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| "Chrysalis" Reviews/Comments [ 57 ] | | Pages (4): [ « < 1 2 3 4 > » ] | Reviewed By: Pharaoh's High Priestess On: April 06, 2004 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh* I really, really love you!!!Umm..I mean, your writing. I was having a really bad day, and when I read your story, I calmed down a bit. Thanks for that! In any case, I'm glad Kaiba was able to set things right, and I'm happy Yuai forgave Yugi...Lesson? Never, ever jump into conclusions...you will make a fool of yourself. *blushing* I had to fan myself and get a fire extinguisher for the makeup scene between Jou and Seto...My computer was about to combust! *laughing* I'm looking forward to your next story...and don't make Ekko and Yuai's parents get away with anything...It's bad enough in real life....Great work, Tamlin-san!
| Reviewed By: RyokoMink [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 21:40 CDT
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Yay! A happy ending ne? ^_^ And there was not a lot of Yugi/Yami... Yuai is such a cool character. I'm glad it ended up well. *sniffle, sniffle* It's so awesome having control over a story! I've heard that couscous is good. DugFinn-san was gonna make me some. Ah, yes the matzo balls... I've seen them before! I was walking through a store with DugFinn and we were all like, "Whoa! Matzo balls!" We were going to buy them but they were too expensive. Anywho, yay! I love this story! And I can't wait to see the Bakura/Ryou thing! Woot!
| Reviewed By: Bobble [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 19:54 CDT
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It's very good! I usually don't like OCs but Yuai is impossible to not like. There isn't much Yami/Yugi though... Are you going to add a bit more before the story ends? Is Yuai going to find out about Yami? Please??? Continue soon please!!
| Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 21:17 CDT
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ooh, I love! I can wait for my ficcie if there's an epilouge!
| Reviewed By: Pharaoh's High Priestess On: March 29, 2004 12:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tamlin-san....I applaud you! I *love* your this story because it's realistic, well-written, an element that is sorely missing in a lot of fanfics today. I'd have to say, as much as I adore Yami and Yugi-chan, I'm also very disappointed in him. If he really was a 'friend' like he claimed to be, wouldn't he want to find out *why* Yuai lied to him? I guess he's just reacting to the hurt he's feeling. I actually like Yuai a lot more than I like Anzu...and she's an OC! To tell you the truth, I don't hate Anzu at all. I just feel she's isn't compatible with Yugi or Yami. Her friendship speeches are annoying, but then so is Yami's heart of the cards spiel, too. But Yami-sama is sooooo sexy, and Yugi-chan is very cute, so we forgive them.... Anyway, I hope Yugi gets over his pique, and Yuai is a lot more forthcoming...but then, I understand her shame....it isn't her fault at all, but the human psyche is wired in mysterious ways....Yuai's parents, their cronies and Ekko all need to die....*painfully*. Please have the Pharaoh curse them! And by the way, I printed out all the chapters. I tend to do that with stories I love....update soon!
| Reviewed By: RyokoMink [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 22:29 CST
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Woot! Another good chapter you have here. The beginning was HIGHlarious. And the matzo balls or whatever... The idea is amusing... Hmm... Kinda reminds me of the lunch at my school. I don't know about you but if you can take pizza and try (keyword, 'try') to bend it and it doesn't... Thats not... Good... Cheese sandwiches for me thanks! Poor Yuai, she really is a cool character. Oh, and please do the first one... I would like to know.(Other voice says: Where is the cheese?) No! The Bakura/Ryou thing! *is attacked by toast*
| Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 22:17 CST
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Ah, another finely taylored chapter! I absolutly /love/ the first part of the chapter! With Jounouchi putting on the performance for Kaiba... Heh, heh. That was really well writen! I love it! Oh! And poor Yuai! Yugi will eventually fine out about everything, right?! Things will get better! They have to! Yuai's already suffered so much. I feel for her, yo. She's cool! Ah! Eh? You read my fic?! And you like it?! Wow! *blush* Thanks! Heh, heh. So far, people seem to like the broccoli most and hate the phone. Heh. I try! Chapter 18 will be up soon! Anywho, again, awesome chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!
| Reviewed By: Dragonmaster TC ( Not logged in) On: March 28, 2004 09:49 CST
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Poor Yugi, Poor Yuai, Poor Honda....poor everyone, please update soon, another great chapter.
| Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 08:00 CST
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well, if I must choose a choice, I'd go for the first one with Bakura and Ryou. Oh, and I loved the angst!
| Title: hi
Reviewed By: Sesshomarusgirl586 On: March 24, 2004 18:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
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| Reviewed By: Saki (not signed in) On: March 22, 2004 14:14 CST
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Oh. My. God!! I LOVED this chapter! I would say my favorite one yet, minus the funny one when Kaiba wouldn't take his pills. I feel bad for Yugi tho..always doubting himself like that..but i'm happy for Yuai! She must explain to Yugi! and Kaiba must help her get free! wheee update soon!!
| Reviewed By: Dragonmaster TC (not logged in) On: March 22, 2004 11:52 CST
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*My Yugi Muse is being held back by some of my other muses* Good chapter, but I hope you get the next one up soon. I don't think Yugi likes the idea of not getting an explanaition, and looks about ready to take of that Ekkos guy all by himself
| Title: Here we are again, ne?
Reviewed By: Casey K (lazy ;)) On: March 22, 2004 01:52 CST
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Must I say it again? You're a great writer, this is a great chapter... you must have heard it a zillion times before, because it's so true. And can I vote again? Well, if I can, then the second one yet again, thankies!
| Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 00:52 CST
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Another wonderful chapter! Wow! You are good! Yay! I'm so happy that Yuai is finally free of that jerk! And Kaiba will make everything better, and... Worse? Hm. Interesting. Oh, poor Yugi. Doubting himself!? Aw... Yuai will explain, right?! Oh! Oh! Oh! Yugi should go to the dance with Yami! I mean, screw the rest of everyone! Yami deserves to go with Yugi and Yugi with Yami! And Anzu dosen't seem like such a slut anymore, thank the gods! Ah! I can't wait to see where this all ends up! Hee! Oh, and my choice for the side story is... number 1! The one about Bakura, Ryou and homework. I mean, they come out so rarely... They need more screen time!! Yo! Screen time!!! ^ ^
| Reviewed By: Casey K (lazy ;)) On: March 21, 2004 02:34 CST
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Most definitely the second one... I'd love to see someone who could give Kaiba a run for his money (that's a bad pun...) in the sarcasm department. Anywayz, great chapter! Please update again soon!
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