| "Strength of Bond" Reviews/Comments [ 280 ] |
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Title: YEA YO! #100!
Reviewed By: lil ol' Ina On: April 04, 2005 22:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As ur 100th reviewer I have the obligation to let u know that because u dont not update as often as ur faithful and loyal readers would like, I am here to inform u that u slightly suck. The only thing saving u from sucking completely is the fact that we need u for updates and we need some soon! lol jk Really though ur good. Now Im only telling you these compliments so that after you can update already! Im dieing here!
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Reviewed By: tduke1999 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 13:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a fabulous story!! i love the originality of the plot and the way you've developed the characters to remain in character with the series, but still fit in to the different environment. very well done. my only comment is that the use of the japanese words is distracting. i don't speak japanese and i know only a few words so when you throw a word in that i don't know, it breaks the mood b/c i have to scroll down to the bottom of the story and find the definition and then head back up to where i was and finish reading. kinda messes up the mood you've created. other than that this story is perfect!! thank you for sharing your talent!!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(nsi) On: April 02, 2005 23:36 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: JustAReader On: April 02, 2005 18:09 EST
Comment/Review:
awww..even in his human form
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 16:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely keep up the great work
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Title: U-Rock!
Reviewed By: Dchan3 On: March 31, 2005 18:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was skeptical at first about reading this story but, I gave it a shot and was plesently surprised! This is very well written and I enjoyed it very much. I hope you'll update as soon as you can.
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: foxfire730 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 18:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC!!! At the beggining there was such lemony goodness!!! All of it was wonderful! And the meetong was described wonderfully! You really thought this through! I laughed at a few pars also, and thatnk you so much for putting a litle "japanese dictionary" in the chapters! I would've gotten just a little bit lost if you didn't. The whole deal with the school is really great! I started cracking up whenever Inu brought Kagome lunch! And that Keade got on to them (mainly Inuyasha) later on about taking away to much energy before classes and keeping their activities for another time of the day! LOL! I can't wait to see (or read) how much stronger their bond is going to become! UPDATE SOON! p.s. I love your other fic Suvival of the Pack
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Reviewed By: JustAReader On: March 26, 2005 15:18 EST
Comment/Review:
aww, such fluff :)
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 01:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm realing enjoying this story I wish I had you as a pen pal that way I can brush up on on my japanese :-)
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Title: Strength of Bond
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 12:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, I just love this fic, and I really loved this chapter. It was a nice change to see the two of them enjoying some normal (under the circumstances) life type time. Its hard to regain your equalibrium when life keeps knocking you off your feet with one bizarre circumstance after another. Anyway, I like it, I love it, I want some more of it. It was great to see your voice again.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(nsi) On: March 24, 2005 23:07 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
agh too much japanese lol i have to keep scrollin down to understand wat theyre saying. but this amazing story is worth it. cant wait for more =D
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Title: You Go!
Reviewed By: lil ol' Ina On: March 14, 2005 15:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU ROCk! Now if only you would update more I would be one HAPPY camper!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(nsi) On: March 06, 2005 21:24 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva(nsi) On: March 06, 2005 10:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes, yes, yes, you finally updated. i have been waiting. thank you!! now...another one please!?
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Title: Mistress of Sesshomaru and Ruler of the Left Hallway of Burford Hall
Reviewed By: Lillikyi_Wolf_Youkai On: March 04, 2005 11:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Would it help if I got on my knees and begged you to update? This fanfic has put me on the very edge of my seat and I have been drooling in anticipation of your next update. *Flicks tail* I know, I hate it when people beg me to update too, but I just can't help it. If you want to read some of my stuff, just use Lillikyi_Wolf_Youkai and look on fanfiction(dot) net. Once again, great job, keep up the fantastic work and please get the next chapter up soon! *Sesshomaru walks out.* Woman, stop pestering her. Sigh, what am I going to do with you? *Looks at author.* Damn wolf is driving me up a wall. Sorry, I'll take her off your hands. *Picks Lilli up* Fluffy, put me down!!! I'll get you for this!!! *He turns and winks at author while speaking to Lilli* Oh, I plan on it... *Evil grin.*
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