| "One Can Only Wander For So Long" Reviews/Comments [ 257 ] |
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Reviewed By: Leo_mae On: November 28, 2005 15:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know what you could add!!!! A loveley mating lemon. I was all WTF where the hell is the mating lemon at the end. It was kinda frustrating how you foccused more on the task and less on there relationship, epecially after that wonderful dream lemon they had. *sigh* so yea add that please. Oh and not to mention he so has to meet her family cuz that just opens all kinds of room for comic moments. Plus you could really extend it with a lovely Naraku escapade. Hmm I think the shikon no tama would make for a wonderful newly awakened ancient relic don't you? Well anyway those are my thougts if you'd like to email me my addy is punkishgoblin@yahoo.com and i'd be happy to beta for you if you need one. TTYL ok ja!!!!
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Reviewed By: oopy922 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 23:33 EST
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omg i loooooooooove it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 12:50 EST
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Ah...a long time coming but well worth the wait. You wrapped it up nicely and not in a predictable way. Granting the 2 souls in Kagome's ring a second chance at a normal life (or semi-normal, lol) was a sweet idea. Especially the girl-Kikyou, because the grief of losing a child is a horrendous thing for any mother, having even the sembelence of her daughter lessened that ache...for both of them. The Shippo-merger is a little questionable, considering InuYasha's temperament, but Kagome has always shown she can handle two volitile personalities such as theirs when they clash, with a sweet smile and an iron fist! LMAO -- Well done indeed. Thank you for sharing your wonderful imagination and story-telling skills with us. -- Michelle
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar666 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 22:06 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dont know what you're talking about, because that was a great ending. totally cool. I love this story. very creative and differnet. ~_^ ~shadow
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 20:09 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In a word, Excellent!
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Reviewed By: quillscript [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 16:48 EST
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my gosh! great job! i loved it.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 22:20 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im still loving this story. Hope you can update soon. But take your time with the writers block thing, I understand completely. I still think the artwork compliments the story alot. So keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: deachan1 On: August 29, 2005 02:58 EDT
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This is a great story. I'm really enjoying it. Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: cateye91 On: July 14, 2005 20:24 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! kewl stori...that guy who's in control of kikyou's knife scares me...when i read that part, i got a lil paranoid bout my surroundings (my parents weren't home) lol...and then the guy that was following kagome...*shudders* creepy...but i must say, i luv ur stori and all of ur art...can't wait for more of both! ^_^
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 19:49 EDT
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This was an excellent chapter as usual! :D I'm so happy that the creepy dude that was following Kagome got what was coming to him, through the trap they set up! :D Anyway, awsome chapter, I was so happy that you updated! Please, update again when you get the chance? Bye! ----------------------Formly known as InuyashaGirlie--------------
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Title: I finally found time to read this; moving throws everything off.
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: July 13, 2005 14:18 EDT
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That was an interesting little encounter with the roadside preditor. Let's hope she was his first mark and that this discourages him from continuing down that path. -- I'm glad you got the new chapter up, and such a good one, too.
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 00:11 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When is your next update gonna be. Its had been QUITE awhile. Well not that long but pretty long.
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Reviewed By: Kialla (not signed in) On: July 08, 2005 15:25 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! this is a really good story! inuyasha and kagome are a bit OOC, but other than that, it's really enjoyable, besides,i like the new way they are portrayed. ^_^! i noticed that the chapters were updated every few months or so. please, please update sooner! i really wanna know what happens!!! update soon! --kialla
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Title: One Can Only Wander for so Long
Reviewed By: Janie50989 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 19:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story.Please e-mail me when you finish it.Janie50989@sbcglobal.net.See ya later.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 10:47 EDT
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liked the chapter. i think i may have to pause and think about it and the story like for a while cause i'm in a pit of a pain killer haze at the moment. (wisdome teeth just pulled). i can't wait for more. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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