| "It Started With Snow" Reviews/Comments [ 140 ] |
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Reviewed By: Blackrose Thorn On: May 13, 2004 15:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loooove it!!!!Thank you so much for putting my idea into your story.I It's so Kawaii!!(Peanutbutter with steak and cheesecake)
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Reviewed By: MAGE OF BLACK FLAMES!! On: May 10, 2004 11:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im only going to say this once, and once should be enough.YOU BETTER NOT HURT JOEY!!!THE ONLY PERSON WHO SHOULD DIE IS HIS FATHER!!IF YOU HURT HIM YOUR SOUL MAY BELONG TO GOD BUT YOUR ASS IS MINE!!! but the story is getting great keep up the good work im so proud of you. your great!! YOU'VE BEEN WARNED!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Blackrose Thorn On: May 03, 2004 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it.But don't force yourself to write or you'll get burned out sweetie.Jou haveing twins is so cute.I have a idea for Jou's craveings.Chocolate covered chicken with peas and bread.MMuaahhhh!
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Reviewed By: mage of black flames On: April 29, 2004 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hellooooooooooo!!!!!!(just had 5 pounds of surgar) but your story is so awesome i love how its coming along. i keep reading it over and over its just that good and if anyone says any diffrent i wont send them to the shadowrealm i'll send them straight to my homeland: HELL!!!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!! HOLLA!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Death Rose On: April 28, 2004 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally love it! I hope to see future chapters! Please write more! Pwease!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 16:21 CDT
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Tsk, tsk Jou, u should know better than to jump while pregnant! Well, anyway, love the concert, especially w/ Yami 'n Yugi. *giggles* They can't keep their hands off of each other, huh? Well, update soon!
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Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 22:59 CDT
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Poor Jou... morning sickness sounds horrid. I want kids, but that makes me rather afraid... In any case, Juliana Theory sounds excellent... I'll have to check them out, and the Yugi and Yami thing was funny. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: ieiaio On: April 20, 2004 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your doing great keep up the good work. and do another chapter soon ok.
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 22:46 CDT
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sorry I didn't review last chapter, I was in Puerto Rico! but they are both really good.
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 20:16 CDT
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That's ur first attempt at limey scenes? Well, it was fairly decent, pretty good for a beginner. Anyway, poor Jou, being morning sick and moody. But Seto will make it...eventually. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: D&G [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 19:12 CDT
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Seto and Jou are going t have a beautifal baby. Or babies...
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Reviewed By: Blackrosethorn On: April 10, 2004 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I could give you a higher rating I'd give it a 20 or 100.I hope you don't kill anyone except for Jou's father.But hugs and kisses for a the pain.Tootles
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Title: it sated with snow
Reviewed By: jeoykibeayami On: April 08, 2004 07:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Black Rose Thorn On: April 05, 2004 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story a lot. but dont put to much weird things in it. and dont make it so rushed. continue on with the good work, but dont work with a migrane, it will do you no good! (im related to mage of the black flame, HOLLA)
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Reviewed By: Mage Of Black Flames On: April 05, 2004 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi its me again i just wanted to say i enjoyed the new chapters so much!!!! please dont let anyone get killed, please!! but other than that i think the story is AMAZING!! its so good that i went to chinatown and paid to get on the computer to read it. i would give you my number but you didnt ask. (and i dont know you,i want to)
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