| "Strength of Bond" Reviews/Comments [ 280 ] |
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 15:11 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter! One wonders what is up with Sesshoumaru and what they will try to do to him. I love the interaction between Inu and Miroku. Both are such wonderful characters and you set them off against each other so well. You also do a great job of making Mir a pervert without it seeming forced. Thanks for writing Caitriona
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 07:01 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Damn. You weren't kidding about needing a cold shower after that one. Excellent imagery on this one. Even though I did get a little confused as to what the roon actually looked like, you gave enough info to be interesting. Caitriona
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Reviewed By: dudekiller(nsi) On: November 25, 2005 19:59 EST
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awesome chap. compliments on the whole Thunder Brothers killing Shippo's parents like in the manga/anime. update soon.
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Title: chapter 25
Reviewed By: ptbear@cableone.net On: November 24, 2005 11:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapters. Update again soon. Can't wait to see how they all defeat Naraku and his plans to get Kagome.
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Reviewed By: Dragon Witch [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 12:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! i love your story it is truelly great. when is the next chapter coming. i can't wait
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 05:57 EST
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I really liked the give and take in the lemon but I also happened to look back at the previous chapter. Kagome didn't have any panties at the game center so when did she put them on?
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Reviewed By: lemon_sweet14 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 21:31 EDT
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An excellent story. Well written, well described and never boring. Well done.
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Title: good job
Reviewed By: Heaven_dra_gon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 10:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i would like to say good job
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 02:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story, I must say. From how you started, to the middle, to where I ended up, and am now awaiting an update. Love how you put all the characters in, and kept them in perspective. Must say, loved the lemons tho. Damn falling lemons anyways, then theres lemons in the kitchen,on table even on the fridge dammit( vivid image,ne?), in the living room, on the deck, and patio, in the bathroom, oh wait, you did that one already didnt you, always room for more tho I guess. Sorry, my hentai mind just works over time...hehehe you did say something about throwing some ideas your way...Anyways, arigato for a great story, and am eagerly awaiting the next update. oh, btw, I really like how you put in all the Japanese terms and such, and I think you're right, it is better that way.
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Title: As always, good show!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: October 03, 2005 22:07 EDT
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Great story & update as per the usual.
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Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: duranrox [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 20:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a very good imagination. You should really consider becoming an author with your own book. This story is really AWESOME. And that's about all i can say to describe it!
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Reviewed By: InuYoukai24 (Not Signed In) On: October 02, 2005 18:39 EDT
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GREAT UPDATE! Lol, jeez, could you keep me on the edge of my seat any more than that???? I loved this! Oooooohh EVIL HANYOU HATERS!!! *throws shurikens and books at teh evil Inu haters* *hugs Inu plushie* Myine...
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Reviewed By: Rhayne On: September 21, 2005 13:42 EDT
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Sorry for the late review. I just wanted to say thanks for taking into account your usage of japanese words. I really appreciate the effort. Keep on writing, I enjoy the story.
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Reviewed By: MidsummerDreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 22:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I caught a few spelling/grammar things. You misspelled rogue at one point . . . whatever. It's really awsome besides! I love this story, it's on my favorites list. I kinda miss the marathon lemons at the beginning of the story, but I guess you can't expect them to go on forever.
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Reviewed By: silvermoon maru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 18:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I love that Inuyasha is all concerned about her. Is the council gonna do something about Naraku sending all his minions to get her?? I don't think they agreed to that. If Kagome were to get badly hurt, what would be Inu kun's reaction... I'ld love to see that. I hope you can write something like that in this fic =)
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