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| "Ranma in the Pokegirl World" Reviews/Comments [ 90 ] | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] | Reviewed By: judgeman On: June 29, 2004 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn man r u ever gonna update shit. u better not end this the way u ended payback ur ganna finish this pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase update ur writing is so good and its been so long so hurry please. ill be checking
| Reviewed By: Sean Malloy On: June 07, 2004 10:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can't wait for more,please update as soon as possible
| Title: AMAZING.
Reviewed By: BBoom [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 14:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, sah, we need another chapter! Nonono, make it 2. Err, 3. Uh, i'll leave it at more.. :D I was hoping Ranma would get asuka and rei.. :'[ Shinji is whiney. Ranma would know how to take care of their "needs" *smirk* oo oo, they could share :D and get ranma some more pokegirls, even if they won't be asuka or rei. Shinji has 3 to his 1.. you can't let Shinji get more chicks than Ranma! In his home dimension practically every female in Nerima was after his ass!
| Reviewed By: KeyTobias5 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was greta chapter update. I can't wait till you update your others fics, the ones that are chaptered anyways. My favorite is Well-Hung By Moonlight. Sailor Jupiter, oh god she's so...*gets bucket of cold water dropped on him* Sorry, much better now. Anyway, I just want to say, you can change the title of this fic to Pokegirl Adventure or something like that, it may make little more sense since it's not onyl Ranma any more. And for in Well-Hung By Moonlight, you gotta end it with Ranam and Jupiter getting it together on a permament. But that's just a request of a humble fan.
| Title: Ranma in pokegirl world
Reviewed By: GrayBear32 On: May 22, 2004 15:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finaly i got to read the next chapter. very good. i like the plot twists.When is Ranma gonna get his next Pokegirl? and what type will it be? Thanks for everything.
| Reviewed By: Priest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i have read up to chapter 7 so far and i realy like what i have seen so far keep up the good work, i wonder what will happen when Shinji realizes he can feal the 3 girls in his harem. keep up the good work, Ja-ne =(^_^)=
| Reviewed By: Gorn On: May 20, 2004 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As a teen, say about age 12-15, I remember I used to fantasize about REAL sex movies. To have films like "Star Wars", "James Bond", "Indiana Jones" and tv-series like "Dark Angel", X-files", "Alias","Friends" etc. etc. only with the difference that these movies would have "Full Frontal Nudity", "Explicit Sex Scenes" and "Intimate Close up's". A Cinema Revolution, where having actual sex scenes, in the latest cinema release, would be just as common as having a "kissing scene" is today. Of course, this utopia will most likely never happen but when I come across fanfiction of this quality I feel that I have reached "the next best thing". It has all the quality of, so called, nice writing. In fact more quality than the mayority, yet it has all the spice of naughty writing as well. So, in a sense, this IS the "Best of Both Worlds" that I dreamt of as a kid. Many, many thanks !!!
| Reviewed By: Gorn On: May 20, 2004 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As a teen, say about age 12-15, I remember I used to fantasize about REAL sex movies. To have films like "Star Wars", "James Bond", "Indiana Jones" and tv-series like "Dark Angel", X-files", "Alias","Friends" etc. etc. only with the difference that these movies would have "Full Frontal Nudity", "Explicit Sex Scenes" and "Intimate Close up's". A Cinema Revolution, where having actual sex scenes, in the latest cinema release, would be just as common as having a "kissing scene" is today. Of course, this utopia will most likely never happen but when I come across fanfiction of this quality I feel that I have reached "the next best thing". It has all the quality of, so called, nice writing. In fact more quality than the mayority, yet it has all the spice of naughty writing as well. So, in a sense, this IS the "Best of Both Worlds" that I dreamt of as a kid. Many, many thanks !!!
| Reviewed By: dennisud2015 On: May 19, 2004 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
See ... I told you they worked well together! ;-) Now that the preliminarie have been dealt with who will be shinji's Alpha? How will Rei and Asuka use their powers together in battles? What will Fuwa do in this new arrangment? What will happen with her Kits? Finally, am I right, or is Ranma about to get a new pokegirl? Seems the one he has and the one which might jion him look soooooo Familiar! Keep UP the good work! dennisud
| Reviewed By: Gundraw On: May 17, 2004 22:37 CDT
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Hrm... I was really hoping Ranma would get Rei. I would prefer if it was a purely Ranma fic as a matter of fact, and the eva stuff got left out all together. After all, the title is, "Ranma in the Pokegirl world" Not "Ranma and the Eva kids in the pokegirl world." Disappointing, but I'll still read it. You seriously need to start fixing Ranma though, even without his memory Ranma would be different. Hell, without his memory he would most likely be even more attractive because his attitude that makes so many girls angry is gone but his bod and sense of justice and loyalty is still there, I for one think that Rei and Asuka would be all over Ranma compared to Shinji, but hey, it's your fic.
| Title: Omake #4 (kinda dark)
Reviewed By: Dany le fou On: May 17, 2004 12:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... or the real origin of the Rei clones A moment later Ranma's theory was disproved, as the instant Rei finished removing the clinging garment, Shinji rolled off of her, bounded to his feet and dashed over to cower behind his larger friend. Suddenly, Shinji collapsed on the ground, screaming in pain as his bare chest bulged out. Ranma stared in horror and disbelief as a pattern of concentric orange hexagons appeared on the young pilot, until Shinji seemed to melt into a puddle of orange goo in front of his eyes. Then a figure crawled out of the substance, a toddler with ice blue hair and blood red eyes. In another dimension… "Gendo, we've lost the queen." "This wasn't in the scenario. We'll just have to resort to old fashioned cloning then." "I told you we should have stuck to the old method, but no! You thought using that unknown DNA would make things faster and less expensive!" Fuyutsuki's rant was interrupted by a gunshot, and he fell dead on the spot. "It seems I also need a new Fuyutsuki clone as well." Gendo said before setting back into his pose. What can I say? For a second, Rei reminded me of a face hugger, and it led to this... I hope the formatting comes out okay, I'm not used to HTML.
| Reviewed By: askthedonkey [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BOOOOOOOOOOOYEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA Another kick ass chapter is here to stay. Ring the bells of lint and praise the cheese god FOHUBOGOS. So keep on truckin and flinging out those kick ass chapters of yours. P.S. After reading Metroanime's "Wild horses and Pokegirls". I as like man I need to write a Ranma in the pokegirl fanfic. Then after reading yours, I was like, I REALLY NEED TO WRITE A RANMA IN THE POKEGIRLS FANFIC. P.P.S. YOU ROCK
| Title: Chap 7
Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 01:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, the sentuality the sex and the Omakes were class *Snikers in mirth* It's alive! Ok I will hush up now...... Please continue ! Shadow Megatron~
| Title: Need...Air...
Reviewed By: suffocating monkey On: May 04, 2004 23:35 CDT
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Tune in next chapter to find out! ........................................................................... ..... ... (Please don't wait too long, its hard to hold my breath...)
| Reviewed By: mikeyguy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i like this version of ranma in pokegirl, but can ya stop updating and give us a new chapter? i wanna know what happened to rei. i am a big eva fan ya know and there will be serious repercussions if rei doesnt pull through.*wink wink* she doesnt have a extra to take her place ya know
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