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| "Ranma in the Pokegirl World" Reviews/Comments [ 90 ] | | Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 › » ] | Title: Good one
Reviewed By: vorahk829 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 15:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aye, 'tis too bad you seem to have discontinued this fic. It was good...I personally would have liked to see this go on. Ah, well...not my choice to make. Still, this was a good little piece of fiction, and I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I enjoyed reading it.
| Title: Hot damn...
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 22:38 CDT
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Warp, I absolutely love your work. If there was anything to complain about, it'd be the time between updates =P. But hey, it works out fine with me because good things take time to craft and create...great things even longer. Payback and this work are excellant examples of great work. Keep it up, I hope to see an update in the future!
| Reviewed By: Ino_PokegirlFan On: September 20, 2005 18:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say other than I just absolutely adore this fanfic, I only have one problem with it, It hasnt been updated in like AGES!! Please update it soon. Im dying to read more of it. As I mentioned, this fic is great, and, if I could have, I would have made the ratings ALOT higher, though, as I said, Please Please Please update again soon.
| Title: I love it...but
Reviewed By: volostheguardian [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 13:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gotta say, this story is very very good. But the one thing I have a problem with, is that in the recent chapter, Ranma's speech is liken to some sort of old west speak. I mean, I know that Warpwizard must've done this for some reason, but I would like to know why.
| Reviewed By: cameronjc [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is good you should update soon please i want to see what happens next
| Reviewed By: noname z On: June 20, 2005 03:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great Fic, definitely one of my favourite.Please continue it soon its really awesome. I would leave Tenchi out of your Fic(never saw the anime).If you want to include more characters i would suggest Final Fantasy (FF8,FF10,FFX-2,FF7) you have a few interesting males and lots of women as Pokegirls.(i can imagine the poor tamer who has Selphie, Rikku and Yuffie as Pokegirls.Or Rinoa, Yuna and Aeris.)There are lots of possibilities. But whatever you do i would be careful not to add to much characters. One of the interesting things about you Fic are the interactions between you characters and having 15 or 20 Persons in you Fic would destroy that.
| Reviewed By: Unknown Reader On: June 16, 2005 00:47 CDT
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Hey i like the fic and I'm wondering when you will continue it. I really want the next chapter to come out. SO HURRY UP AND WRITE!! Please? Its really good.
| Reviewed By: anno nimbus On: May 31, 2005 04:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just finished with the primer itself. I'm wonder will Shinji become the tamer of the neo-legendary Evangleion? Or at least an eva? What about conflicts with the Seele organization in the pokegirl world?
| Reviewed By: An Idiot On: May 26, 2005 12:40 CDT
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It's quite good, but when are you going to hav Ranma doused with cold water? I'm wondering what Cloud's reaction to that will be. As well as everyone else's reaction. It's something that I think you should do. But you're the author, so I won't harp on it. Other than that, you've been doing a really good job. Just update a little more often, 'kay?
| Reviewed By: Innortal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A well done story. You integrate the sex into the plot so that it doesn't seem cheesy and thus makes the story that much better. I look forward to seeing what happens next in this story and do hope you update soon.
| Title: Ranma in the Pokegirl World
Reviewed By: N.S. On: April 16, 2005 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. The fights scenes and the lemond scenes are well written. The character descriptions at the end make them seem even more lifelike, which I think is an excellent thing for a writer to do. I hope you can update this story soon. I would love to see exactly how the characters start to interact with each other after this chapter.
