| "One Can Only Wander For So Long" Reviews/Comments [ 257 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 03:05 EDT
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did Inuyasha just change back into hanyou? becuase Kagome obviously used some kind of miko power there and she was holding onto Inuyasha's necklace at the time. i assume the now dead youkai was supposed to be kouga? haha whimpy wolf. can't wait for more. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Title: :-)
Reviewed By: kagomesjewel(not signed in) On: May 23, 2004 19:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, now that was a fun chapter. And very eventful; I mean, in the last chapter, Kagome finds out Inuyasha isn't just a dog, and that her friend has a youkai for a husband. Then, in this chapter, Kikyou sends a demon after Kagome, Kagome *sees* Inuyasha (his real form), they are attacked by afore mentioned youkai, and she rips off Inuyasha's prayer beads, which IY wanted in the first place. O.o I wonder what happens to Inuyasha now...Maybe he reverts back to his original form? O.O Does he get any clothing? Poor Kagome... What a crazy life. Now I'm really all hyper and happy you updated and everything! I mean, your artwork is beautiful, your story is so original and creative, AND you've got the skills to boot. Yeowza! Now if I could draw half as well as you, I'd be sooo happy, let alone write! AND you've got two kids too? I would like to thank you for NOT stopping the story just because of annoying readers who only review to say, 'that chapter was ok, but u need to update soon!' ::shudder:: People are SO inconciderate. Thanks! You don't have to reply to this review or anything, BUT, if you *want* to, e-mail me back at mangarocks007@yahoo.com. O.o At the time, I didn't realize that your e-mail was also your ID...
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Reviewed By: LLJade [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 17:13 EDT
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Wow..... *Falls onto knees* I AM NOT WORTHY! I AM NOT WORTHY! I AM NOT WORTHY! This story rules!!!!!
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Reviewed By: yo On: May 23, 2004 07:35 EDT
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great chapter! please continue!
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Title: NOOOOOOOOO!!!!
Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 22:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an awsome chapter but man...did you have to leave it off like that? What? What happened that could have surprised Kagome that much? Come on! I need more so please update again soon! :) Love your writing! Keep up the great work!
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Title: ummm... helo??
Reviewed By: reality_loss87 On: May 18, 2004 10:57 EDT
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for the love of god. will you please update?! i'm desperate!!!
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Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 14:37 EDT
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A short update from the Author I'll be posting a new chapter soon, sorry to have kept you all waiting so long! Revisions are on the way as well, but I'll post any changes made to a seperate file so you don't have to read the story all over again! Thank you so much for your understanding and support!! It means a lot to me that you guys understood how hard it is with the new baby. :)
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Reviewed By: Anandria [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 23:46 EDT
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Phenominal writing, the story is most definately not like others of this nature that I've come about. I was intrigued by your artistry(which is magnificent, by the way. I love your use of texture.) and I'm so very glad I did. This is a wonderful peice so far, and I'm aniticipating your next instalment. Continue, onegai! Ja ne, Alesyira-san!
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Reviewed By: Katina108 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 23:20 EDT
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I hope you update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 15:45 EDT
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HEY WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE AGAIN???
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Reviewed By: Usagitsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 09:21 EDT
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SOB!!!! When will you be back??! ;__; Please update!!=( Bye.
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Reviewed By: Relena Omoa-o-korosu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 12:24 EDT
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you are being a very very very very evil eevil lady *sniffles* congradualtions on being pregnant as well. and i hope you up date soon. um....well i would say something about it i didn't like but the chapter was good so i really can't. so....all i can say is i love it and please up date
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: April 25, 2004 00:30 EDT
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this story is great! cant believe im just reading it now...
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Reviewed By: NetealiaLaneFoxwood On: April 24, 2004 22:44 EDT
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I love your story i hope you update again soon... i like the pics for the chapters too, thats kinda why i read it. but i'm glad i did. good work ~*~
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Reviewed By: kirayasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 22:24 EDT
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ACK!!! I guess I'll have to wait along with everyone else, hunh? Anywyas Alesyira I knwo whatever you choose to write & whenever you find the time to do so, will be an interrsting next chapter! luv kira
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