| "One Can Only Wander For So Long" Reviews/Comments [ 257 ] |
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Title: YAY! \0/
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2011 22:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WooHoo! That was... awesome! The way you played that whole thing out? with Sango on the ground slowly picking off targets before they could get to her, with Miro giving her blow by's... most excellent. And I would love to read more of their adventures, especially with Yash and Kagome of course, hehe. :P But am so glad you came back to revisit this and add to it. Great stuff. Until next install, update when ya can! ;) |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 22:28 EST
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this was a great story
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 15:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww. that was good.. i like how it ended i mean you can only add so much without it being overly pushed and borderline boring.. but it was really good.. great job... i enjoyed reading it!!
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 11:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He leaned forward to whisper in her ear, "Besides, you got to have the pouncing you'd wanted so badly..." Her eyes widened in recognition at his statement. `The phone conversation with Sango...' she thought, looking away in embarrassment. "You..." she gulped, backing away slightly, "You heard that?!" HAHAHA that part had me rollin!!!
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Reviewed By: KJOC On: July 06, 2007 22:29 EDT
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WOW!!!! I LOVED THAT FIC. IT WAS WOUNDERFUL. I HATED TO STOP RADING WHEN I HAD TO. I HOPE THAT YOU DO THE PREQUIL.
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Reviewed By: antyem13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 17:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I still don't know how you thought this story up, but it was really good. I throughly enjoyed reading it and the art was quite good to. There was one point where I was very frustrated because I thought you never finished the story, but then I read the summery. (me feels stupid) Thank you for writing this story, and for the ones you are working on now.
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Title: my ending review
Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 13:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
weeeeeee. wow, that was a decently long story. lol took me all day to read it. (course i was busy running around doing errands, but still). The beginning, with the revisions, was great. It had depth and a strong sense of character. My only concern was towards the ending, it started tapering off. You didnt go into depth as much, and it seemed that you were just hurring up to end it. You tied the loose ends up too quickly in my opinion. It kind of lost its flow. But despite that, i still think its a great story. And im incredibly glad i took a chance reading it. The summary seriously made me think of it as a cross over with LotRs, and im just not that big of a fan of lotr. So imagine my surprise. :) oh yeah, while im thinking about it, i enjoyed the author's notes in the beginning. Not many people open up a story like that, and it was rather refreshing. So here is your kudos. 9/10 for creativity. 8/10 for style of writing, and i explained my reasoning above. 10/10 for your grammar usage and correct spelling. 10/10 for my enjoyment factor, it was a rather unique story line, and i liked that it didnt dwell with the "normal" IY fan world. so your overall rating is a 10 out of 10. I seem to have rambled on, so this is it. ~Autumn the reviewer
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Reviewed By: Crystaru-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 20:51 EST
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*Has to mop up the drool mess she made while reading the fic* That was awesome! I love it! -^____^- Much love for the fic, and I thought the ending was quite nice. There should always be room for more adventure beacause that's the way life is. There never is a true 'happy ever after'. Anywho, good work and I will have to check for any further works coming from you.
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 21:30 EDT
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Your story has won an award from the Feudal Association! Your award can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/aug2006awards/Best-AUAR-Fic-2nd.jpg The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: AngelHeart2122 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 23:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story. You kept me interested from start to finish. I also like how you left it open for so many possibilities. I enjoyed reading this very much and I look forward to seeing more from you.
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 00:29 EDT
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Congratulations, this story has been nominated for Best AU/AR Fiction at the Feudal Association. Voting continues until the 22nd of September and membership to the group is open! Feel Free to join us! http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com ~Dark Avenger (aka The Daimyo)
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 16:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such an awesome, well-written tale. You had great points of action and the ending was breathtaking. It was an enjoyable read! Excellent job!
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Title: better and better
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer NSI On: June 20, 2006 13:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A truly wonderful story with great characterizations for an AU setting and full of adventure and suspense. I loved the lemon scene too. Great job!
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Title: AMAZING
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 11:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I ADORE this story. It's so wonderfully addictive, and well thought out. Your writing is very concise and clear, and technically sound. Excellent job!
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 11:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This is quite an engrossing tale! It's one of the best and finely crafted Inuyasha AUs ever!
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