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Reviewed By: me On: July 08, 2004 22:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! Keep on writing!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72-not logged in On: July 04, 2004 05:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Bulma, she has a lot of soul searching to do, doesn't she? Her confusion is heart breakin, but so is Vegeta's frustration. I have a feeling that Goku isn't all that he seems. I'm looking forward to seeing what happend next!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 17:35 PDT
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Well, just read all of this one in one sitting. That was quite a lot of delicious torment for one afternoon! Highly gripping fic! Now I've got this longing in my gut for another chapter--I *love* that feeling. It's almost as intense as the worst infantile pining for Vegeta this otaku has every conjured! Thanks for the fic!
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 16:06 PDT
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What a great chapter! You make V and B suffer like no one else--and I love you for it! I can't wait to discover Kakarrot's secret--it's a doozy, I'm sure. Patiently waiting for the next update, LisaB
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Reviewed By: mona On: July 03, 2004 14:17 PDT
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it was worth waiting!!!! god i love it and i like the curve you put in the story...having the audience to think that they would be together after this chapter...it was beautiful... update soon!!!!!!
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Title: Unwanted
Reviewed By: mlf On: July 02, 2004 20:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow what a story.so storng,i can't help but wonder why is he so afriad of loving her or even telling her that he loves her.and when will goku tell her the truth about himself.i just can't wait for the next chapter so please update soon.maria
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Reviewed By: Sulawesi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 17:19 PDT
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You have to update sooner! GOD I LOVE THIS STORY! it is one of my favs. Keep up the great great great work. I kinda feel sorry for Vegeta. :( Poor guy... bulma should be shot in the face! Yeah... just kidding. But really, I want to see them together soon!!! PLEASE I BEG YOU!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 18:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gah! I can't beleive I missed not one, but two updates to this wonderful story. Actually, I must confess that this is my favorite current B/V. Bulma has a lot of soul-searching to do, doesn't she? Somehow, I don't envy her position...
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: June 17, 2004 20:28 PDT
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There was mention about you starting another B/V story. As much as the angst factor brings your stories to life, is there any chance you could go against the trend of your other stories and make it less angsty and depressing.
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Title: BEAUTIFUL!!!!
Reviewed By: mona On: June 17, 2004 11:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AMAZING...PLEASE UPDATE ASAP... I AM HOOKED TO YOUR STORY AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAP...^_^
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 09:40 PDT
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I really loved the tension between these two. And Kakarrot is keeping secrets, I know. How far will he let this go? Patiently waiting for your next chappie!
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Reviewed By: dbz fan jess On: June 16, 2004 22:13 PDT
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I liked that it was really good... I can't wait for your next update
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Reviewed By: Sulawesi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 13:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. It has been a week sence you updated. You should post another chapter soon. Faster than once every two months. Or maybe once a month. Anyway.... Yeah, post another chapter sooon!!! I want to know what happens!
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Reviewed By: American Soldier On: May 28, 2004 21:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet, what happens next. Hey I ship out to bootcamp june 2nd you think you can get a chapter posted before I go. That would be so Awsome. I am inlove with this story. I hope Bulma comes into relization to loving vegeta---and I have a feeling Goku/kakarott has married Chi-chi. Urmmm...
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Reviewed By: me On: May 26, 2004 22:52 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Argh! You're so evil!!! ^_^
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