| "Good Girl Kagome" Reviews/Comments [ 185 ] |
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Reviewed By: MisfitBride [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 06:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
who are David and Mathew? i have a feeling those are typos that need to be checked and fixed. Your whole story has a lot of typos. Don't get me wrong, your story is exceptionally good. Your rape scene was done very well; i just hope none of that was from experience. Keep writing stories, you have talent!
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Reviewed By: vampirebride kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 20:56 CST
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i loved it it was great but a little scary it takes a lot for me to say that but over all good job (you have a one year later thing all im saying
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Reviewed By: alatero [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 19:44 CDT
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Great ending!!!! Definitely didn't see that one coming! (Althougth I guess I should have shouldn't I?) Anyway, great story too.....although a little dark, it was a great story. And I loved how you gave Sess a human side and made Rin die. I know that sounds strange, but I haven't seen it done before and I really thought it was interesting. Fluffy has a human side! Who woulda thought?
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Reviewed By: sheila On: March 16, 2005 01:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it and was wondering if you plan to do a sequel about sessy and rin.
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Reviewed By: ESGB On: June 23, 2004 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
great. read it from begging to end.
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 17:01 CDT
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WOAH, I didn't even know you FINISHED the story! Anyways, great story, I'm glad the bastards dead!
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Reviewed By: xfhhdfhjhdy On: June 02, 2004 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when are u gonna update this dam story o ya the storys really g so far june 1st 04
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: May 30, 2004 15:56 CDT
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*claps*
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Reviewed By: GIANNELLI 2 On: May 29, 2004 14:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know you could right a squel to this one.. but idk.. hey i just loved it i cried.. i am sssooo glad that kagomes father died haha..lol.. well it was a awesome story and i just loved it so much and i cant wait to read your other stories!!
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Reviewed By: LostDreamerGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 00:02 CDT
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: lonley dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I loved your fic!! I can't even find the words to describe it!! I'm a little hyper right now and I wish I had some bacardi! But any way back to you, I loved this fic!!
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Title: awsome end to a great story!
Reviewed By: inuyashatotallyobsessed On: May 28, 2004 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*crys* that was beutiful. perfict endin! nice toch that naraku was the dad. how could anyone not like that ending? KAGOME SHOT THE EVIL BASTERD!!! didn't see that one comeing!^_^ it realy was awsome bu, why would Shippo reading YM(Young Miss)? or were you try to make officer Shippo..um..OOC to say the least? again great story! JaNE!!
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 01:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, that was a great story. I was reading it some time ago, but then i lost it, and then like i found it so i reread it and i loved it. I would have never guessed that Naraku was Kag's dad. That was sooo intense. I can't to read another one of your stories. i love the way you write. Keep up the great work. A loving fan Krystal.
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Reviewed By: LostDreamerGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 23:09 CDT
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really gald that you up-dated and can't wait to read more work done by you^_^
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