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Reviewed By: FictionCrazzy On: June 09, 2004 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story can't geat any better the only thing i'm confussed about is Hiei how did he get three faces? I know he has his demon face his 'human' face but what is the other face? Also what is up with Kagome and Miss sisse girl i mean i know she dosen't understand the bit but can't she just ask Hiei what is means insted of needing to research it or ask one of the group members? Where is the 'den' Hiei found is it in the forest the has plante trying to make you aroused of is it near Kagomes home? Will Hiei and Kagome as you put it 'runt like rabittes' in the 'den'?I love your muse for this story and is there any other story that you are going to do or have done with Kagome/Hiei or Kagome/Karema? Ow and my best friend said that the reson she writes suisid letter to people is because you have not up-dated so do so!!!!
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Reviewed By: kougasgurl88 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great!! i was hoping they would do it with hiei in the right mind but also do a demon one!!!
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Reviewed By: lehcar132 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 01:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this fiction. Actually I enjoy all of your stories. I can't wait till this one is updated.
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea i have to agree with you i wouldnt want Kagome and Hiei to 'rutt' while hiei is in his demon form. sorry i havent reviewed in a while, i've been busy working on fanfics and reading others from my friends. cant wait til the next chapter so update again soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Sanura [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 17:39 CDT
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Well, I have to say, this story was actually pretty good. I'm not really a big fan of the whole Hiei/Kagome pairings, but this one caught my interest. Please update soon, I'd like to read more.
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Title: about it
Reviewed By: MoonKnightess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 00:39 CDT
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I liked it, but just so you know and to help me avoid future headaches, a "Lime" refers to Yaoi (male/male) and Yuri (female/female) pairings...Lemons are the male/female pairings and it doesn't matter if they have sex or are leading up to it slowly...a lemon's a lemon... I really enjoyed this though and I can't wait for the next chapters...please write more soon.
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Reviewed By: inudemoness247 On: May 25, 2004 22:12 CDT
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omg this is one hell of an amazing story! it is already one of my favs if not my #1 fav!!!!i beg of you please update REALLY soon! it is hard to find a true good story, even more with Hiei/kag but i have found it all in this fic and the lemons,limes,etc (u get it) make it all the better. again UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: Dezzeeluu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg gurl dont change it at all!! dat was off the hook fo real. i hope u update soon
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 *n.s.i.* On: May 24, 2004 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mija.. *hugs u* im so happy. thanks for letting them stop b4 doing it in demon form...i was dissappointee at that, but now is happy. i cant type cuz of my fake nails, but i LOVE it! LOVED i mean. soooo...im glad ur muse is comng baq, n update gain soon kay? JA NE! SLy
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story update soon
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Reviewed By: firedemon86(not signed on) On: May 24, 2004 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so much can't wait to see what happens when Hiei wakes up. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: lil_newrisk [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 20:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It took me a little while to read, my e-mail hid the notifications....lol...but I love the new chapters and i agree with you on the whole "not in the demon form" thing....lol...but I still can't wait for the lemon...lol Gracie (it wouldnt let me log-in to post a review)
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven On: May 24, 2004 19:45 CDT
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one question, after kag and hiei mate he will want to accompany kag to hunt the rest of the shards, how will he go back to the past?? ~~
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Reviewed By: Lunabelle On: May 24, 2004 18:34 CDT
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Though others might want to kill you, I would prefer that Hiei be in nondemon form to complete the ritual. I don't know a lot about Yu Yu Hakusho, OK I hardly know anything. But I'm beginning too. Love this story and hope you update soon. Keep up the excellent work.
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's no fair! You came sooo close! Why did you have to stop there? I wanted them to mate!
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