| "New Mission" Reviews/Comments [ 243 ] |
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 22:41 CDT
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i read a one shot lemon you wrote a wile back and it seems thet, that one shot could be an epolugue of sorts, you know, "friend or foe"
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Reviewed By: Firedemon86(not signed in) On: September 29, 2004 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm totaly hooked on this story. I love the plot and I love Hiei/Kagome parings. SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I can't wait to see what happens. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: zrofyre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 03:25 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, Yay! this fic just rocks my world! I love it and am obsessed, and can't wait to read more. I know, I know: the muse is AWOL. I'm content enough with the ideas forming in my own mind. I just want you to know that this fic is great, is inspiring me to write again ( yeah, my muse took a big break also ), and that there is NO pressure. I know, I know, everyone probably says that, but we, your readers, are a patient enough group, and willing to wait for the muse to get over it's hissy fit. Hiei's reactions and struggles are awesome! I love the mating ritual you take them through! It so shows the basic instincts that overrule him in his full demon form. I also love the fact that you make Inuyasha out to be a good guy. Yeah, he has his temper, but he's a rational being with feelings, motivations, and good sound reasoning behind him. Too often I read stories that have him just being a comedy relief bit, or the overreactional, overemotional bastard. You make him out to be a char I can enjoy and appreciate. So I think I am done spilling effervescant praise, and I will leave off with this: Don't worry about rushing a new chap out, our imaginations will supply enough to get us by. (You've sparked all sorts of good ideas!) C-ya's, huggles, Zrofyre
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Reviewed By: evlmnkyslvenmyarvnt [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i didnt notice any bad grammer and i really enjoy it hope the nexFont Colort chappter comes up soon
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eeeeeeeeeee! Loves it, hehehehe. This story came recommended by Somnambulicious and since her stories are fabulous I thought that this one would be too... and it was!! hehehe Veeeeeeeery interesting. I cannot wait to see how things will progress between Kagome/Inuyasha and Kagome/Hiei. (PS-- how do you prounouce that name? lol Never seen the yu-yu show)Keep up the great work-- hope to read more from you soon! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: rini-chan On: September 26, 2004 13:16 CDT
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*gives author her favorite flame thrower* You can use this to encourage your muse if you want.
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! please update soon! I want hiei and kagome to get to gether!
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Reviewed By: Inu_chick24 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked your story very much and hope you will update your story very soon. I also volunteer my services as a beta reader if you need one.
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Reviewed By: Doggy Ears On: September 22, 2004 06:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon please please please please please please!!!!!!
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Title: HEY
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 *n.s.i.* On: September 11, 2004 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey you! whats awol mean? i forgot...ack. well....poor Kags. Glad her an Yash are so comfy wit e/o tho. thats always good cause...ya. nvm that, lol. anywho, your doin graet...sooo...i hope you update! love n support n all my prayers...-Sly ~^-^~
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: September 09, 2004 19:21 CDT
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oh, HIei's gonna get an earful....
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Reviewed By: Kit ^..^ On: September 09, 2004 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm... yeah Im pretty sure Kouga is gonna try to mate w/ her, right? but what about Sessho & Naraku? Is Hiei gonna show up in the past & save Kagome? PLEASE update ASAP, the anticipation is killing me
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 05:25 CDT
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Ummm, how is letting the mark wear off going to prevent other demons from trying to mate Kagome in the 6 months it lasts? I figured Inu would say, "Well, uh, you could accept me."
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 00:46 CDT
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So Kouga, and Inu may go after her. What about Sess and Naraku. They both love challenges and hate when someone upstarts them. So Kagome's life is going to get a bit more hectic isn't it? cools.
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 23:40 CDT
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eeekk well you just made a prequel to friend or foe you do realise that dont you
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