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Reviewed By: ScottishFae [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT! YAY! This has been a very emotionally and physically exhausting week for me so far and I still have two more days to go until the weekend (and I do plan to party hard as my reward) but I can't tell you how happy I was that I got to read your update. I'm almost at tears just b/c I have something that has released a little of the stress on me! So thanks so much! Okay now on to actually reviewing your fic: I love how you have Inu's and Kag's relationship. It's very different than how most people do it and it's just awesome. You can really tell there is a bond between the two even if it isn't anything beyond friendship. So kudos there. I didn't even think about the Inari still being out there...duh duh duuuuuuuuh! I'm excited to see who else will be out there...will Youko be attracted to her?! OOoooooo! I can't wait for the next update and I sooo want to see some more deliciously scrumptious Hiei! It's just not a story w/o his sexyness! I am very jealous of you if you can write such good chapters w/o your muse. Mine hates me, like my car, and refuses to work, again...like me car. Oh well. Hurricane Frances has finally passed us (now we have to worry about Hurricane Ivan) and so hopefully I'll be able to do some more writing on my own fics (w/o the risk of power outages) but I do have 3 papers due within the next 2 weeks and those take number one priority. Hopefully I'll start posting my newest Mir/Kag fic soon. But Until Next Time...GREAT JOB Sfae.
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Reviewed By: badassreviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 22:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
yay!! That was great!!! Love it! I so hope Hiei and Kag see eachother soon.
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Reviewed By: rachelw@cyberback.com On: August 30, 2004 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im glad you decided to finally update. I read Scottishfae's story and she mentions the deal the two of you made. :) great, I love her stories also. Now, maybe both of them will be updated. Thanks again for the wonderful update and I hope to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: suzieq202 On: August 30, 2004 00:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say this is a great story keep up the good work. i know you have a busy life but try to update more cause this is a great story and people will lose intrest in it if you dont update.
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Title: PWEASE?
Reviewed By: Phoxy22 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 08:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please right more soon. PLEASE. I love this story. Do you have it on fanfic.net? I think I have read it there before... JA NE
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Title: dunno
Reviewed By: maika On: August 28, 2004 02:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
daymm!!! i really like dis story!! mayn, im so hapee when hiei is so jealous when inuyasha touched kagome! hah! dats fo u hiei fo caring so much about ur pride!
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Reviewed By: lunabelle On: August 27, 2004 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
it must be nice having two guys fighting over you, of course in Kagome's case the fighting might just end in death of one of her suitors. very good chapter, though it was a bit short; but hey, when the muse is gone it is hard to write anything. i hope your muse comes back for this story but i will definately have to check out the new story you are writing. update soon, really wanting to know what Kurama has to say to Hiei. later
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: August 27, 2004 13:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
lol I wonder what'll happen next.
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heyyyyyyyy! LOVED it Mija! I'm cathing up, I promise. Gonna start your new story in a sec. Well, that wasn't diappointing, it was brilliant. I hope your must will stop being so...dishelpful and that you can make another chappie sooooon! Love ya! -Slywolf9 ~^-^~
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Reviewed By: ScottishFae [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 23:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I'm so happy! And after 3 failed attempts I'm finally liking the beginning of the next update for Shuichi's Cousin. Hopefully I'll have time to update this weekend. I said I would update if you did and so I'm keeping my word! I like this update, even if it was short, I"m just glad you didn't abandon it. It's hard to go back to fics you've stopped for a while, I know that from experience! I absolutely love this idea and I love how you make Hiei so carnal and sexy...oh wait he is already, but you get my point! I'm kinda sorta drawing from your "Hiei energy" now, I'm bringing Hiei down to his base insticts for a second in SC and I think you've done the best of showing this of anyone I know of and therefore you are the best person to look to for inspiration. I hope you don't mind. Oh well, I'm running out of characters (why did they put a limit on review lengths anyway...oh wait i know...stupid ppl who waste space w/ "update" for a million in a half pages). Well keep up the great work and I look forward to seeing an update soon. I'm hoping to be able to read more of your fics this weekend too but first I need to read for my classes! Until Next Time... Sfae
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 23:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
cools beans. I waited so long for this. and I was not disapointed. great job. now what is going to happen?
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Reviewed By: shadow_megami On: August 26, 2004 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story need to get more chapters out for me. Really like the ending of the chapter 16
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Reviewed By: ScottishFae [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I never realized until just recently that this was your fic! I can't tell you how much I absolutely adore it! I don't know if I ever reviewed it or not but I am now! I"m trying to review at least one of all my readers/reviewers fics currently! But seriously, OMG! I LOVE THIS FIC! You are just waaaay to creative for your own good. You should soooo update soon! I'll update if you do ;) hehe! Well again, love this fic so much and when I get over shell shock (i'm kind of ashamed I didn't know this was yours and that I hadn't reviewed until now) I'll write you a better review. Well I"m definetly off to read more of your fics...Until Next Time... Sfae
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Reviewed By: hieifan92 On: August 09, 2004 17:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love Hiei/Kagome fics!!PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tymberwolf18 On: August 02, 2004 03:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. Please update soon. I like the plot line very, very, VERY much.
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