| "Internal Scars" Reviews/Comments [ 84 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 21:45 CST
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*gets out rubber mallet* *bops Ryou on the head* Look what you did, you dork-wad!!! Yer f*cking whining (oh Bakura, my life is so sad, who cares if yer having nightmares every night, my life is bad because my really hot-ass lover won't burden me with his nightmares) If it weren't for your damn whining, Bakura wouldn't have had to smack some sense into you, and wouldn't have felt bad about it, and wouldn't have run out right into the claws of Seto and the Pharaoh. Stupid dork. You better do something to get Bakura back. Because I do have a hikari zapper in here somewhere...
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 15:42 CST
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Don't do this to poor Baku-Chan! He doesn't deserve it!
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Title: dsfdss
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 14:58 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH, B-E-A UTIFUL fic! omg, i LOVE it, its soo good. a nice ass plot too. STUPID EVIL YAMI!! GRRRRRRRR... seto, i aint really got a beef against him, but still! GRRRRRR LEAVE BAKUCHAN ALONE!.. i hated the part where the guards raped him, wanted to strangle sumtin! and then his village was destroyed.. i wanted to cry, especially since their remains were used to create the millenium items. did i mention i love this fic?? lol.. and i like how malik loves baku, but marik loves malik..! YEA, thats wat im talking about! ha ha ryou got smacked.. UPDATE SOON!
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Title: WOW!!!!
Reviewed By: DieTryin116 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 22:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! One of my absolute faves so far! PLEASE KEEP WRITING! I beg you!!!
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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 23:53 CST
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grr...mrrg...rrkk *muffled sounds of frustration* must kill those two perverted freaks *takes out a pharaoh decapitator (hand axe) and a High priest pulverizer (meat grinder)* anybody for lunch? *heats up a frying pan* ^________^
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Title: keep um coming
Reviewed By: Riku_is_hot_2030 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 22:05 CST
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update soon. Evil Bastard Yami. Can I kill him? Grr hurting Bakura. He will pay for that dearly. I can't wait until yugi finds out. Then Yami will in for it. And I am willing to help!!
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Reviewed By: Fallin Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 20:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it just make sure Yami gets just deserts for hurting Bakure oh the sweatheart *is sniffling* the poor poor dear pleazse make Yami pay or my consios wont live with me *is whimpiring* its great i really reallylove it continue soon please *is begging on knees and still sniffling because of what they did to Bakura*
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 16:24 CST
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I don't want it to have a bad ending! Please make it a happy one!
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Reviewed By: Tamashii Densetsu On: March 04, 2004 20:34 CST
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It's getting started! Um, what shall I say...damn. I'm too tired right now. When you update again, I should have something to say. Sorry! Well, I do would like to say that it was quite...realistic, the torture...poor Bakura. *head pat* Let's go on a Yami-shootdown! It was funny! Good job!
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Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, GREAT story! Please continue, this is definitely going on my favourites! You really have everyone's characters down good.... but Yami is EVIL!! EEEVVVIIILLL!!!!!! Good job ^_^
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Reviewed By: Roppy3 On: February 22, 2004 21:59 CST
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eeh...all I can say is that ya it is getting better cuz sumthin is starting to happen and Yami is starting to scare me please dun make me die of an ulcer by making things happen too fast ...anywayz i wan u to continue tho... geez whut a cliffhanger...
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2004 22:23 CST
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Yami doesn't deserve Bakura, Bakura is sooo good! Normally, I hate Bakura a whole lot, but I've decided that Ryou is his reincarnation, so he can't be that bad!
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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 22:07 CST
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The evilness that is Yami. He thinks that Ryou's yami is bad. Well, at least he loves someone. Stupid pharaoh. He's probably just not getting any from Yugi! XP Please update! I didn't know that this plot twist was coming. ^__^
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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 11:19 CST
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I don't think it's off track. Love triangles are fun! Update soon! ^__^
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Reviewed By: galenhiril@hotmail.com On: February 08, 2004 23:42 CST
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Alrighty, I know that this is a strange request, but I was looking for your other fic that you mentioned in you little A/N at the beginning of this chapter. I really want to read it, but for some reason, I can't find it anywhere. If it's not too much trouble, could you email a link to that story! I really like your stuff and I would like to read it. Thank you!
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