| "Ranma in the Pokegirl World" Reviews/Comments [ 90 ] |
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Reviewed By: An idiot On: January 22, 2004 23:18 CST
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It's been a while since I read a poke-girl fanfic; as in the one that explained how they all came into existence; sort of. I liked how you worked it and please continue as soon as you can.
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Title: good
Reviewed By: random dude 2 On: January 20, 2004 19:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was good like gooood...keep on writing!
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Reviewed By: Guruhoro [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 12:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
As you can see, I don't support the 10/10 line. The style of writing is, well, excellent. You don't stray far along side paths, but still manage to cramp a lot of "extra" data into the text (like the genetic signature part). The spelling seems flawless to my foreing eye, and so does the grammar, but since I'm not gaping at your magic-like juggling with the English language's finer points, that's a 9. And on the plot side... seen a thousand times, but still works. Female initiative seems to be the trend in straight 'fics nowadays. And then the enjoyment rating; when I review lemons, I like to use it to tell how "enjoyable" *cough* it was. I like my lemons more graphic and with longer sex scenes, but little treats like this are nice sometimes. On the overall, not one of the best I've read, but certainly above average. Now then, I'll be waiting to see if Ranma's harem will increase soon?
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Reviewed By: Tiek Mo Shet [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 10:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far this story is off to a bang up start. Not much of a plot so far but what the hell, to date it doesn't really need one. The only nit I'd pic would have to be the langauge, it can be a bit base but it does get the job done. Overall good work. I have to confess, I've got a bit of thing for milktits myself.
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 18:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A nice loving scene you portrayed indeed,I am most impressed!
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Title: Chap 3
Reviewed By: Jeff1 On: December 30, 2003 17:34 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You just love to leave me in tourtureful suspence dont you? well youve succeded This fic is awesome and the lemons are nicly detailed please countinue and maybe in the near futre introduce a dragonair pokegirl PLS, but keep cloud his main compainon sincerly your fan Jeff1
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Reviewed By: dennisud2015 On: December 30, 2003 14:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn you can write such a great Lemon scene I can see somuch coming up. Too bad he doesn't have his normal harem to do as well. Or have they become pokegirls as well. Cloud seems an awful lot like a Bunnified Shampoo! dennisud
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 08:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please for the sake of my sanity and the story. Please continue writing this peice. I hereby add this fanfiction to my facorites I commend you upon your efforts so far,please do not dissapoint me and further readers by abandoning this ,or making it just a short fiction story arc
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Reviewed By: mopko On: December 30, 2003 06:04 CST
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please continue this story. It's great.
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Reviewed By: Jeff1 On: December 29, 2003 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I've never read or heard of pokegirl fanfics before but i'm really enjoying this and i hope you countinue this is a good start.
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Reviewed By: Guruhoro [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 12:09 CST
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This keeps getting more and more interesting... It's the first pokegirl 'fic I've read, so I'm about as unknowing as Ranma when it comes to these... interesting creatures. I just can't wait to see what happens next! I'll give you a proper review later.
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Reviewed By: Alagon On: December 29, 2003 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant pokegirl fanfic. Please, please continue..
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Reviewed By: nea On: December 29, 2003 08:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is different from any Pokemon/Ranma crossover I've ever read. Please continue, I would really like to see this story continue.
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Reviewed By: LordShinji_Ikari On: December 28, 2003 23:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one of the best pokegirl fanfiction. reallly good and please do Continue
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Reviewed By: lasd On: December 28, 2003 12:23 CST
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Please continue. It's great so far.
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