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Title: Luv it
Reviewed By: Rinembrium On: October 10, 2004 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fan fic so far! I wish I had some of those plants heck i wish I had some of those men if not all of them.Ah! my very own exotic erotic garden and harem of men! NO! Bad Em Bad think non-Hentai thoghts! Don't mind me if you haven't noticed I'm not all here. Any who read it love it I want some more of it, SO PPLLZZ UPDATE SOON! Ok I'm done I'll shut up now!!!
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Reviewed By: Forbidden Female Flare [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 16:47 CDT
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Hey its FFF Im SOOOOOO stuipd I put the review below this 1 on the wrong reveiw board. Its 4 a fic called Paradox. Very highly recamended story 2 those of u who LOVE Hiei are a good fic. Its a crossover of IY/YYH
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Reviewed By: Forbidden Female Flare [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 16:41 CDT
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HIEI! I lUV HIEI! U doing great wit the fic so far. Keeping Hiei n charature and not making Kurama seem like a goody-to-shoes like most people do. I also liked that Yukina knows that Hiei is her brother (which much people do) but doesnt tell any1. I thought (scary Im thinking) that Botan's little 'dress-up of Kagome & Sango waz a nice touch. I still want 2 find out wat the Jagan wants wit Kagome. BTW it would be killer if you put in were Kagome sees Hiei's demon form. He looks cool both ways 2 me!^__^ Im surpised u didnt make K's hair pink r purple once I read that part. Well I got 2 rap tis up running out of charaters to use. L8a *in the background here some1 counting 821...816...810...804..????...lost count. Darnit Ill just start over... 1500.1499.. ^_^ This is going 2 take a while so bye.*
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon! I love this story! I so want Hiei and Kagome to get together soon! Why did you not bring them together when you could?
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Title: New Mission
Reviewed By: Arella Hallo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sure he doesn't want her. Update soon, please.
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Reviewed By: Forbidden Female Flare [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 20:48 CDT
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HIEI RULES!!! *drool* He as a bad a$$ aditude and he's sexy doing it 2. Anyways I SOO happy you updated. I just ate 'bout 1/2lbs. of sugar and Im hyper. Oh yah! This chapper was excellent 'cause it talk about how Hiei feels about what happened andkeeps him in charature 2. Cant wait 4 next update. If your muse is fighting you I find it best 2 thregthing(sp) it w/ a cat or kitten. ttfn
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Reviewed By: akuma_river *not signed in* On: October 04, 2004 20:11 CDT
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coolsa.
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Title: none
Reviewed By: GUERRO On: October 04, 2004 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really liked it update as soon as possible
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Title: none
Reviewed By: guerro On: October 04, 2004 19:20 CDT
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Reviewed By: BadgerBadgerBadger On: October 04, 2004 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: October 04, 2004 17:04 CDT
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*nods* a liar alright.
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 (not signed in) On: October 04, 2004 06:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was short, but at least it was something! just be glad about that!!! great chapter!!! cant wait til the next chappy!!!
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Reviewed By: animegirl411 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 06:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Reviewed By: ScottishFae [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 22:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You updated! So Excitingness! I should really takes cues from you. I love this chapter, even if it is a little short, that's okay b/c its filled w/ Hiei goodness. I can't wait to see what happens next. I love how you portrayed Hiei in this chapter...interesting and subtle differences than most ppl use and yet still in character. Kudos! I can't wait for more! Until Next Time...Scottishfae
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Reviewed By: Somnambulicious [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 22:44 CDT
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Thanks for updating! I liked seeing Hiei's thought processes in this chapter. Thanks for not having him immediately "fall in love" with Kagome, like so many other authors would be tempted to do. His reluctant protectiveness was a nice touch. Good luck with your writer's block. I'm going through the same thing right now, so I can empathize. I figure it's better to wait until you can get a good chapter out, rather than present your readers with something subpar (not that this chapter was bad or anything; it was quite good, if a little on the short side.) I look forward to your updates, as always! YAY HIEI! *waves pompoms*
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