| "'Til You Return to Me" Reviews/Comments [ 95 ] |
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Reviewed By: scarletraven1001* On: July 01, 2004 00:42 CDT
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the last thing on my mind... so cute!!! anyway, this was a really fluffy chap! which is good in my opinion by the way. hehe... i loved the miroku/sango scene, and i think you really captured inu and kag's stubbornness with this chap. i loved it! haikuuuuus! gotta have some haikuuus!
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Reviewed By: SakuraBaby [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoW! i never read a story that could so easily bring to me to tears! Ithank you so much fro writting this magnificent story and I truly hope you update soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: June 29, 2004 16:43 CDT
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well, I have a feeling Kagome will accept last minute...
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Title: Is fish had wings... would they want to fly?
Reviewed By: Fuyumiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 09:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! An update! *pops out confetti and corks open a bottle of champange* So happy- I love this chapter; very angtsy. I absolutely love the way you portray Kagome (her part was very deep; her conpemplation on herself- with the memories of earlier days; was a real insight). And InuYasha- you're going to make him marry Sango, aren't you? (or at least imply it or make Kagome turn absolutely tragic...) *bonks head* Optimistic thoughts, optimistic thoughts...
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Reviewed By: akuma_river (not signed in) On: June 28, 2004 07:16 CDT
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Love the chapter. When are they going to hook up? I mean it is such a sad story. I can understand her hesitation the first time but a second one? He raced from his home to her village the minute he heared about the attack. He was by her side til after she woke and even longer than that. He would have stayed with her if she had not pushed him away. *Sighs* They both love each other and yet are both afraid. Don't they know that there comes a time to cast away all doubt and just jump into the water? Nothing in life worthwhile is easily gained. Nothing ventured, nothing gained. They need to just admit to each other that they love each other, before Naraku comes back. For now he knows about their love, he will find out about her weakened powers, and once that happens she will be an open target. Love the story. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 00:06 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: scarletraven1001* On: May 27, 2004 18:45 CDT
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ugh! inuyasha could be such a jerk. i love your fic!!! i didn't get to go online for like, three weeks, and this is the first fic that i get to read!!! could my day get any better?! and about alt pairings, thank the GODS you go for inu/kag! aff.net has the most GRUESOME pairings... have you ever seen a kag/shippo? i nearly puked reading the summary. please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 23:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good. SO often I'll end up reading a fan fiction that's just not well written but this... This is Great. THe plot is awesome and the style is perfect. And as I just read the whole story tonight I have to tell you I LOVED the parts inspired by Much Ado About Nothing. It's one of my favorite Shakespeareian works and I laughed my ass off. I myself have been working on a version of As You Like It set in the old west, romance novel style. Too cool, darling. I hope you can write more soon, but I do understand a hectic schedual. I work full time and go to school part time as well and am presently preparing for my 11th interstate move. Writing takes time and from what you've written so far... Take all the time you need. But please continue this story!!!
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Reviewed By: smg1984 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!! I can't believe InuYasha is that insenstive, thinking Kagome can marry him just because her village was burned. It ridiculous. Did he get the full story of the battle? Does he know the extent of Kagome's powers? Keep updating!!
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Reviewed By: Dreamfox WindWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Inu... Poor Kag...DF:NO!!!! KOUGA CAN BARELY RUN A PACK! BUT THE EASTERN LANDS!HE ALREADY HAS MY SISTER!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 21:48 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: May 08, 2004 19:58 CDT
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I understand...
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Reviewed By: Emi-chan34 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 18:59 CDT
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KYAAAAAAH! *gives a crazy amizonian/japanese warcry* I -twitch- must control anger! -twitch- *breaks down* the insensitive bastard! what did he do, take classes on being horrible and snobbish? that... he... ooooooh! he makes me soooo mad! *grumbles to herself for a while*... *takes a deep breath*.... anyway, i was really excited when i saw that you had updated this story because its... guess what.... my birthday! SQUEE! I'm eighteen now! (*narrows eyes* yeah... i really am eighteen... you got something to say to me? *coughs* oop. sorry. most people are really shocked when i tell them that because i look and act quite a bit younger than that but cest la vie (*grows* i can't spell... did i get it right that time *evil little alter emichan voice pops up* not bloody likely you twit! *grows at her other condescending personality* shut up!) ack! i'm still writing in another parenthesis thingie!) what was i saying *scrolls up* a ha! *scrolls back down* it's my b-day and i just know you updated especially for me! ;P I gots'ta be goin now. great chapter, you rock, and update soon or else i'll have to kick your arse as well as inuyasha's arse. *huge mallet appears in emichans hands as she grins maniacally (yup that alter ego has taken over once again...)* meh heh heh *chuckles evilly and suddenly gives a terrific warcry as she begins the hunt for Inuyasha's blood* KYAAAAAAAH! ....
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Reviewed By: (fireash) On: May 08, 2004 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i admit the explaination has a point...but still one chapter of fluff then back to angst talk about emotional rollercoaster for both characters. oh well isn't it fun to torture the characters...i do it all the time hehe. as long as it ends well. thanks for updating and can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: May 08, 2004 18:11 CDT
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Excellent chapter! I think you need more than wishes of good luck...sorry I can't be of more help...what I can say however is that you shouldn't worry about the time between updates. I don't want to go on about it but as you pointed out you have a lot going on and can't be expected to put it on hold. I hope that everyone else will agree with me in supporting this and waiting patiently for the next chapter. I hope it all goes well! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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