| "Kagome! Where are you?!" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Reviewed By: Pikanet128 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2018 19:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
After reading this chapter I mediately looked up the number of
Rubiks cube combinations and my reaction was well there beeped You
kept spelling tired as tried No I only noticed because I was using
an app to read to me
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Reviewed By: fofafee On: April 30, 2011 17:43 PDT
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awwwwwwww so sweeeet little scene! |
Title: europa
Reviewed By: fofafie On: January 12, 2011 14:30 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
well writen (though i've never seen star wars I know planet Hoth) if it were me my first guess would be jupeters 6th moon europa It has a tenuous atmosphere composed primarily of oxygen. Its surface is composed of ice and is one of the smoothest in the Solar System. The apparent youth and smoothness of the surface have led to the hypothesis that a water ocean exists beneath it, which could conceivably serve as an abode for extraterrestrial life. This hypothesis proposes that heat energy from tidal flexing causes the ocean to remain liquid and drives geological activity similar to plate tectonics. |
Reviewed By: minerva519 (not logged in) On: August 02, 2007 19:31 PDT
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I love the sheer effort and research you put into your stories. You add far more depth and insight than most other writers, and the style is distinctively yours. Because you do not over romanticize the situations, your writing feel more real and far more accurate than many I have read. Lastly, I love seeing sci-fi worlds mixed in along with your take on history, for both greatly intrigue me.
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Reviewed By: Azkis Killer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 07:32 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really great, you need to begin writing the sequal fast, i cant wait. Thank you for writing such a great story, ahhhhhh.... the sleepless nights, but it was worth it, you really have to look hard to find a good sesshoumaru and kagome story around these days, and yours was one of the best. Keep writing you have a great gift so use it. if you ever need to contact me mail me here anl2u@comcast.net thanks for bringing such a great story to life!!!!!
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Reviewed By: loveya On: April 05, 2007 17:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'If he had not arrived and attacked, Sauron would have crushed my mind. I've got to think him for saving my soul.' she thinks in gratitude.???? *confused* -.- did u mean 'thank'?
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Reviewed By: DeathbyDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2006 20:42 PDT
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this was an awsome fanfic. i can't wait to start readin the sequel. i hope it's just s good as this one maybe even better. who knows?.......oh wait you do, ur the author. w/e
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Reviewed By: DeathbyDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2006 20:41 PDT
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THis was an awsome story can't wait to start readin the sequel.
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Reviewed By: chibirin8 not logged in On: March 05, 2006 00:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was a good story I like how you used a bunch of movies and I will be reading the following to it.
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Title: Kagome! Where Are You?!
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 15:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: SilentPredator [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2005 18:46 PDT
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Wow. What a story. I really enjoyed reading it. It's a shame that you felt the need to cut some of your chapters short. I got so excited when I started reading the first LOTR chapter, but only because the opening made me think you were going to use Stephen King's Dark Tower series for inspiration. It would've been interesting to see Sesshomaru and Roland Deschain meet. I think the two of them would get along really well. :) Hmm... what else... I think that it's better that you didn't do the other war scenario (the American invasion of Japan), as you already did some war stuff with the Germans. Yes, the vampire would is BEGGING to have something written about it. Your choice for the God that created the cube? FREAKING AWESOME! I am curious though, how you had this certain God escape his sleep? Did somebody awaken him? Did the stars align? And if he is free, why isn't he destroying all of humanity? Or is he just out to serve your purposes here?
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Reviewed By: Lady Inu yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 06:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: sveta89 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 05:40 PDT
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great story
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Reviewed By: sesshys_only_luv265 On: March 26, 2005 02:09 PST
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i love your fan fic....very long which i like good story line romantic sexy and i love sesshomaru......he so hot =) ********************************************* i dont write a reveiw for each chapter ......to time comsuming LOL %%%%100
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Reviewed By: InusGirlD [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 20:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have just spent around 8 or more hours reading this fanfic and I loved it! *is very happy to see there is already a sequel* I very much enjoyed reading the story :D
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