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Reviewed By: me On: August 14, 2004 19:27 PDT
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omg.....words can not express how beautiful that was when vegeta realized that he wanted something that he could never have from her....everything was going great...and then it explodes into another drama play. what is bulma so afraid of....and what the bloody hell is kakarrott doing still in the picture?
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Reviewed By: Bulma75****not logged innnnnn On: August 14, 2004 18:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg youre so EVIL! This story has been one hell of an emotional roller coster and today was the worst! Lol you led me to believe things would finally be healed between them, and then in one moment its completely shattered! And The whole love realization, about him wanting more was soo beautiful! PLEASe for the love of Kami lol fix things between those two SOON! Get rid of goku already! Im dyin' over here!
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Title: Unwanted
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 14, 2004 18:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOW I KNOW WHY IT'S CALLED UNWANTED...I FEEL FOR VEGETA..WHY CAN'T SHE JUST LOVE HIM...OH I HURT FOR HIM..PLEASE UPDATE SOON...MARIA
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Reviewed By: (< ~.~ )> On: August 11, 2004 20:20 PDT
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Wow this story is so0 good.Wonder what Nexus is up to..0.ohmmmm. well update soon
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Reviewed By: bobmeave On: August 11, 2004 19:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
an other really good chapter i am so excited i can't wait to read the next one and the next of unspoken. Update soon please!!
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Reviewed By: mona On: August 08, 2004 19:13 PDT
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PLEASE UPDATE SOON... IM DYING OF WAITING!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: meavebob On: August 03, 2004 20:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
an other really good chapter i am so excited i can't wait to read the next one and the next of unspoken. Update soon please!!
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Reviewed By: LisaB (not logged in) On: August 01, 2004 07:46 PDT
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Hmmm . . .now what's Nexus up to? And how long before Kakarrot's secret is known? A great chapter and I look forward to the next.
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Reviewed By: Namoi and Kakkabrat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 21:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found out you moved here, so I got to read two chapters in a row! YAY! I love your story and I hope you update soon.I think you are one of the best writers I have come across, please review my story it is Called " Dragon Ball Genesis " I also Have moved my fiction to this place once I found out yours were being erased because of content. Well I love your story, I hope you atleast like my story. Always, Namoi and Kakkabrat
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 19:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so aorry I haven't reviewed in so long. Things have been crazy around here. Anyway, these last chapters were amazing! I can't wait for more!!
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Reviewed By: me On: July 27, 2004 19:53 PDT
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man, i thought that kakkarot was going to fall for chi-chi!!! oh shit, bulma's in for it now!! what it this secret? i MUST know!!!!! and what is nexus up to now?
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 18:24 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, it is quite obvious that Kakarrott is hiding something from Bulma. It also seems as if Bulma is having a hard time putting her emotions in order. The ending of the chapter was unexpected and leaves me wondering how Vegeta will deal with this threat.
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Reviewed By: dbz fan jess On: July 25, 2004 22:01 PDT
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ahhh... what will happen now... nexus has a plan and bulma and vegeta are going to face off with each other... ha ha.... Its amazing how two ppl can be in love and not even realize it...well lets see the next chappie soon...
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Reviewed By: 4\ On: July 25, 2004 21:06 PDT
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hmmmmm i think the child of that lady has somthing important to do with Vegeta and bulma.... well i guess we all have to wait till net time. Keep up the great work >>>favorite fanfic so far
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Reviewed By: Bulma75****** On: July 25, 2004 17:30 PDT
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stop beating around the bush lol just get to the good stuff already! (Ie, this child of whoms real identity we all are pretty sure about! ) Dying over here! Update SOON!
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