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| "The Last Glimpse of Hope" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] | | Pages (4): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 › » ] | Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Aralyn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2006 23:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh. I love all of them to death! hopefully they will all be reunited in heaven, and they all seem to have led the most romantic and perfect lives. thank you so much for including the epilogue. it was the perfect ending to the story. ~Aaralyn~
| Title: One last note
Reviewed By: Aralyn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 03:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Also i was reading some of your other reviews, and i would just like to mention how much i feel all of the characters added to the story. They were all absolutely perfect, Especially you're main three, Raine, Belle, and J'Dee. They were all so truly unique and perfect for their role in the story, and in the end they all just truly made the story one of the best that i have ever read. So don't even think about leaving one of them out becuz without even one of them, the entire story would fall apart. Amazing writing and an inspiring story. One which maybe we should all listen to. Think about it; Love and Karma, two very important things in the world. Thank you for this story. ~Aaralyn~
| Title: Incredible even the 2nd time
Reviewed By: Aralyn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 03:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I seem to truly be addicted this story, having just spend the last 4 nights staying up late to re read it. especially enjoyable with new music. now every time i listen to this song, i will remember it. It is truly amazing how one story can be read over and over, and yet it is like reading it for the first time. Each time with a new meaning and each time with new emotions. It is truly the most amazing fic that i have read on Mediaminer. I don't know how you do it. I honestly hope that maybe you'll find the inspiration to write another story because i can guarantee that i will read it. I'm still almost reeling from the feeling of completion the story leaves you with, and it's the absolutely perfect ending. Perhaps you should consider publishing this book seeing as it's long enough and in my opinion, the most perfect story to read over and over. My favorite part of the story? I truly love the love, as strange as that sounds, because after all the pain and violence (which add to the story) there is still so much wonderful emotion left, and that's one of the most important things. I can't wait until i have time, some day to read this story again.
| Title: Gorgeous
Reviewed By: ~Aaralyn~ On: August 13, 2005 17:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say you had me worried for a while on some of the chapters when everyone was perfectly happy and nothing interesting happened. Then it got all dark and everything, but ended up turning up fabulous!!~! I'm so happy. I especially luved the AV formula. That was absolutely Hysterical!!!! and i agree with them that Vegeta really isn't a bad person he just has a really really bad past with Frieza. You should make a prequel to this story explaining what happened to Vegeta and all that as kind of a background to the saiyan race. And what happened to our last chapter?? i'm so confused especially since this is more an a year later. I want my next chapter!!! and I luved all the characters, you did such a good job on them. Though it would have been funny if J'Dee instead of going after Vegeta had gotten pissed off at Radditz and Brolli and used her powers to smack them around in front of a whole bunch of saiyans. Like smacking them into walls with her power or making it so they would have to live out all the pain she caused. That would have been rele cool too. Either way, it was just an amazing fic, and i really luved it! Especially the ending, which truly was happily ever after. And WOW did Sess and Belle have a lot of children. Geez! but i knew he didn't die!!! HAHAHAHA i was totally right, and i've almost used up all my characters in this review, which is absolutely awesome, becuz i know most ppl like long reviews. Your story is FANTASTIC!! Write more stuff.I'll read it!
| Reviewed By: Hypnomaniac 17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 12:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, still waiting for that last chapter. It's not like I have a life or anything! ;)
| Title: right...
Reviewed By: Catie On: January 23, 2005 20:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok there was a few things that didnt make sense... they were bidding like in the millinos for 1 girl and they said that wasnt a lot but when the bidded for the other girl and it was only like 50 thousand people were all wooo. And the one witch girl!!!!!!!!!!!!! her part in the story sucks!!!!!!!!!! I mean really sucks that wholepart is really really bad. I think you should just like delete her part. It dosent make sense and her part is really corny. But hey thats just my opinion. By the way im still typing because i wanted to get less than a thousand words and i suceeded! GO ME my end total is 893
| Title: My fault
Reviewed By: AngelWings [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 11:40 EDT
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oops I was sitting here reading your reveiws and I noticed I made a BIG boo-boo!!! Instead of writing "This is the greatest fic I eva read" I put this is the greatest fic I eva wrote. That was not my intention at all to put that and I dont wanna take credit for your fic if that's what it seemed like. So I GREATLY apologize for this terrible mistake. Again I am sorry and Im juss taking responsiblity for what happened. Other then that your fic was truely inspiring and heart-felt. Please continue the good work! ^_^
| Reviewed By: AngelWings [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 23:44 EDT
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This was the greatest fic I eva wrote!!! It made me laugh and it made me cry!!! It's juss... juss...(breaks into hystrical sobs) its juss soooo BEAUtiful!!! I loved it... When I read the first chapter I juss couldnt stop rrading until I read the entire thang. I was up half the night reading your fic. Excellent work ^_^ I tip my hat off to you Mabelle!!!
