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Reviewed By: foxylilraven On: May 24, 2004 19:45 CDT
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one question, after kag and hiei mate he will want to accompany kag to hunt the rest of the shards, how will he go back to the past?? ~~
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Reviewed By: Lunabelle On: May 24, 2004 18:34 CDT
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Though others might want to kill you, I would prefer that Hiei be in nondemon form to complete the ritual. I don't know a lot about Yu Yu Hakusho, OK I hardly know anything. But I'm beginning too. Love this story and hope you update soon. Keep up the excellent work.
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's no fair! You came sooo close! Why did you have to stop there? I wanted them to mate!
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Title: inuyuyurrk
Reviewed By: jenipenny On: May 24, 2004 12:49 CDT
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That was so good!! U betterupdate soon!! no there is no hidden threat there!!But I really wanna know what she chooses to do and it better be Hiei!!!! lol.. I really love this fic!
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Reviewed By: teenager15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 08:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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this is good! i've can't wait for more! PLEASE UPDAT SOON!
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Reviewed By: animegirl411 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 06:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 06:46 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not that I don't love the Hiei / Kagome pairing, and anything worth doing is worth prolonging, but isn't Inu Yasha on their trail?
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 02:35 CDT
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Fine... I won't throw the axe. But damn girl that was so cruel. To make up for this you gotta update sooner. Or else I don't how long I can last...
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Reviewed By: InuYasha2892 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 02:04 CDT
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I just read chapter 13&14 and can't wait for the next chappie. Actually I'm not even supposed to be on the computer now, so I'm risking my computer freedom for you. Oh well. Update soon. Ja! Akari
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Reviewed By: inu freak On: May 23, 2004 13:11 CDT
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i just read chapter 12. i love it. i love it. i love it. i love it. I LOVE IT!!!KEEP UPDATING AND SONN OR I'LL KIDNAP YOU AND MAKE YOU WRITE AN OTHER CHAPTER!!! BWAHAHAHAHA!!! BWAHAHAHAHA!!! BWAHAHAHAHA!!! UPDATE SOON!!! once more... BWHAHAHAHA!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inu freak On: May 23, 2004 12:57 CDT
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that was realy good update soon I dont clif hagers I REALY dont like clif hangers please write longer chapters and i say again update SOON
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Reviewed By: akuma_river (not signed in) On: May 22, 2004 09:42 CDT
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Well I guess all males of any species think alike. lol Well so I am guessing that the next chap is the lemon? Good fic Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: hemotaru On: May 22, 2004 07:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is the best it is funny with the forest and hiei in his demon form with only a few words at a time of though. The sad thing is that Kagome could only understand want she reciniced form other demons. Is Hiei going to regret 'runting' with Kagome after he turns back into his human form? Also is Kagome going to regret doing it with him and does she love him and he her? Sorry this is long but it just soooo good of a story!! PLEASE KEEP ON WRITING AND UPDATEING THIS STORY YOUR A INSPURATION TO ME!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: May 20, 2004 21:58 CDT
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pretty good i like it!
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE the STORY soooooo MUCH!!!!!!!! update soon please
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