"The Last Glimpse of Hope" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mei (the best character in Pg-13) On: April 06, 2004 14:52 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I don't get the people who don't like your work, if they do not like it why read it? It's great the characters go pretty in depth. Though sometimes it's hard to read through the different scenes and know where you're at.
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Reviewed By: AngelOfBlades [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 02:01 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow. This is without a doubt one of the best fanfics I've ever read. The only fic better then it is "Outlaw Star: The Ryukonen Sword". There are a few minor errors here and there, but nothing that takes away from the overall quality of the fic. Ignore that idiot JB, and most importantly, UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: Misastar On: March 31, 2004 22:32 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: All I have to say is screw the reviewer. This story is one of the best stories I've read. The thing is that this story is really long and if this reviewer had the audacity to read all that you've written and bitch about it then they obviously have nothing better to do. We should hunt the pesimistic bastard down and tell them to go fuck themselves. They're just trying to make you feel down about your story so don't listen to them. Besides I doubt they have any stories up. Anyway keep up the good work!
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Title: To the wirter's of this story! Reviewed By: first_love [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 12:34 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ok i just got throw reading the authers notes and i got to say i'm insulted that the guy'z that insulted not only them be me as well. I'm not ashume to say i like reading what they have done. So to all those that just have insulted the wirters you are notthing but a big fat jurk that has no resapte for those that like to wirte storys. i was reased to tret people the way you wanted to be tearted as so i have no resapet for those's that inuslt people with out a sound thought! i for one love what is happeing and this is my sound reviwe for this story. i don't wirte reivwes unleast i feel that the people desivre to have one. i just want so say thank you authers that wirtes this story! you have made me wornder what is going to happen AGIN! i mint add you guy'z are good. don't stop okay.
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Title: GREAT CHAPTERS! Reviewed By: LeeLuoChan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2004 22:56 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really don't get the people who are acting the way they are towards your fic..I really like it..And I look forward to more chapters ^-^..All I can say is keep up the good work! And don't pay any attention to bad reviews that aren't constructive critism...A story is a story and the way it is written is up to it's author/s..People that don't like it simply don't have to read it any further.To each it's own...Good work on these chapters! I look forward to future chapters! ~Melis
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Title: Writer Reviewed By: BigMomma3 On: March 29, 2004 18:15 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really enjoyed this. Keep going. Don't listen to the others harsh critism. As a writer myself, I suggest you write another chapter. I want to find out what happens next. So keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Hunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 08:34 EST Comment/Review: Ok I don't really have time for this I'll be late for work,but... There's nothing like consturctive criticism to help better a person. i see nothing wrong and think it should be taken with a grain of salt. As far as the story not progressing andthe women being violated and gathering around for chit chat... jUST WHAT DO YOU THINK THE LIFE OF A SLAVE WAS? How many women from ages ago, and even now, had to bide their time, wait for thwe right moment to survive and escape. Do you think the Underground Railroad was such an easy task? Lots of black men, and women, were strong enough to strike their masters down, but how far would they have gotten? Canada was a long way to run. As for this story yes Vash, Sess, and a number of others are strong , but killing one master isn't enough aspecially when you're worrying about others not just yourself. I feel this is an interesting story that I'd hate to see rushed just so you see a point. And I hope it gets carried out a lot longer. And I personally feel would like to see more smut in it but thats not all that productive to their story, so we all suffer our own burdens. So once again say what you will I live in Ameirca where we can outright curse our own leader without fear. So take it ladies and continue along so far so good to the rest of us. Bye!
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Reviewed By: Joshua Brownie On: March 25, 2004 16:34 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10 Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review: I again reiterate. I find that your style, and overall structure of the story is very sound, however, I find that this is going no where. It seems to me to be just about a bunch of women getting together, stating that they wish to get away, having meetings, and nothing but silly jokes. I find no plot other than sex against thier will. Ah yes, and let us not forget the pointless tournament. Perhaps it would be best if you just had Vash destroy the planet and get it over with? J.B. PS::: I find that only Belle and Raine seem to be seriosu abotu this fic. J'dee seems just to be imature and trying to strike tastless humor.
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Title: Dranged Fanfic Lover Reviewed By: Debbietherex On: March 21, 2004 15:31 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I like thos fic very much. I agree with you this fic is does have the beginings of a plot if not more than that. I personally think you are doing a very good job with this fic and building up to the plot. As for your the time it takes for you to update this story is worth waiting for. any one who doesn't think so should not be reading this story. It's a wast of thier time. Once again I would like to say that this is the best fic I have read and is not smut.
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Title: I LUV IT! Reviewed By: LeeLuo On: March 07, 2004 19:03 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is the first fic I've come a cross in quite awhile that is SOO different then the usual. I really LUV reading your fic and can't wait to see what is instore for the characters in the future!:)I also like the whole Sess and Belle thing. It's soo cute..but then again so are the other couples! Keep up the GREAT work! ~Melis
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Title: first_love Reviewed By: first_love [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 18:15 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i for one enjoy your story so don't stop ok? PLEASE FINSH THE STORY!!! will r/z have kids? will all get out of this alive? will veg. boy fall in love with jay? will veg. live? what happens????? u have to finsh this.
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Reviewed By: JoshuaBrownie On: March 02, 2004 13:18 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review: I find that your style, and overall structure of the story is very sound, however, I find that this is going no where. It seems to me to be just about a bunch of women getting together, stating that they wish to get away, ahving meetings, and nothing but silly jokes. I find no plot other than sex against thier will. I do not soley enjoy stories based on that. Perhaps a plot would help? Sincerely, JB
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Reviewed By: Sailor Tiamat On: February 13, 2004 00:50 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This fic is wonderful!!! ^______^ Your characters and situations are amazing! Just one point, you gotta work on your grammer and puncuation. I got lost a couple of times and had to re-read a couple of lines. But other than that, Keep up the great and please update soon!!
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Title: are you gunna update? Reviewed By: Gotens ssj gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2004 10:48 EST Comment/Review: *prods* c'mon you know you want to *prods* lol c'mon ooh making it eight reviews not counting that this is my second... ;p ~J'dee
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Title: trunks Reviewed By: Nina Angeles [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 19:17 EST Comment/Review: no trunks. oh please. i would be his concubine any day of the weak. other than the fact the half saiyans are missing, this is a great story
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