| "The Last Glimpse of Hope" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sesshy85 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2011 19:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Words cannot describe how wonderful this story is. From to beginning to end I was glued to it...reading every lime every sentence in the hopes it never ends. This was well written, and a well rounded story. It's one of those fics I called rare..it's rare for me to be this attach to it and you should write more all I can say is god-bless. For this truly is a blessing ;) |
Reviewed By: ninjagurl512 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2011 01:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just discovered this wonderful story. Definitely one of the best fics I've ever read! |
Reviewed By: naruto rules [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 06:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
best dragonball z fanfic i've ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i know most people would beg you for i sequel but i realise nothing would live up to this.
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Reviewed By: naruto rules [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 06:12 EDT
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shouldn't some of the poeple from the manga that story crosses over be able to fight? e-mail jcogginsa@comcast.com
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Title: help me
Reviewed By: naruto rules [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 04:55 EDT
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i haven't started reading the fic yet i'm sure i will love it. i have a probablem though. could you explain how to change my e-mail address on my profile without losing all my stuff. my e-mail is jcogginsa@comcast.com
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Title: Belle It was beautiful.
Reviewed By: Anime_Angel88 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 10:05 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Belle. I know you must have put your whole heart in to this. I really admire your writing. I still have tears in my eyes. Please never lose your love of writing. I can't find words to express how much I love this story. I can only hope I'll become as good as you are. Please, please write more beautiful stories like this.
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Aralyn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2006 23:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh. I love all of them to death! hopefully they will all be reunited in heaven, and they all seem to have led the most romantic and perfect lives. thank you so much for including the epilogue. it was the perfect ending to the story. ~Aaralyn~
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Title: One last note
Reviewed By: Aralyn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 03:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Also i was reading some of your other reviews, and i would just like to mention how much i feel all of the characters added to the story. They were all absolutely perfect, Especially you're main three, Raine, Belle, and J'Dee. They were all so truly unique and perfect for their role in the story, and in the end they all just truly made the story one of the best that i have ever read. So don't even think about leaving one of them out becuz without even one of them, the entire story would fall apart. Amazing writing and an inspiring story. One which maybe we should all listen to. Think about it; Love and Karma, two very important things in the world. Thank you for this story. ~Aaralyn~
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Title: Incredible even the 2nd time
Reviewed By: Aralyn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 03:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I seem to truly be addicted this story, having just spend the last 4 nights staying up late to re read it. especially enjoyable with new music. now every time i listen to this song, i will remember it. It is truly amazing how one story can be read over and over, and yet it is like reading it for the first time. Each time with a new meaning and each time with new emotions. It is truly the most amazing fic that i have read on Mediaminer. I don't know how you do it. I honestly hope that maybe you'll find the inspiration to write another story because i can guarantee that i will read it. I'm still almost reeling from the feeling of completion the story leaves you with, and it's the absolutely perfect ending. Perhaps you should consider publishing this book seeing as it's long enough and in my opinion, the most perfect story to read over and over. My favorite part of the story? I truly love the love, as strange as that sounds, because after all the pain and violence (which add to the story) there is still so much wonderful emotion left, and that's one of the most important things. I can't wait until i have time, some day to read this story again.
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Title: Gorgeous
Reviewed By: ~Aaralyn~ On: August 13, 2005 17:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say you had me worried for a while on some of the chapters when everyone was perfectly happy and nothing interesting happened. Then it got all dark and everything, but ended up turning up fabulous!!~! I'm so happy. I especially luved the AV formula. That was absolutely Hysterical!!!! and i agree with them that Vegeta really isn't a bad person he just has a really really bad past with Frieza. You should make a prequel to this story explaining what happened to Vegeta and all that as kind of a background to the saiyan race. And what happened to our last chapter?? i'm so confused especially since this is more an a year later. I want my next chapter!!! and I luved all the characters, you did such a good job on them. Though it would have been funny if J'Dee instead of going after Vegeta had gotten pissed off at Radditz and Brolli and used her powers to smack them around in front of a whole bunch of saiyans. Like smacking them into walls with her power or making it so they would have to live out all the pain she caused. That would have been rele cool too. Either way, it was just an amazing fic, and i really luved it! Especially the ending, which truly was happily ever after. And WOW did Sess and Belle have a lot of children. Geez! but i knew he didn't die!!! HAHAHAHA i was totally right, and i've almost used up all my characters in this review, which is absolutely awesome, becuz i know most ppl like long reviews. Your story is FANTASTIC!! Write more stuff.I'll read it!
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Reviewed By: Hypnomaniac 17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 12:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, still waiting for that last chapter. It's not like I have a life or anything! ;)
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Title: right...
Reviewed By: Catie On: January 23, 2005 20:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok there was a few things that didnt make sense... they were bidding like in the millinos for 1 girl and they said that wasnt a lot but when the bidded for the other girl and it was only like 50 thousand people were all wooo. And the one witch girl!!!!!!!!!!!!! her part in the story sucks!!!!!!!!!! I mean really sucks that wholepart is really really bad. I think you should just like delete her part. It dosent make sense and her part is really corny. But hey thats just my opinion. By the way im still typing because i wanted to get less than a thousand words and i suceeded! GO ME my end total is 893
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Title: My fault
Reviewed By: AngelWings [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 11:40 EDT
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oops I was sitting here reading your reveiws and I noticed I made a BIG boo-boo!!! Instead of writing "This is the greatest fic I eva read" I put this is the greatest fic I eva wrote. That was not my intention at all to put that and I dont wanna take credit for your fic if that's what it seemed like. So I GREATLY apologize for this terrible mistake. Again I am sorry and Im juss taking responsiblity for what happened. Other then that your fic was truely inspiring and heart-felt. Please continue the good work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: AngelWings [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 23:44 EDT
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This was the greatest fic I eva wrote!!! It made me laugh and it made me cry!!! It's juss... juss...(breaks into hystrical sobs) its juss soooo BEAUtiful!!! I loved it... When I read the first chapter I juss couldnt stop rrading until I read the entire thang. I was up half the night reading your fic. Excellent work ^_^ I tip my hat off to you Mabelle!!!
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Title: Yo!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Leonen On: July 14, 2004 23:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, this fic rocks! You seriously need to get up that last chapter. We've all been waiting for a while now and are getting kind of anxious! Please hurry!
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