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Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, GREAT story! Please continue, this is definitely going on my favourites! You really have everyone's characters down good.... but Yami is EVIL!! EEEVVVIIILLL!!!!!! Good job ^_^
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Reviewed By: Roppy3 On: February 22, 2004 21:59 CST
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eeh...all I can say is that ya it is getting better cuz sumthin is starting to happen and Yami is starting to scare me please dun make me die of an ulcer by making things happen too fast ...anywayz i wan u to continue tho... geez whut a cliffhanger...
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2004 22:23 CST
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Yami doesn't deserve Bakura, Bakura is sooo good! Normally, I hate Bakura a whole lot, but I've decided that Ryou is his reincarnation, so he can't be that bad!
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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 22:07 CST
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The evilness that is Yami. He thinks that Ryou's yami is bad. Well, at least he loves someone. Stupid pharaoh. He's probably just not getting any from Yugi! XP Please update! I didn't know that this plot twist was coming. ^__^
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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 11:19 CST
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I don't think it's off track. Love triangles are fun! Update soon! ^__^
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Reviewed By: galenhiril@hotmail.com On: February 08, 2004 23:42 CST
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Alrighty, I know that this is a strange request, but I was looking for your other fic that you mentioned in you little A/N at the beginning of this chapter. I really want to read it, but for some reason, I can't find it anywhere. If it's not too much trouble, could you email a link to that story! I really like your stuff and I would like to read it. Thank you!
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Reviewed By: galenhiril@hotmail.com On: February 08, 2004 23:21 CST
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very very very good... i love this story! And I didn't think that it was an odd chapter by the way (even though you claimed it to be in you A/N) I look forward to more chapters!
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Reviewed By: Roppy3 On: January 26, 2004 21:57 CST
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AAWWW.......POOR BAKU CHANNNNNN!!!!wwahhhh.......the guards don't deserve him!You write too convincingly!wwahhh...relieve him of his pain and give him to seto or jounouchi! at least seto k.is good at it! and hes so hottie that even guys can love him!!aww....poor baakuuucchannn.....
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Reviewed By: JJStar Yami Karasu ( FF.Net. ) On: January 26, 2004 20:17 CST
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Trow him to the guards! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Bakura: Heaven help me! PLEASE!!! But really youe story is really good, so much detail I could never even dream of writing this good. * reads more * PLEASE go on! YES throw him 2 the guards! Bakura: Nooooooooooooooooooo!
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Reviewed By: JJStars Yami Karasu ( FFNet. ) On: January 26, 2004 20:14 CST
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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 19:50 CST
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*huggles Baku-chan* All I have to say is, all of you are so mean who voted to throw him to the guards! Okay, it's angst, but nasty, filthy guards? Poor Baku-chan. I still love you.
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Reviewed By: galenhiril@hotmail.com On: January 26, 2004 00:14 CST
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Awwwwwwwwwwwww............ poor Bakura! I feel so sorry for him. I hope you coninue to write on this one, and I'm sorry that you didn't get as much feed back as you were hoping for. It was great though. Tell Bakura that I'm sorry for him, and that he is loved ;)
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Reviewed By: galenhiril@hotmail.com On: January 25, 2004 23:14 CST
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hmmmm.... such decisions ;) I think it would be kind of a cool twist if you threw him to Seto. Bakura certainly wouldn't like it, but the mental images are nice ;) lol... but you do what you want to do darlin, I'm sure whatever you write will be great, because this story is really good :)
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Reviewed By: jenna On: January 22, 2004 23:34 CST
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0.0 well....ehehehe, throw him 2 the guards!
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Reviewed By: Roppy3 On: January 22, 2004 21:58 CST
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umum...NOT SETO! YOU'LL RUIN HIM COMPLETELY! KEEP HIM SSTTRRIAAAIGGHT! PLLLEEAAASSE! *he killed a stupid guard! yay!* um... give him to the pharaoh!
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