| "'Til You Return to Me" Reviews/Comments [ 95 ] |
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Reviewed By: Fuyumiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 09:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! update! *dances with joy; trips* Wow that was a great chapter; I am so relieved InuYasha isn't going to 'marry' Sango. ^.^ Poor Kagome though, she must have very serious injuries if she's 'wrapped up like a mummy'. I also liked that last part when InuYasha came (least I believe it was him...)and caught Kagome- bet she was really suprised. Hope you update again sometime soon.
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Title: you're the greatest!
Reviewed By: scarletraven1001* On: March 03, 2004 23:31 CST
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this story is waaaay cool! i don't know what i'd do if you suddenly stopped updating... but you're not that cruel, right?! anyway, great chap. so that's what he was planning... for a second in the last chap i thought you might turn this inu/san all of a sudden. i've been seeing too much of those lately. i'm glad you're keeping the characters with their original love interests. and they're also in character, and if anyone says otherwise, they'll answer to ME! *lightning, thunder and maniacal laughter in the background* keep up the great job, and please update asap!
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Reviewed By: Beautifulfaerie logged out On: March 02, 2004 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey another great chapter, well I'm anxious to know what happens next so update soon, Keep it up, I love your story
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Reviewed By: Amber Wolf On: March 02, 2004 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fan fiction and think your a very good writer i cant wait til the next chapter is up
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 19:49 CST
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*grumbles* I hope so... So Kagome is losing her powers. That will be a sufficent weakness, expecially with the fact that Kagura knows that Inuyasha loves Kagome, they'll use that against him sometime.
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Title: Now that was just wonderful!!!
Reviewed By: Furys Canticle [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again it takes me so long to read my favorite story! My internet is totally against me and decided to go wonky. $#%^&%#$ AOl 6.0 ::dramatic sigh:: Who knows when once again I shall be online. . .anyways lovely chapter. Sitting on the edge of my seat is just so painful that -::thud:: Ouch! I fell off?! Again?! This can't be good for my lower back. But really the suspense is almost palpable. I noticed Sango in the earlier chapter so when she came back again I was like wait wasn't she the messenger? So confused sometimes. I can't wait to see how you tie this all in. And now that Kagome's hurt . . . very interesting indeed. I thought I could guess correctly at a lot of story arcs but you always surprise me. Oh and bty all the luck on the grade/money/scholarship problem. I'm going to have to pay my way through college and even with the money i'm saving now. . . well lets just say I feel your pain in a way. Great! Great! Great! chapter i might add again and again and again. Never stop writing. I love reading this story as it unfolds. UPDATE SOON. I beg of thee. for i fear if not thy inspiration might flee! ^_^ had to put some weirdness in there or it wouldn't me, ne? Much support!!! ^_^
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Title: Jaw
Reviewed By: Fuyumiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2004 23:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Kagome I hope she'll be okay; I wonder how InuYasha will react to this. Thank you for updating too! Now I know a bit of your 'status' I won't be as worride (everyone fears that their favorite fanfiction author will die before finishing their fic- Ouch big jinx) if you don't update so soon. I didn't notice sango was in here before either, I think I'll reread and see if I can catch it. Anyway, good luck with your classes and job(s)!
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Title: ^^ Great! ^^
Reviewed By: Furys Canticle [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 15:31 CST
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Its taken me two whole days to find again and get around to reading the newest update of this story. Gwaaaah!!! ::mumbles:: mother. . .blocking emails. . .parental controls. . .load of bull. . .too old. . .::Mumbles:: ::Mumbles:: But it was totally worth it. The twist with Sango was completely unexpected. I thought for sure it would be Kikyo.. Awesome story arc!! Bravo for sure. Do i see some Miroku/Sango pairing in the future, perhaps? I hope so. I love this story, I say yet again. Cliffies are especially good and all but . . .please, please, please UPDATE SOON. Sitting on the edge of one's seat is painful for long periods of time.
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: wrathchylde [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 21:27 CST
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I'm thoroughly enjoying this storyline. Keep with it. ^^
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 20:27 CST
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... you're kidding, right? Sango... gee, I didn't say 'no comment' in my review. First time today... It's hard to type and sing at the same time.
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: February 05, 2004 20:35 CST
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wow... I really like this *eyes pop open* unfortunately, I have to go to bed now ;_;. Pauvre moi...
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Title: I'm almost speechless...almost and my mind clearly bleeps out- "Huh?"
Reviewed By: Fuyumiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 17:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*pales* Well that certainly wasn't how I expected Sango to come into the story... I can't help wonder if they'll actually get wed though... considering this is an I/K fic as you've said...er written. I was sort of expecting some random girl or Kikyo(?). And I must say I'm ver pleased you've added Kagura to this fic; she's my second favorite character, also one of my friends had the silly habit of starting to call me by that (it can be embarassing; people ask questions). And I really hope you don't kill her off... also what you said about Kagome and about her powers, it reminds me of the manga Fushigi yugi...yup one of the priestess was warned not to elope or preform anything like that with anybody because of the same reasons...or something like that. Anyway, loved the chapter (though I was really shocked when I found out the girl was Sango, half of me was expecting it, but the other was denying it). Hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: ScarletRaven1001 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 18:40 CST
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yeah, that answered it... oh, what a tearjerker! no, no, i've just got somethingin my eye... who am i kidding, i'm such a crybaby! great chapter! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Btfl_Fairy On: February 01, 2004 01:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well its me BeautifulFaerie, I'm didn't sign in yet, but whatever, I really like your story, infact I love it and I'm waiting for updates, so keep writing, I love your story!! the last few chapters almost made me cry, well enough said, bye
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Title: Your incredible!
Reviewed By: Dreamfox WindWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 18:21 CST
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I really love how you acknowledge your reviewers at the end, its fun to see your name in other peoples stories! ^_^
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