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Reviewed By: Roppy3 On: January 22, 2004 21:46 CST
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That sucked sooo much! my god! that was so cheesy! ok just kidding that was for the steaks. um, i don't really want to say anything until i finish the story but uh...keep up the good writing?
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Reviewed By: roppy3 On: January 22, 2004 21:27 CST
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ya u write well...sorry, don't expect a lot from me i suck at writing.aww...ryou's so cute. ok i'll go read the next chap now
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Reviewed By: Lady Sekhmet Ka (damn thing won't let me sign in!) On: January 21, 2004 22:15 CST
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Toss him to the wolves! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Tamashii Densetsu On: January 19, 2004 19:24 CST
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Forgot to mention this--DON'T INCLUDE JONOUCHI. He's innocent! And I'd rather he be straight. And hate Mai. Evil Mai. Please heed me!
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Reviewed By: Tamashii Densetsu On: January 19, 2004 19:23 CST
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You ought to write humour fics....like with you writing a story with the yugioh guys and blah. Poor Tozoku-oh...How all the guards act, it seems like the world's going to the homos. Maybe that's why egyptians hate gays. If you send Bakura over to Seto, when Seto gets his memory he'll be too scarred for life and Mokuba will eat Bakura for being in the memory. And if you pit him to Seto, that'll make him a bi. To Amanda's delight. And the guards are already that mean and gay and horrible. Let Seto stay straight...you've disfigured enough people. Bai Bakura!!!! *throws him to the lot* *evil laugh*
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Reviewed By: Tamashii Densetsu On: January 19, 2004 19:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your idea and stuff, it's all interesting--I never thought about why Bakura might hate Yami...Your author notes are funny! And I liked that little part, "European, they are all intimate like that…" Heehee! Marik's funny too. Everything's all good, with little stuff here and there happening. Something with Yami...-.-... Maybe it's just me, but it seems a bit hollow, maybe if you wrote more that happened with Bakura and Ryou, though I doubt I could do better than you anyway! Good job with the story!
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Reviewed By: LoverOfTheSnowHairedAngel On: January 19, 2004 17:31 CST
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i hear your cry and i answer hehehe good story i like it and hai Baku-chan is very hard to work with. Bakura: how many times have i told you not to call me that! 765 times Baku-chan Bakura: why do i bother ahem anyways plz continue i like it
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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 23:25 CST
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Well, you already know my opinion about who to throw Kura to (besides for me; what, that wasn't an option? O_o) Hey, Kura, can I have a Long Island Iced Tea instead! (hate beer, blech! XD)
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: Konna! On: January 18, 2004 21:09 CST
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hmmm, meroki, very interesting fanfic u have got going on here, I'm not sure how I should be reviewing this, but uhm, constructive criticism, ok, make ur chapters SHORTER! so much reading...
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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 00:13 CST
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Hmm... definitely not the guards, he's been through enough! I don't think that he should get thrown in with anybody, but if he has to, then somebody like Seto, maybe, or the Pharaoh? But they better be nice, damn it! No one disgusting. For reasons previously stated. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: galenhiril [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2004 23:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Aww... poor Bakura :( I am beginning to understand why he doesn't like talking about his past. I am very excited to see where you are going with this. It is very good so far... just so you know, this story is added to my favorites list :)
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Reviewed By: mariks girl On: January 09, 2004 19:37 CST
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good, good update!
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Reviewed By: Amora Laflour [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 08:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a cool story you need to update soon.
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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2004 23:05 CST
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That was a good chapter. But you left it at a cliffie! Everyone's in love with 'Kura! I can see why. So what went on between him and the pharaoh? I love both tendershipping and darkshipping! Which will it be? Please update soon; I don't want to wait so long! And it's very good! ^__^
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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 00:06 CST
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This is a good story! Please continue. ^_^
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