
Reviewed By: rfpfirecat:) On: April 23, 2004 00:04 CDT
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hey Taiyoukai!! you missed a translation! what about the end of chapetr where Kuzume yells, "You can't do that to him!" and Ayumu clicks her toungue and replies, "eh hem... oku eh tyna shouch"... also, um... my e-mail is down, and it hasn't come back on... but here's a cool idea: Ayumu and Suzuka come out one morning to sesshomaru's cell and see Kuzume staring at the door, which glowed green. (she was trying to get it open.) Suzuka and Ayuu had no idea what was going on, and tried to stop Kuzume (bad idea... the spell Kuzume was using is very poisionous..) and see what happens!! ideas are floating in my head!! well, whoop! W.B. Kuzume is thrown into the cell too, making quite a fuss about the door (eventually breaking it down O.o;;) sesshomaru and Kzuume sneak out of the citadels at night, and come back in the morning, throwing Ayumu and Suzuka in te dungeon, with a wall spell from Kuzume (whihc means not any matter of any form can pass through ^__^) well, bai!
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Title: weird... i'm gonna kill santa calus -.-
Reviewed By: rfpfirecat O.o On: April 21, 2004 21:39 CDT
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kudos friends, right santa claus.... "don't tell rfpfirecat i said that" and be quiet about my boyfriend!! Oh, good work i luvvv it taiayoukai!! keep up your super awesome story!! whoop! P.S. for all of you who are lost... i now start my e-mails or review with "kudos ..." and end it with "whoop! rfpfirecat" and i call the awesome author of this fan fiction "taiyoukai" so :) P.S.S. ~s.o.s. (save our squirrels) I am a official member of the S.S.A.A. (Squirrel saver association of america) those little fuzzy creatures are to die for!! :)
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Title: updates!
Reviewed By: santa claus On: April 20, 2004 22:26 CDT
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COOOLLL!! RFP told me all about your e-mails and i think your story is awesome!! good luck! oh, i really like Kuzume's attatchment to Sesshomaru! it really suits rfp and her boyfriend! don't tell hehr i said that ;) although they havnn'e k-i-s-s-e-d yet... or at least she has not yet told me O.o i'm gonna ask her. bai!
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Reviewed By: Wanderer On: April 13, 2004 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic throws an interesting spin on the Inuyasha universe and very enjoyable keep up the good work!
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Title: arms... oh..
Reviewed By: rfpfirecat:) On: April 10, 2004 22:44 CDT
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thanx for explaining! and the reason why i didn't read your updates are because my computer only goes to "Sesshoumaru?!!" and i have to go forward and sometimes it doesn't show up! so, i have to click it 700 times before it will do anything! so, keep updating!! don't forget to e-mail!! whoop! rfpfirecat
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Title: YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: rfpfirecat :) :) :) On: April 10, 2004 22:35 CDT
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I'M HAPPY! THAT IS A COOL CHAPTER!! I LUV IT I LUV IT I LUV IT I LUV IT I LUV IT.. (a million years later..) I LUV IT I LUV IT- *big breath* - I LUV IT!!!! YOU ARE SO COOL AND I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTER!! whoop! rfpfirecat :) p.s. my brother hit me in the thigh with a paintball today and it hurt really bad! it left a pepperoni! (a white sspot surrounded with a red colored ring. kind of like a bruise.) paintball is fun!!
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Title: B-O-R-E-D!!!
Reviewed By: rfpfirecat:) On: April 09, 2004 22:48 CDT
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If i could tell you how utmost bored i a, i would. it is 11:47 and i am ripping out my hair. i have no clue what to due! i meant do. oh well. please update!!! i am b-o-r-e-d!!! puh-lease!! whoop! rfpfirecat
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Title: go to go!
Reviewed By: rfpfirecat :0 On: April 02, 2004 14:08 CST
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I will be back at my reg. time so bye bye!! from, rfpfirecat!!
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Title: umm.... NC (no comment)
Reviewed By: rfpfirecat :) On: April 02, 2004 14:07 CST
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i don't know what i'm writing my 15th review for... I just want to!! if i ever get that stupid password i'll go and put up my fan fictions!! (i already have been writing a book full of them ^__^) so.... i can't wait for the next chappy!!! from, you know who has written to you 15 times ^_^
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Title: umm.... NC (no comment)
Reviewed By: rfpfirecat :) On: April 02, 2004 13:46 CST
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i don't know what i'm writing my 15th review for... I just want to!! if i ever get that stupid password i'll go and put up my fan fictions!! (i already have been writing a book full of them ^__^) so.... i can't wait for the next chappy!!! from, you know who has written to you 15 times ^_^
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