| Title: Yo!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Leonen On: July 14, 2004 23:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, this fic rocks! You seriously need to get up that last chapter. We've all been waiting for a while now and are getting kind of anxious! Please hurry!
| Reviewed By: Alpha/Tango Morita On: June 17, 2004 23:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be the greatest story i have ever read. I waited and checked everyday to see if it had been updated. the thought of the ending helped me to survive another school year. to the incredibly talented authors thank you from the deepest part of my heart. i loved this story. i hope to read more of your stories very soon. PS-Just ignore the flamers they can't tell a good story if it bit them in the ass.
| Reviewed By: Hunny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 18:40 EDT
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I've been dying to see how this story was going to turn out, now that it's nearly over I wish it didn't have to end yet. I've truly enjoyed it and now have to find another piece to keep me as interested. And let me tell you it's not easy finding too many good authors. Great job ladies! I'd love to read whatever else you turn out.
| Reviewed By: Black_Tsunami01 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 14:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! It was great! I enjoyed this story a lot! It's definately one of my favorite stories!
| Reviewed By: wintergreen On: June 10, 2004 23:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i seriuosly love all of it! well except for the end, started getting really cornt then, but you did a great job!
| Reviewed By: first_love [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 14:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok you still got my mind in this story of your's. what will happen to vet. boy? and the others and belle? sess better use his healing sword on her.... ps. i love you guy'z for this story.
| Title: Can I Tell You...
Reviewed By: You Rock! On: May 30, 2004 04:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In concerns to ratings... I wish I could give Bonus. First thing, I'm new to MM & this is the first story that caught my eye. I, in no way, have the means to emote how immpressed I was reading this story, but am trying nonetheless. Well anyhoo I started reading & I don't even know the time I began, but a few hours later I reach what seems to be the lastest chapter & I am not even tired & actually want more, no need more! I need completion! This is so well written & though dealing with a difficulat situation & very sad and depressing at times the glimmer of hope kept me reading, not to mention the excellent casting which captivated from the very beginning. I am a bit more than disappointed by Goku quite a number of times but hey, not even remotely enough to stop reading. When Sess died I was like "No!!! This can't be happening! Is the author so demented?!" It was a very emotional moment so please forgive me my so honest and blunt sentiments. Trust me this isn't even skimming my actual thoughts, ;), as he's one of my absolute favorite characters even though I have no clue which anime show he belongs to, if in fact he does, since it is quite possible you have original characters. I am not aware of all anime shows to be absolutely certain one way or the other. It really did come as a blow, even I had strong vibes way ahead of the actaull slaying... I was still unprepared deeply drained. I so knew Belle's feelings emotions, that's how hard I was hit and invested. Now that you forgive that little outbrust THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH for making my suspcions correct & bringing back (my, hehehe) Sess. I just kept anticipating this moment the most but then that's when you chose to end your most recent chapter. I mean I felt so elated & equally crushed at the same moment, never knowing that was even possible :(. By the way, this wasn't by far the only emotional experience for me throughtout the incomplete journey I've shared with you, but that glimmer of hope keeps shining through, no matter how bad things got for any one of the characters...like I said even after Sess' death. This being said, all the characters, whether or not you stay true to their anime origin, are amazing creations & well represented as I found them to be truely individualistic & 3D. I don't know what else I can say to convince you that I am in fact so addicted, trust me I wouldn't be up at 4am & writting a reply if I wasn't, and the only thing which worries me now is the dates between updates... I really cannot wait so long. Please all I ask, knowing time is a precious commodity, that you please at least try not to torture us for too long... You know it almost makes me wish I hadn't seen your story until it was complete, almost. You don't even know hard it for me to even think such a thing considering my attachment & how much I loved it. Anyhow I leave you with this, this is an amazing story and so well written and thought out, I honestly believe you have an excellent chance at fame as a writer, director...etc, if you so choose to incline. I so absoluetly cannot wait to read further. TC.
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