| Title: Character Additions
Reviewed By: DarkHeart Of Ice [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is a very good story, Warp. As far as adding Tenchi members, leave Tenchi out of it, and definitely leave the tomboy Akane out!! I have no need for seeing that goddamn mallet-sama ever! But if you decide to bring in any SM characters, bring in Mina, Makoto, and Setsuna. Anyways, that's my opinion. Thanx--DarkHeart >=P
| Reviewed By: The Apprentice On: April 02, 2005 12:57 CST
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This started as a clarification/correction of the review from April 01, 2005 12:59 CST. But, since I'm doing this, I might as well put in some of the stuff I ended up cutting out of that Review due to lack of space. The first clarification is that when I mention Sasami, I'm talking about an older (teen) version of the character. While this is probably obvious to most (including the author) who reads my previous review, I've decided to play it safe. The second clarification is on Candida as a potential Alpha of Ranma's harem. If I'm right that Ranma's about to get a celestial Pokegirl, then I doubt that she'll become Ranma's Alpha as she'll be (IMO) too busy with this rivalry. Now, onto Shinji's bloodgift. Given that dark/infernal Pokegirls seem to have the ability to detect his celestial aura, will also be detected by other Pokegirls. I don't mean celestial Pokegirls (that, IMO, seems to be pretty much a given), but by regular Pokegirls. This could (part of the reason) be why Fuwa was so kind/gentle with Shinji, even before he Tamed her. Shinji's celestial aura could be acting as a Nice Guy field (a variation of the Someone Else's Problem field). BTW, am I reading too much into Cloud's comments about "nothing" coming out of a certain oriface, or do Pokegirls convert all food (and drink?) into nutrients/energy without any waste whatsoever? Well, thank you once again for this story. And my appologies for having to use up another review. The Apprentice
| Reviewed By: The Apprentice On: April 01, 2005 12:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very nice, and long-awaited, chapter. In regards to adding more anime characters, here's my thoughts. For NGE, I'd suggest avoiding people in NERV (Rits, Misato, and/or Maya). For Ranma 1/2, I'd suggest avoiding the Fiancee Brigade, and the other Tendo sisters. If you do decide to add the Tenchi-verse to the mix, I'd suggest avoiding Sasami and Washuu, as they could unbalance things. As for the current characters, here's a few thoughts: Asuka - Is the most likely source of problems once they reach "civilization". She's smart, already had a degree at 14, and has a Fire-type's attitude. To a Humans First type, she'd be a near-perfect example of an "uppity" Pokegirl. Candida - Unless she was evolved into a Dark Lady just days before she attacked this group, she's probably been preying on the local humans to keep from going feral. That could be a source of problems in the (near) future. As for the crystal she was carrying, I'm guessing that it holds Ranma's (future) third pokegirl, and that Candida *hates* her type of Pokegirl. Cloud - Is, IMO, going to let Candida be the Alpha of (the rest of) Ranma's harem. Cloud, meanwhile, will be Ranma's personal advisor. Personally, I hope she *doesn't* evolve, as her Milk-based abilities are *very* useful. Shinji - Better get his own Milktit (or another Pokegirl who can produce stamina boosters), if he gets a full 6 member harem! It's interesting how his Bloodgift radiates out from him. Until the next part
| Title: Freaky
Reviewed By: migele [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 04:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
a great lemon, about adding other charakters I have a request. Add Kiima from Ranma for Ranma, they are so cute together. Maya for Shinji would also be great. from the TM charakters, don't pile all the girls on Tenchi. Ryoko/Ranma is a great match, but it's your story. but if I may recomend... Ayeka Tsunami and Mihoshi would be nice with Tenchi. Washu... I think Shiji would suit her. Ritsuko rather for Tenchi. did I forget any importand girls? ... Kiyone, for Ranma. enough wishful thinking. you should add statts like Tamer: Ranma Saotome Pokegirls: 2 Cloud -Milktit Rawenwing - Dark Lady Tamer: Shinji Ikari Pokegirls: 3 Fuwafuwa - boobcat Rei Ayanami - Icemaiden Asuka Soryu Langley - Firemaiden which reminds me, with Ranma being who he is should get attacked plenty times by stary/ferals. cu next chap migi-chan
| Reviewed By: NekoRanmaKun On: March 21, 2005 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story so far. I hope to see it continued soon. Have you determined whether Ranma will still have his curse? I don't recall it being mentioned since before he was transported to this world. If you keep the curse, I would suggest that you NOT make 'her' a pokegirl in this story, though you might do a second branch or Omake where 'she' is a pokegirl. keep up the good work, and continue it soon.
