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| "Ranma in the Pokegirl World" Reviews/Comments [ 90 ] | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] | Reviewed By: NekoRanmaKun On: March 21, 2005 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story so far. I hope to see it continued soon. Have you determined whether Ranma will still have his curse? I don't recall it being mentioned since before he was transported to this world. If you keep the curse, I would suggest that you NOT make 'her' a pokegirl in this story, though you might do a second branch or Omake where 'she' is a pokegirl. keep up the good work, and continue it soon.
| Title: Updates good
Reviewed By: Scar_Faced_Dude On: March 17, 2005 02:47 CST
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Yes! Finally, after I've been checking for updates for more than a year(I think) it finally does! Out of all your stories, I'd say this one is my favorite so far, though I'm glad you update all the others too. I've read what you might call the 'original' pokegirl fic(Wild Horses and Pokegirls) and it's odd, but this one seems to have more plot... or maybe it's just that your fic moves faster, I dunno. But keep up the good work, I'll be checking back periodically for chapter nine and updates to your other fics.
| Reviewed By: Taro MD On: March 12, 2005 16:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well you can pretty much guess what the score is now can ya Warp? But this fanfiction is why I hold you in high regard as one of the top writers of the Lemon Community although suffered slightly recently in the contest by one shot mr lucky Bsmart. Keep it up with any future projects as I'll be waiting, of course you can catch me around either on Lemontastica, your journal or here at Mediaminer
| Title: Great fic, but...
Reviewed By: Brett_Bellmore On: March 10, 2005 19:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a great fic, I'm enjoying it a lot, but I am puzzled about one thing. Aside from Ranma shying away from the river in the first chapter, the Curse hasn't made an appearance even by implication. He's HAD to have gotten wet by now... Or else he'd by drawing flies with all that heavy sex!
| Reviewed By: mikeyguy1 On: March 08, 2005 02:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A new chapter? Hallueh!! ....What? Thats it? No!! Must...have...next...chapter! *Dried, mummified seeming husk of a man is seen reaching for the elusive 8th chapter, and all the following ones..* Must...have... more..
| Reviewed By: Syrhk On: March 07, 2005 00:11 CST
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Very nice indeed. Plotless, mindless sex. Everything a lemon needs. Oh, but the story is ok too. Silliness aside I notice that you want to bring Tenchi into this... all I have to say is that Ranma should get one of the Tenchi girls (Ryoko or Sasami/Tsunami preferably [Imagine Sasami/Tsunami bonded with Ranma... a megami and a Dark Lady? It's chaos but it works because.. well, Ranma is chaos]) Tenchi can have Ayeka, Mihoshi and someone else, then have one TM girl go to the wild horse, then every main tamer in your story (Ranma, Shinji, Tenchi) will each have 3 pokegirls. Good and balanced so people who favor one main over another will not get angry. Hope you update soon, I really enjoy each of your chapters... just don't rush it, I'd rather have a good chapter than a rushed one. Good luck and get to work.
| Title: Ahhhhh...
Reviewed By: j0 On: March 03, 2005 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm orgasmically happy that you updated.. but a third of what's there is after the end of the chapter =X
| Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: oracle_thelethargic On: March 02, 2005 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh... not too shabby, Warp. I particularly liked the omakes. Err... wait a minute. Seriously though, I have to admit that it's kind of nice to see the focus shifting back to Ranma after two chapters of focus on the Eva pilots. On the other hand, it would have been nice if a little more time had been spent on the mental aftereffects of the Pilots' 'Taming' session. In particular the inherent shift in Rei's loyalties and Asuka's priorities. As far as the Dark Lady is concerned... honestly, I was half expecting you to announce her as Etna. Given that, I can pretty safely say that this is one of the few times I'm glad to see the appearance of an OC. Nice work. Truthfully, this chapter feels vaguely darker than it's predecessors, but that's understandable given the context. Besides, such petty concerns pale in comparison to a far more unsettling force, namely the presence of thinly-veiled kernels of actual plot present in the storyline. Plot? In a lemon? (Whaps Warp with a rolled up newspaper) Bad author. ... Anyway, grammatically, there's almost nothing to say, except for the fact that it's pretty much flawless beyond a single typo (window's peak). Overall, it was still by and large a good read however, particularly in light of the fact that the cost to me was zero. ;) Good job, and keep up the good work.
