| "Ranma in the Pokegirl World" Reviews/Comments [ 90 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 07:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Shadow Megatron Commend you indeed on thios newest chapter. Seems like shinji got a new pussy to play with *Sweatdrops at his own bad punning* Erm... nevermind. It was all good, Feh that will teach Asuka some manners Heh . Hopefu;lly there will be another Rei, for shinji if the original Rei he went into this Pokegirl realm falls for Ranma instead of shinji Still, all in all a very good chapter Continue, at your lesure, but DO continue this!
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Title: Yea! Fun Story!
Reviewed By: catbeastaisha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 02:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yea! Happy kitty! Aisha-chan liked this story, can't wait to read more
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Reviewed By: ZAROK On: February 25, 2004 18:41 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great. It's an awsome fic. You need to continue it.
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Reviewed By: zallifad14 On: February 24, 2004 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a great fic, if a little heavy on the lemon. the grammar could also use work. overall, good. PLEASE UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: Boon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 21:23 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice. Please continue
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Title: YOU FREAKN RULE
Reviewed By: j0 On: February 10, 2004 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
god DAMN man! You know how to right lemon, you really really do! Get Ranma some more chicks! And get rid of annoying baka-shinji! RANMA NEEDS THE SEX! So give him more!
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Reviewed By: Guruhoro [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2004 05:59 CST
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I like how the story is proceeding... The way I see it, if Asuka and Rei are going to become Tamers too, you're going to need a huge original cast... You could pull it off, sure, but with the periodic nature of reading associated with fanfiction, some readers might get a headache from all that remembering I know I do when I think too much). So I'm saying that I would, for the sake of some other readers etc, like to see Shinji Tame both of the other pilots. Personal reasons? What are those? *whistles* Anyway, I won't bother with the rating numbers so soon, maybe after a couple more chapters. Keep it up! I know you're keeping my [---] up quite well... *grin*
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Reviewed By: Malichite963 On: February 08, 2004 18:38 CST
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Something i forgot to mention inmy last review. You seem to have one part of which makes a great fic, the romance(lemon scenes do count when done right), but now all it needs is some drama. Your lemon scenes are very good, would like em to be just a tad bit longer and descriptive like a previous reviewer said, but it's all good so far. The only thing it needs now are some good fight scenes. If you can pull off some fight scenes as well as you did the lemon scenes, then this fic will be quite great. Would like to see Ranma fight a few pokewomen, see how his milktit reacts, and so forth. Talon ~Blessed are the losers for they make the winners
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Reviewed By: Malichite963 On: February 08, 2004 01:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just put whatever seemed right for the rating, but overall, this is turning out to be quite a good fic. Keep writing, and if you need another Pre-reader, just drop me a line at Malichite@comcast.net Good luck and keep writing. Talon ~Blessed are the losers for they make the Winners
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Reviewed By: DJ On: January 28, 2004 00:01 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is pretty original among the Ranma pokegirl genre. This is the first time where Ranma's adaptability is actually given as a physical trait. It kind of reminds me of the Ranma pokemon story by Animeaddiction where Ranma picks up the abilities of the ones that join him and they do it voluntarily due to seeing the way he both treats his companions and how amazingly fast he gets them to evolve in both type and abilities within a type.
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Reviewed By: An idiot On: January 26, 2004 21:26 CST
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That was quite interesting. I can't help but wonder what you're going to do in the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: DilandauAlbatou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, since you've gotten Shinji and the girls involved, will you be pulling characters from the Tenchi universe too? It is a good fic by the way, and I'll be sure to read the next chapters on future updates. Keep up the good work, and all that other stuff. Love and peace.
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Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 19:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe Ranma meets the pilots. Oh well Asuka HAD to be there *rolls eyes* Anyway things are looking very interesting indeed. I look forward to more updates uponn this story Shadow Megatron
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Reviewed By: wishes not to be known On: January 26, 2004 18:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, looks like you've put out another good chapter. Lots of fun stuff and it's good to see that your putting in some plot here and there. I am very intrigued by the addition of the EVA cast. I can only guess at what your plans are.
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Reviewed By: dennisud2015 On: January 25, 2004 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, not only have you got Ranam so wrapped around Cloud's own sticky fingers but now you drop in the Eva pilots as well? Well there are many choices here, you can make them Pokegirls but that's too easy, think of it, a trio of Tamers with Shinji being at first his meek self, them as time goes on he tames his respective Pokegirls as do Rei and Asuka all the while falling for both girls while Ranma is going on with his adventures. Maybe with the trio as well and gathering more Pokegirls and drawing the attention of the leagues and others . Make this Ranma another ranma from a different reality from Metroanime's ! either way very enjoyaable and you WILL be posting this to the Yahoo group soon aren't you! dennisud
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