| "'Til You Return to Me" Reviews/Comments [ 95 ] |
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Reviewed By: cHaOs3035 On: October 12, 2004 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story before but if you feel this is necessary then please go right ahead. I know what it's like to look back on your story and finding a lot of issues with it, i know because i have taken my story down several times and I highly support your decision to redo the story. Either way I know I'll love it. Always, Lady
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Reviewed By: Lady_iNs On: October 12, 2004 14:35 CDT
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Title: Sad
Reviewed By: animefan8581 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 01:25 CDT
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I just finished reading your fic and I got to say it is great. But I am quite sadden that you haven't updated yet. Please update soon ^-^
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Title: same
Reviewed By: terr On: August 05, 2004 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I truly like this story and have been waiting for your update since jul 1st. I don't know why you are revising the already posted chapters because the story is wonderful as it is. But it would be nice that you would continue with the story and post the next chapter instead of rewriting what is already posted. thank you
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 11:30 CDT
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kidding bout inu busting through walls. but you should let that happen somewhere in the story. i like when that happens...hehehe
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep going. your story is so good and intersting. i like how inuyasha bust through the wall. wow. that was funny. he really kicked those guys butts. please keep going. i really enjoy this fic.
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Title: i soo LOVED IT!!!!
Reviewed By: hglover2 On: July 19, 2004 15:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. i loved the awsome story. u have very nice long chapters. i read ur story so far in 1 day.(took me a long time though). oh pleaze update soon. and i hope everything goes well in college. oh and the way kag and inu love eachother is soo sweet. i hope kag says yes if he proposes again!!! well plz update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: ruinmew On: July 03, 2004 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this should be in graphic novel form good job ^_^
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Title: Got Angst?
Reviewed By: MsCongeniality [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 20:40 CDT
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Great chapter Squeaky :)
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: July 01, 2004 18:08 CDT
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Beautiful chapter as always. Loved the way that the plot is developing, liked the haiku as well. Like I keep saying son't worry about the delays, it happens. Life doesn't get put on hold because people are wating for an update. Hope the Japanese goes well, personally I hope to get a chance to learn it one day, or at least the spoken word. I don't think I could manage the written as well ^_^; Till next time good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: scarletraven1001* On: July 01, 2004 00:42 CDT
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the last thing on my mind... so cute!!! anyway, this was a really fluffy chap! which is good in my opinion by the way. hehe... i loved the miroku/sango scene, and i think you really captured inu and kag's stubbornness with this chap. i loved it! haikuuuuus! gotta have some haikuuus!
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Reviewed By: SakuraBaby [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoW! i never read a story that could so easily bring to me to tears! Ithank you so much fro writting this magnificent story and I truly hope you update soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: June 29, 2004 16:43 CDT
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well, I have a feeling Kagome will accept last minute...
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Title: Is fish had wings... would they want to fly?
Reviewed By: Fuyumiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 09:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! An update! *pops out confetti and corks open a bottle of champange* So happy- I love this chapter; very angtsy. I absolutely love the way you portray Kagome (her part was very deep; her conpemplation on herself- with the memories of earlier days; was a real insight). And InuYasha- you're going to make him marry Sango, aren't you? (or at least imply it or make Kagome turn absolutely tragic...) *bonks head* Optimistic thoughts, optimistic thoughts...
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Reviewed By: akuma_river (not signed in) On: June 28, 2004 07:16 CDT
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Love the chapter. When are they going to hook up? I mean it is such a sad story. I can understand her hesitation the first time but a second one? He raced from his home to her village the minute he heared about the attack. He was by her side til after she woke and even longer than that. He would have stayed with her if she had not pushed him away. *Sighs* They both love each other and yet are both afraid. Don't they know that there comes a time to cast away all doubt and just jump into the water? Nothing in life worthwhile is easily gained. Nothing ventured, nothing gained. They need to just admit to each other that they love each other, before Naraku comes back. For now he knows about their love, he will find out about her weakened powers, and once that happens she will be an open target. Love the story. Keep up the good work.
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