| "Internal Scars" Reviews/Comments [ 84 ] |
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Reviewed By: J On: July 23, 2005 05:40 CDT
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This is nice, but you need to alter the paragraphing on the last chapter. You've got it all in one big lump and it's really hard to read.
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Reviewed By: SSCeles ^_^ On: July 15, 2005 22:26 CDT
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Getting bored of torturing Bakura? Hesitant to describe the mess? Yami can't stay away from Yuugi forever, something's got to give way in his plan. I'll IM you when I get the chance on msn again. --SSCeles
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Reviewed By: SSCeles ^_^ On: July 15, 2005 22:24 CDT
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Getting bored of torturing Bakura? Hesitant to describe the mess? Yami can't stay away from Yuugi forever, something's got to give way in his plan. I'll IM you when I get the chance on msn again. --SSCeles
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Reviewed By: bishie_no_aibou On: May 21, 2005 01:44 CDT
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you're joking, u cna't leave it there .. *pout* . i wanna read more .... sighs* there aren't very much uke bakuras around ... hehehe
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Reviewed By: Yakari Taito O_O On: May 14, 2005 00:34 CDT
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You're evil!! Poor Bakura! O_O
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Reviewed By: Hellz_Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's an awsome story really cool but it does make me sad at what kura goes through i'm also confused laxatives are diet pills to make sure u don't gain weight after eating a large quitaty of food how does this hurt kura it makes no sence???
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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 09:28 CDT
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*wipes silently crying eyes* Laxatives!! How could you!!! He'll die of dehydration! In fact, he'd probably prefer to be dead at this point. *brandishes chainsaw and splits Yami and Seto in half* *cuts through cage bars* *whisks Bakura away to secret hiding place where evil authoress will never find him* Phew, you need a bath, buddy! *gives Bakura a nice bath ^_______^* He's feeling much better now, thank you very much!! *decapitates evil authoress, and takes her head bowling* *Bakura just got a strike*
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Reviewed By: paniwi. On: May 11, 2005 03:09 CDT
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YOU UPDATED *jumps you and huggles you* oops, hehe sorry, poor Bakura, poor poor poor Bakura. Die evil pharaoh! DIE! plz update soon, somebody save Bakura! anyway, another great update!
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Title: *shocked*
Reviewed By: forever broken (not logged in...) On: May 11, 2005 02:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is way to good! please write some quicker! *jumps up and down excited* pretty please!! *puppy dog eyes* POOR bakura! why don't you let malik tell ryou about it.. *huggles bakura* poor poor bakura! and I just got the same question as paniwi.. why can't he contact him through their mind link? does he really need the ring for that? buh buy! *waves*
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Reviewed By: whieeeeeeeeeeeeeej On: February 27, 2005 14:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write further quick.. I just love this story (A)
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 07:16 CST
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yippee, you're back again. Poor poor Bakura. Thanks for the lesson btw. lil question though, can't kura contact Ryou through their mindlink or something? or does he needs the ring for that. anyway, plz update soon
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Title: wow..
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 22:55 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been a while. I'm glad for the update though. Poor Bakura, no longer strapped down to a table, but now in a cage. Anyway.. I've forgotten some of the details of the story, but I still have the basic concept in my mind. Nevertheless, I still love the story and want an update soon. And I know exactly what you mean. That happens to my dreams all the time. It sucks.. I like dreaming. Anyway, thanks for the little science class.. or whatever =P Update soon! =D
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Reviewed By: Yami Akila [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 18:18 CST
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You did it! You updated! I was worried for a while you weren't going to. (sorry about posting my reviews twice. I'm inexperianced at reviewing here.) Excellent story!
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Reviewed By: Yami Akila [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG UPDATE! SOMEONE SAVE MY POOR BAKURA!!! Yami is ruined for me now. *sob* Update or taste my wrath!! (I love your story. Particularly the lighter moments, like when Honda was chasing Jou. That's just like them Fantastic!) Don't worry Bakura! If Yami does anything more terrible than he already has I will beat the scummy bastar to DEATH! *huggles*
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Reviewed By: Yami Akila [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG UPDATE! SOMEONE SAVE MY POOR BAKURA!!! Yami is ruined for me now. *sob* Update or taste my wrath!! (Okay I love your sense of humor. Particularly the part where Honda is chasing Jou. Bravo!)
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