| Title: YAY UPDATE
Reviewed By: Predhack [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 11:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY YOU FINALLY UPDATED!!!! HAPPINESS IS MINE AT LAST!!! NEXT ONE SOON I WISH!! But you probly have to do you other fics to so I'll wait... (impatiently)
| Reviewed By: ThePD [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Humana Humana Humana! As always, Pokegirl fics are the best! I wish i knew about more then just 4... I rated the originality a 6 because Pokegirls were thought up (therby creating inspiration for this story) but i loved having Ranma in there, he is a very easy to work with character so i expect you to go crazy with him! Just wondering, what is the link to any other Pokegirl fics and/or the main group? I really like these stories and i want to write my own (With the characters from my own story adapted, CHECK IT OUT!) 1000000 (Million things up!) _
| Reviewed By: anno nimbus On: January 12, 2005 20:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I eagerly awaits the next chapter. So who's gonna get the Dark Lady? A DL's characteristic seemed to resemble Asuka; They are both beautiful, strive to be the best(to be alpha in this case), Rage, and fighting angelic-beens. Logical choice would be Ranma since he only has Cloud, but the resemblance to certain fireball that Ranma despise kinda make it unreasonable(No way he's letting Cloud treated like a punching bag to the DL). which leaves the exhausted Shinji for another round, and it would probably upset people who's been waiting for Ranma to get a second pokegirl. Well, no use to speculate work from a good author as I'm sure you'll know what to do with your own fic.
| Reviewed By: beanking On: September 14, 2004 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's good and all that Shiji got some But what I really want to Ranma laid up, with more extremely busty pokegirls. Like a sucubus or(and)jigglyslut, so poor Ranma won't grow lonly. ^_^' And that bloodgift of his has real potential. >_^
| Reviewed By: judgeman On: July 10, 2004 02:49 CDT
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i meant "is it writer block"
| Title: wats taking so long
Reviewed By: judgeman On: July 10, 2004 02:39 CDT
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YO WAT THE FUCK WHEN THE HELL R U GONNA UPDATE SHIT. US IT WRITER BLOCK OR SOMETHING, I MEAN HOW FUCKING LONG R U GONNA KEEP PEOPLE WAITING. I HATE STORIES LIKE THIS. IF I KNEW U WEREMT GOING TOO FINISH I WOULDN'T HAVE STARTED. Please please update for this one loyal fanit would mean alot. showstopper573@yahoo.com
| Reviewed By: A. Nonymous On: July 03, 2004 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
The most obvious comparison is to "Wild Horses And Pokegirls", but such a comparison comes out almost wholly in the other story's favor. This should instead be taken in comparison to WarpWizard's other writings, which show many elements in common with this one: heavy maledom d/s with elements of mind control, m/f/f creampies, etc. However, unlike "Payback" and "Well Hung By Moonlight", this story makes a point of keeping characters' personalities more or less recognizable. This is to particular benefit in the most recent chapters, where strong personalities underscore the effects of the MC processes at work. While I was a bit dismayed at seeing the creampie return (not my thing), I'm glad that he's avoided turning the Shinji/Rei/Asuka subplot into Payback Redux. His spelling and grammar are mostly competent, and while most of the text is workmanlike and occasionally detrimentally flippant, there are inspired passages that make this more worthwhile. The original characters are not especially memorable but neither are they particularly detrimental. If you are fond of the characters involved and male-dominant d/s and MC, you will probably enjoy this story as regarded in the Enjoyment Factor above. (If you're not fond of male-dominant d/s, why are you reading Pokegirl stories?) If you do not have a particular attachment to these characters or modes, this story will probably not rate above a 6 for you.
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