| "'Til You Return to Me" Reviews/Comments [ 95 ] |
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Reviewed By: Furys Canticle [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 19:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So the author wrote another chapter and there was much rejoicing. Yaaaay!!!! (imagines a certain scene in Monty Python and the Holy Grail. i love that movie.)Indeed another wonderful chapter has been churned out by Miss squeakyinuears. I loved it!!!!!!! Although my eyes nearlly popped out of the socket when Inuyasha left. He left!! I understand that that did seem where the plot was going but i can only wonder what you will write next. . . I can't wait to see. UPDATE SOON. . .pretty please, w/ sugar on top? come one please? You know we all love this story right? Please? (Do u think i wrote too much?)
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Title: White
Reviewed By: Fuyumiko (I think I'm getting used to the fact of not being logged in; ah laziness.) On: January 28, 2004 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Two words about the last chapter; tear jerker. Okay maybe more words and if i was the type of person to cry when I read something pretty sad (any read the 5th Harry Potter book? Didn't cry when my favorite character got killed off, oh the unfairness of it all! Then again nothing is fair...), but if I was I would be balling my eyes out (espeically the last part, my jaw went slack, I swear.) And I must say I was in bit of a shock when InuYasha left, all I could think was 'Oh dear god he's just leaving?!'. Now I'm over that and am hoping (is that how you spell it? I keep picturing little bunnies hopping...wait I think I answered my own question...) you update soon 'cause me and many others (who should review, dammit!) love your fanfic very much! And yes, the 'Fuyu' in my name does mean winter...(I don't think many know that ^.^) though I do believe there is another word for winter too...Ame? No that means...rain...I think I got mixed up with the word 'snow' too...hmmm...
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Reviewed By: scarletraven1001 *notsignedin On: January 25, 2004 17:57 CST
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aaaah!!!! she said no!!! oh my god! she said no! *bursts into tears* WHY??!!! im ok now... but really, oh man, what a kicker! i DESPERATELY wanted her to say yes. but this is inu/kag, right? so he'll get her to sya yes, right? right? RIGHT?! gomen... im deperate. oh, you have got to update soon, or i risk losing my sanity!!!! scarlet^_^
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Reviewed By: Furys Canticle [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 13:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoooHooo!!! **does a dorky dance**A new and awesome chapter. :D I love this story!! anyways, u were completly right with the waiting for the romance thing. Has no one ever notice that if you push the characters 2gether in fanfic so close the the beginning the climax of the story is pretty much gone. Instant gratification isn't as good as the anticipation of an event. some people may not have the patience for the wait but it is always well worth the time. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! (is that hypocritical w/ the whole patience thing i just said? Naww.) ;)
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Title: Oh...just wow...wow
Reviewed By: Fuyumiko (not logged in, again- I know the password is somewhere on wordpad...) On: January 24, 2004 12:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic chapter! I am very glad you didn't have Kagome say yes to InuYasha's 'proposal', it was speedy and I was about to scream and pull my hair out if she said yes (and I really did not want to do that)plus it had 'awkard' written all over it (*sweatdrops*). And I can't help wonder what Kagome had to do...I know it was probably the usual chores she does, but I was curious if maybe you had snuck Kouga into the fic? (It would be very interesting if Kagome met him...and Kouga acted like...err Kouga). Well, anyway I hope you update soon! (You like update every weekend it seems)And now I must prepare my leave for the libarary (that word I don't think I'll ever spell right)and then the horror of family photos (my mother gets annoyed sometimes when she sees me; says I should stop wearing only black; I wear blue though! She is just never around when I do wear it..eh heh), hope I show up on the film...
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Reviewed By: Dreamfox WindWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 11:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah...the plot thickens.UPDATE!!!please.;)
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: January 24, 2004 10:44 CST
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ARG NO! SHE CAN'T SAY THAT!!! SHE HAS 2 EXCEPT!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
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Reviewed By: scarletraven1001 *notsignedin On: January 19, 2004 20:10 CST
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haha! wow, that was naughty! i wonder what inuyasha will do after that "heart to heart" that he had "overheard"! i'm loving this fic. please update soon! im dying to know what they will put up for kagome!
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Reviewed By: Furys Canticle [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 19:03 CST
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I really do like this fic. *prances around exclaiming the joy FC has everytime 'till you return to me is updated* I was falling off my seat at IY trying to be a crow. Please-Please-Please update again, soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dreamfox WindWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHA!!Please continue:D
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Reviewed By: Eartha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2004 10:49 CST
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This was great!! I was laughing so hard I almost fell out of my chair. I can't wait till the next chapter. Keep up the writing!
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Title: I wonder if...
Reviewed By: Fuyumiko (not logged in as you can see) On: January 17, 2004 10:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An update, alright! I loved what Miroku, Kaedae, and Shippo did to InuYasha (I had a hard time not trying to crack up and fall out the chair), the part when InuYasha had to pretand he was a 'crow' was pretty entertaining too. And I loved the ending; wonder how he reacts!
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Reviewed By: scarletraven1001 *not signed in* On: January 12, 2004 20:38 CST
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yay! an update! wow, i am soooo envius of you, you got to go and shop in china... i was supposed to go to tokyo for the vacation, but heck, somethng came up. no inuyasha stuff for this girl... gomen, i was rambling. haha! anyway, great chap, as always! keep it up, coz i'm looking forward to what happens next! i love this fic!
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Reviewed By: (fireash) On: January 11, 2004 15:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked this one. i couldn't stop laughing when shippou said that her scent changed. hahaha. i think more people should review this story. it is really good. hope to read more soon.
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Title: Wow, you went to China...
Reviewed By: Fuyumiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 11:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright an update! *spirits lift up* I love updates! (I really need to get a bumper sticker that says that...) Anywho glad your back from China (and updating! Yay!) and I hope you update soon (and often...)
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