| "A Second Chance At Love" Reviews/Comments [ 92 ] |
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 17:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey the story is going great but, please write more soon and update me when you have my email address is krystalclearkiss@yahoo.com. well i hope u write real soon because i want to know what happens as more goes on. And i will write more reviews as you write more and more chapters to your story. Well i reviews will be long because your story is so great. It took me 4 days to finish this story. And i am glad that i read it because all the stories i read including this one inspires me to draw and begin to write stories and when i write my first story i will email you it and you will be the first to read it. (But i will need your email) until then i will be waiting for more chapters. Til the next chapter. Always a Friend, Nyah
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 18:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, you are officially the queen of suspenseful endings!! What a great chapter, i am forever hooked! I hope you enjoy writting this as much as I enjoy reading it!!!!
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Reviewed By: faeriegrrrl On: June 20, 2005 23:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another cliffy? AAAAAUGH!! *pulls out hair* (Please write more soon!)
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Title: Review Chapter 25
Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 11:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are extremely brave. I cannot believe you had the guts to "kill" Kagome. For the moment, I will trust that you have something ingenious in mind, and that all will turn out well. I shall reserve any final judgement until the story is actuallly finished. On that note, what has happened to the Shikon Jewel? What has happened (really) to Kagome? Love the writing style; thank you for the error-free work, and please continue writing as soon as you can. ............................ Good luck, and keep up the good work! Kin-chan Pandun
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Title: A Second Chance At Love
Reviewed By: Bookreader9999 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 19:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great chapter in the story! Hope you get to update again soon!!
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Title: Ch 25
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 11:38 PDT
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AH! Did the spirits of the house interfere? Or is this the Shikon no tama's doing? Where did the Shikon go? Where did Kagome go? What was the blue light, the Shikon's light seems to be pink? Are things going to progress to the full moon? I look forward to reading more, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Inu_Girl17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 11:37 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOW DARE YOU!!!!!I'll hunt you down if you don't update soon!!!!!!
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Title: how could u do that?!
Reviewed By: xofragileheartox On: June 10, 2005 09:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome! update soon!
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Reviewed By: MissyManda01 On: June 07, 2005 17:10 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update quickly!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 08:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more soon! Is Kanna possessed or is their enemy hiding their true form? What does Kagura think about her sister being involved in this? Is the corrupted Shikon No Tama going to hurt Kagome? What could their enemy possible want Kagome to do? Will she do it? I'm feeling a firm 'maybe' on that last question. Is there something significant about the moon looking full but not really being full until the following night? This is such an interesting and well written story! The anticipation is going to kill me... maybe not but it still hurts. Yay for you for being such a good writer! ^_^
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Title: A Second Chance At Love
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 14:18 PDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: kitten1222 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 13:05 PDT
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i love the story so far. are you gonna write more chapters soon? please
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Reviewed By: inu_chick On: March 29, 2005 10:04 PST
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it si really good so far and i hoope that you will update soon!
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Title: Lady of the Western Lands
Reviewed By: Lady Hideko of the Western Lands On: March 09, 2005 18:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please keep writing. I am anxious to see how this turns out. I rather like this story, please keep it going.. Lady Hideko of the Western Lands
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Reviewed By: Missy manda On: March 09, 2005 15:53 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *breathe* OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! u cant do this to me!!!!!!! such a long wait.... i waited for this story when it was first out...and now i have to wait again...and the first time it got lost....i hope u keep updating becuz...im not normally a patient person...please hurry and good job!!!!!!!!!
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