| "The Last Glimpse of Hope" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: Alpha/Tango Morita On: June 17, 2004 23:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be the greatest story i have ever read. I waited and checked everyday to see if it had been updated. the thought of the ending helped me to survive another school year. to the incredibly talented authors thank you from the deepest part of my heart. i loved this story. i hope to read more of your stories very soon. PS-Just ignore the flamers they can't tell a good story if it bit them in the ass.
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Reviewed By: Hunny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 18:40 EDT
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I've been dying to see how this story was going to turn out, now that it's nearly over I wish it didn't have to end yet. I've truly enjoyed it and now have to find another piece to keep me as interested. And let me tell you it's not easy finding too many good authors. Great job ladies! I'd love to read whatever else you turn out.
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Reviewed By: Black_Tsunami01 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 14:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! It was great! I enjoyed this story a lot! It's definately one of my favorite stories!
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Reviewed By: wintergreen On: June 10, 2004 23:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i seriuosly love all of it! well except for the end, started getting really cornt then, but you did a great job!
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Reviewed By: first_love [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 14:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok you still got my mind in this story of your's. what will happen to vet. boy? and the others and belle? sess better use his healing sword on her.... ps. i love you guy'z for this story.
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Title: Can I Tell You...
Reviewed By: You Rock! On: May 30, 2004 04:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In concerns to ratings... I wish I could give Bonus. First thing, I'm new to MM & this is the first story that caught my eye. I, in no way, have the means to emote how immpressed I was reading this story, but am trying nonetheless. Well anyhoo I started reading & I don't even know the time I began, but a few hours later I reach what seems to be the lastest chapter & I am not even tired & actually want more, no need more! I need completion! This is so well written & though dealing with a difficulat situation & very sad and depressing at times the glimmer of hope kept me reading, not to mention the excellent casting which captivated from the very beginning. I am a bit more than disappointed by Goku quite a number of times but hey, not even remotely enough to stop reading. When Sess died I was like "No!!! This can't be happening! Is the author so demented?!" It was a very emotional moment so please forgive me my so honest and blunt sentiments. Trust me this isn't even skimming my actual thoughts, ;), as he's one of my absolute favorite characters even though I have no clue which anime show he belongs to, if in fact he does, since it is quite possible you have original characters. I am not aware of all anime shows to be absolutely certain one way or the other. It really did come as a blow, even I had strong vibes way ahead of the actaull slaying... I was still unprepared deeply drained. I so knew Belle's feelings emotions, that's how hard I was hit and invested. Now that you forgive that little outbrust THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH for making my suspcions correct & bringing back (my, hehehe) Sess. I just kept anticipating this moment the most but then that's when you chose to end your most recent chapter. I mean I felt so elated & equally crushed at the same moment, never knowing that was even possible :(. By the way, this wasn't by far the only emotional experience for me throughtout the incomplete journey I've shared with you, but that glimmer of hope keeps shining through, no matter how bad things got for any one of the characters...like I said even after Sess' death. This being said, all the characters, whether or not you stay true to their anime origin, are amazing creations & well represented as I found them to be truely individualistic & 3D. I don't know what else I can say to convince you that I am in fact so addicted, trust me I wouldn't be up at 4am & writting a reply if I wasn't, and the only thing which worries me now is the dates between updates... I really cannot wait so long. Please all I ask, knowing time is a precious commodity, that you please at least try not to torture us for too long... You know it almost makes me wish I hadn't seen your story until it was complete, almost. You don't even know hard it for me to even think such a thing considering my attachment & how much I loved it. Anyhow I leave you with this, this is an amazing story and so well written and thought out, I honestly believe you have an excellent chance at fame as a writer, director...etc, if you so choose to incline. I so absoluetly cannot wait to read further. TC.
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Title: Holy cow!
Reviewed By: halfbreed saiyan goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 06:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has gotta be the most brill fic i've had the pleasure of reading so far. Keep on writing and let us know of any others you have in the making. ^_^
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Title: i love you sooo much for writing this!
Reviewed By: beans the dragon On: May 24, 2004 20:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i cant beleive it! this story is sooo good! its addicting! ahhhhh! i cant wait for the next chapter! your soooo good at writing!
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Title: Sweet Strory
Reviewed By: Kate Mang On: May 16, 2004 20:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story Since i just registered for MediaMiner I never looked at this site before and I wrote something similer. Its manly about the romance between Sess and someone else. So if you read it I hope you don't think I copied your story. Great Chapters You had some grammmer mistakes but everyone does that sometimes
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Reviewed By: first_love [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 14:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok you still have me hooked people. Will bell be saved by sess? will jay live? will veg. kill vash? Will raine get to have a baby? will goku marry chichi? PLEASE FINSH!
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Title: r u done?
Reviewed By: risky chan On: April 25, 2004 10:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am HOOKED on your fan fic! its like a drug, im serious. but i noticed that 16 chapters have been completed and its not done yet. you MUST keep updating! i think im going to go insane if this is the end! i'll keep getting more and more annoying if this doesn't get updated/ finished! i really wanna know what happens to Belle! uugggg! this is sooooo good~!
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Title: Hunny
Reviewed By: Hunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 18:42 EDT
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I really love you guys! Ya know how tired I was last night, I was practically falling asleep, but I just couldn't wait to finish those chaps. Damn they were amazing. Please tell me the rush for Sovereign was so Tenseiga could work its magic.(I love Sess) You guys rule!
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Reviewed By: AngelOfBlades [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 22:56 EDT
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Did i miss somthing?? when did Sess die? what's going on?
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Reviewed By: Hunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 21:58 EDT
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You're killing me with the suspense, Please, Please update soon. There's too much of a shortage of great stories out here, and I'm dying to read more. I never review, but I'm beggin' here!:)
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Reviewed By: Rook01 On: April 08, 2004 12:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read the first chapter and I like this fanfic! Mainly based on the fact that it's presented to us the readers from different viewpoints. This is a very useful method of writing and interesting. Keep up the great work!
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