| Title: Updates good
Reviewed By: Scar_Faced_Dude On: March 17, 2005 02:47 CST
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Yes! Finally, after I've been checking for updates for more than a year(I think) it finally does! Out of all your stories, I'd say this one is my favorite so far, though I'm glad you update all the others too. I've read what you might call the 'original' pokegirl fic(Wild Horses and Pokegirls) and it's odd, but this one seems to have more plot... or maybe it's just that your fic moves faster, I dunno. But keep up the good work, I'll be checking back periodically for chapter nine and updates to your other fics.
| Reviewed By: Taro MD On: March 12, 2005 16:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well you can pretty much guess what the score is now can ya Warp? But this fanfiction is why I hold you in high regard as one of the top writers of the Lemon Community although suffered slightly recently in the contest by one shot mr lucky Bsmart. Keep it up with any future projects as I'll be waiting, of course you can catch me around either on Lemontastica, your journal or here at Mediaminer
| Title: Great fic, but...
Reviewed By: Brett_Bellmore On: March 10, 2005 19:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a great fic, I'm enjoying it a lot, but I am puzzled about one thing. Aside from Ranma shying away from the river in the first chapter, the Curse hasn't made an appearance even by implication. He's HAD to have gotten wet by now... Or else he'd by drawing flies with all that heavy sex!
| Reviewed By: mikeyguy1 On: March 08, 2005 02:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A new chapter? Hallueh!! ....What? Thats it? No!! Must...have...next...chapter! *Dried, mummified seeming husk of a man is seen reaching for the elusive 8th chapter, and all the following ones..* Must...have... more..
| Reviewed By: Syrhk On: March 07, 2005 00:11 CST
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Very nice indeed. Plotless, mindless sex. Everything a lemon needs. Oh, but the story is ok too. Silliness aside I notice that you want to bring Tenchi into this... all I have to say is that Ranma should get one of the Tenchi girls (Ryoko or Sasami/Tsunami preferably [Imagine Sasami/Tsunami bonded with Ranma... a megami and a Dark Lady? It's chaos but it works because.. well, Ranma is chaos]) Tenchi can have Ayeka, Mihoshi and someone else, then have one TM girl go to the wild horse, then every main tamer in your story (Ranma, Shinji, Tenchi) will each have 3 pokegirls. Good and balanced so people who favor one main over another will not get angry. Hope you update soon, I really enjoy each of your chapters... just don't rush it, I'd rather have a good chapter than a rushed one. Good luck and get to work.
| Title: Ahhhhh...
Reviewed By: j0 On: March 03, 2005 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm orgasmically happy that you updated.. but a third of what's there is after the end of the chapter =X
| Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: oracle_thelethargic On: March 02, 2005 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh... not too shabby, Warp. I particularly liked the omakes. Err... wait a minute. Seriously though, I have to admit that it's kind of nice to see the focus shifting back to Ranma after two chapters of focus on the Eva pilots. On the other hand, it would have been nice if a little more time had been spent on the mental aftereffects of the Pilots' 'Taming' session. In particular the inherent shift in Rei's loyalties and Asuka's priorities. As far as the Dark Lady is concerned... honestly, I was half expecting you to announce her as Etna. Given that, I can pretty safely say that this is one of the few times I'm glad to see the appearance of an OC. Nice work. Truthfully, this chapter feels vaguely darker than it's predecessors, but that's understandable given the context. Besides, such petty concerns pale in comparison to a far more unsettling force, namely the presence of thinly-veiled kernels of actual plot present in the storyline. Plot? In a lemon? (Whaps Warp with a rolled up newspaper) Bad author. ... Anyway, grammatically, there's almost nothing to say, except for the fact that it's pretty much flawless beyond a single typo (window's peak). Overall, it was still by and large a good read however, particularly in light of the fact that the cost to me was zero. ;) Good job, and keep up the good work.
