| "Internal Scars" Reviews/Comments [ 84 ] |
| Pages (6): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 6 > » ] |
Reviewed By: galenhiril@hotmail.com On: February 08, 2004 23:21 CST
Comment/Review:
very very very good... i love this story! And I didn't think that it was an odd chapter by the way (even though you claimed it to be in you A/N) I look forward to more chapters!
|
Reviewed By: Roppy3 On: January 26, 2004 21:57 CST
Comment/Review:
AAWWW.......POOR BAKU CHANNNNNN!!!!wwahhhh.......the guards don't deserve him!You write too convincingly!wwahhh...relieve him of his pain and give him to seto or jounouchi! at least seto k.is good at it! and hes so hottie that even guys can love him!!aww....poor baakuuucchannn.....
|
Reviewed By: JJStar Yami Karasu ( FF.Net. ) On: January 26, 2004 20:17 CST
Comment/Review:
Trow him to the guards! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Bakura: Heaven help me! PLEASE!!! But really youe story is really good, so much detail I could never even dream of writing this good. * reads more * PLEASE go on! YES throw him 2 the guards! Bakura: Nooooooooooooooooooo!
|
Reviewed By: JJStars Yami Karasu ( FFNet. ) On: January 26, 2004 20:14 CST
Comment/Review:
|
Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 19:50 CST
Comment/Review:
*huggles Baku-chan* All I have to say is, all of you are so mean who voted to throw him to the guards! Okay, it's angst, but nasty, filthy guards? Poor Baku-chan. I still love you.
|
Reviewed By: galenhiril@hotmail.com On: January 26, 2004 00:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Awwwwwwwwwwwww............ poor Bakura! I feel so sorry for him. I hope you coninue to write on this one, and I'm sorry that you didn't get as much feed back as you were hoping for. It was great though. Tell Bakura that I'm sorry for him, and that he is loved ;)
|
Reviewed By: galenhiril@hotmail.com On: January 25, 2004 23:14 CST
Comment/Review:
hmmmm.... such decisions ;) I think it would be kind of a cool twist if you threw him to Seto. Bakura certainly wouldn't like it, but the mental images are nice ;) lol... but you do what you want to do darlin, I'm sure whatever you write will be great, because this story is really good :)
|
Reviewed By: jenna On: January 22, 2004 23:34 CST
Comment/Review:
0.0 well....ehehehe, throw him 2 the guards!
|
Reviewed By: Roppy3 On: January 22, 2004 21:58 CST
Comment/Review:
umum...NOT SETO! YOU'LL RUIN HIM COMPLETELY! KEEP HIM SSTTRRIAAAIGGHT! PLLLEEAAASSE! *he killed a stupid guard! yay!* um... give him to the pharaoh!
|
Reviewed By: Roppy3 On: January 22, 2004 21:46 CST
Comment/Review:
That sucked sooo much! my god! that was so cheesy! ok just kidding that was for the steaks. um, i don't really want to say anything until i finish the story but uh...keep up the good writing?
|
Reviewed By: roppy3 On: January 22, 2004 21:27 CST
Comment/Review:
ya u write well...sorry, don't expect a lot from me i suck at writing.aww...ryou's so cute. ok i'll go read the next chap now
|
Reviewed By: Lady Sekhmet Ka (damn thing won't let me sign in!) On: January 21, 2004 22:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Toss him to the wolves! ^-^
|
Reviewed By: Tamashii Densetsu On: January 19, 2004 19:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Forgot to mention this--DON'T INCLUDE JONOUCHI. He's innocent! And I'd rather he be straight. And hate Mai. Evil Mai. Please heed me!
|
Reviewed By: Tamashii Densetsu On: January 19, 2004 19:23 CST
Comment/Review:
You ought to write humour fics....like with you writing a story with the yugioh guys and blah. Poor Tozoku-oh...How all the guards act, it seems like the world's going to the homos. Maybe that's why egyptians hate gays. If you send Bakura over to Seto, when Seto gets his memory he'll be too scarred for life and Mokuba will eat Bakura for being in the memory. And if you pit him to Seto, that'll make him a bi. To Amanda's delight. And the guards are already that mean and gay and horrible. Let Seto stay straight...you've disfigured enough people. Bai Bakura!!!! *throws him to the lot* *evil laugh*
|
Reviewed By: Tamashii Densetsu On: January 19, 2004 19:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your idea and stuff, it's all interesting--I never thought about why Bakura might hate Yami...Your author notes are funny! And I liked that little part, "European, they are all intimate like that…" Heehee! Marik's funny too. Everything's all good, with little stuff here and there happening. Something with Yami...-.-... Maybe it's just me, but it seems a bit hollow, maybe if you wrote more that happened with Bakura and Ryou, though I doubt I could do better than you anyway! Good job with the story!
|
| Pages (6): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 6 > » ] |
