| "Strength of Bond" Reviews/Comments [ 280 ] |
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: star light On: February 20, 2006 21:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story, I hope Kagome can get back to inuyash real soon! and naraku wont do anything to her. I hate naraku! he stinks!!! Maybe Inuyasha and kagome should flee and hide. Update soon please!!!!!!!! WAAAAHHHH!!! I'm begging you!! I'm kneeling right now and crying blood!!!
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: silver! On: February 20, 2006 21:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The dtory is nice! And I'm dying to read the next chapter! Please update soon! And don't give us only one chapter because you haven't updte for almost a month!
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Reviewed By: Kells On: February 19, 2006 23:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so much! I can't wait to read what happenes next. Please UPDATE soon!
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Reviewed By: medli [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 17:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sobs* That was so sad. I can not believe they seperated them. OMG. Please, update soon. Please, they need to be together. Please, I beg of you. *sobs*
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Reviewed By: CMM On: February 11, 2006 17:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey that was amazing. I hopw that you update soon. I'm dying to find out what happens. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Taiki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 19:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well written. The characterization is good. even Kagome who i think is sometimes hard to write. I like how everything works together in this fic. the only thing that is not to my liking is the use of the japanese sentences and words which are mixed into the story. but that is only my personal liking and doesnt really interupt the flow of the story. ^^ Overall a very good story and i cant wait till the next chapter! Poor Kagome and Inuyasha xD Taiki
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Title: this is amazing
Reviewed By: Inuki-chan9 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 00:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have got a fantastic story here. I was completely enthralled in the plot line. If I hadn't had class, I would have read the entire story without pausing. I really hope that you update soon, and that you continue to write stories. You are definitely a talented individual. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Prophofdoom On: January 31, 2006 15:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is very interesting and detailed. I hope to see future chapters and I cannot wait to see what you do for the ending. I'm sure it will be great!
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Reviewed By: Sica On: January 25, 2006 00:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know you've written a great story when your audience hates you for what you've done to the characters. lol Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: The Painted Lady On: January 21, 2006 15:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, I meant to put tens!
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Reviewed By: The Painted Lady On: January 21, 2006 15:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am in absolute tears! This is absolutely horrible! Not the story, but the situation. What is going to happen to them? I'm in such suspense. Inu Yasha and Kagome should run away to, like, Timbucktwo or something. The Arctic Circle? The wilds of Alaska? They could live on Moose meat...lol...sorry. Excellent chapter, and eagerly awaiting your next update!
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Title: omg !
Reviewed By: freakyducky On: January 13, 2006 22:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i loved it!! i cryed when they took kagome away from inuyasha o plz! update as soon as possible ur a wonderful writer and i love the way u describe things i got lost in this story very easly. i loved it way to go!
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Title: AAARRRRGGGGHHHH
Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 13:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOO!!! I can't believe that you did this to poor Inuyasha and Kagome! you naughty naughty author! How could the council do something like this to the bonded pair. I understand that there is racism going on, but this is silly. What happened in this reality to an unbiased hearing in court. It seems like you have stacked everything against these two that could possibly be stacked. I of course understand that you are just doing this because the story needs the modivating factor, but it just makes me so sad. The last paragraph where Inuyasha is comforted by Kagome's mother and he cries. damn. That was painful to read. I am sure that it must have been painful to write as well. In closing, thank you so much for writing this piece of fiction. I have enjoyed reading it over the months. There are hints of ideas from other published stories but you weave them together in such a grand and interesting way that they all seem new again. I hope that you get to feeling well and have lots of time soon so you can write more and more for us. Caitriona
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Reviewed By: Leo_mae On: January 11, 2006 21:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You can't keep them apart!!!! I'm crying right now damn it!!! Oh god why the hell do all of them hate hanyou so much? And what the hell? That was no fair trial!!! Musou was obviously bias and not to mention they want to remove her from youkai interference so they place her with another hanyou? WTF!!!! Not to mention Naraku is a fucking bastard. How can they hand her over to him when he was behind most of the attacks on the Taisho residence? *sigh* you better update soon damn it!!!!! This is amazing!!!!
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Reviewed By: [ Ashra Ab ] On: January 08, 2006 00:38 EST
Comment/Review:
hello! me again! :D well I was reading the fanfic since the beggining (while I wait for the next update :P ) and I was wondering: 'What did inuyasha think of kagome when he first saw her?' I mean, the first chapters were from kagome's pov, and I was just curius about it. Well, I'll go back to read now. :P
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