| Title: YAY UPDATE
Reviewed By: Predhack [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 11:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY YOU FINALLY UPDATED!!!! HAPPINESS IS MINE AT LAST!!! NEXT ONE SOON I WISH!! But you probly have to do you other fics to so I'll wait... (impatiently)
| Reviewed By: ThePD [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Humana Humana Humana! As always, Pokegirl fics are the best! I wish i knew about more then just 4... I rated the originality a 6 because Pokegirls were thought up (therby creating inspiration for this story) but i loved having Ranma in there, he is a very easy to work with character so i expect you to go crazy with him! Just wondering, what is the link to any other Pokegirl fics and/or the main group? I really like these stories and i want to write my own (With the characters from my own story adapted, CHECK IT OUT!) 1000000 (Million things up!) _
| Reviewed By: anno nimbus On: January 12, 2005 20:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I eagerly awaits the next chapter. So who's gonna get the Dark Lady? A DL's characteristic seemed to resemble Asuka; They are both beautiful, strive to be the best(to be alpha in this case), Rage, and fighting angelic-beens. Logical choice would be Ranma since he only has Cloud, but the resemblance to certain fireball that Ranma despise kinda make it unreasonable(No way he's letting Cloud treated like a punching bag to the DL). which leaves the exhausted Shinji for another round, and it would probably upset people who's been waiting for Ranma to get a second pokegirl. Well, no use to speculate work from a good author as I'm sure you'll know what to do with your own fic.
| Reviewed By: beanking On: September 14, 2004 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's good and all that Shiji got some But what I really want to Ranma laid up, with more extremely busty pokegirls. Like a sucubus or(and)jigglyslut, so poor Ranma won't grow lonly. ^_^' And that bloodgift of his has real potential. >_^
| Reviewed By: judgeman On: July 10, 2004 02:49 CDT
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i meant "is it writer block"
| Title: wats taking so long
Reviewed By: judgeman On: July 10, 2004 02:39 CDT
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YO WAT THE FUCK WHEN THE HELL R U GONNA UPDATE SHIT. US IT WRITER BLOCK OR SOMETHING, I MEAN HOW FUCKING LONG R U GONNA KEEP PEOPLE WAITING. I HATE STORIES LIKE THIS. IF I KNEW U WEREMT GOING TOO FINISH I WOULDN'T HAVE STARTED. Please please update for this one loyal fanit would mean alot. showstopper573@yahoo.com
| Reviewed By: A. Nonymous On: July 03, 2004 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
The most obvious comparison is to "Wild Horses And Pokegirls", but such a comparison comes out almost wholly in the other story's favor. This should instead be taken in comparison to WarpWizard's other writings, which show many elements in common with this one: heavy maledom d/s with elements of mind control, m/f/f creampies, etc. However, unlike "Payback" and "Well Hung By Moonlight", this story makes a point of keeping characters' personalities more or less recognizable. This is to particular benefit in the most recent chapters, where strong personalities underscore the effects of the MC processes at work. While I was a bit dismayed at seeing the creampie return (not my thing), I'm glad that he's avoided turning the Shinji/Rei/Asuka subplot into Payback Redux. His spelling and grammar are mostly competent, and while most of the text is workmanlike and occasionally detrimentally flippant, there are inspired passages that make this more worthwhile. The original characters are not especially memorable but neither are they particularly detrimental. If you are fond of the characters involved and male-dominant d/s and MC, you will probably enjoy this story as regarded in the Enjoyment Factor above. (If you're not fond of male-dominant d/s, why are you reading Pokegirl stories?) If you do not have a particular attachment to these characters or modes, this story will probably not rate above a 6 for you.
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