| "It Started With Snow" Reviews/Comments [ 140 ] |
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Reviewed By: mageofblackflames On: September 13, 2004 11:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good job girl, as always. keep up the good work.sorry it took so long for me to review, i went to hell for the summer,satan sends his love(just kidding). i have an idea maybe when yugi is pregnant you should have him get into a car accident,get really hurt,but dosen't lose is kids.
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Reviewed By: yugis_sweetheart [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 17:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it...but i wish that Yugi and Yami could have a kid each...then yugi i think would be satisfied...PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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Title: WEEEEE
Reviewed By: The Pharaohs Mine! On: September 11, 2004 11:20 CDT
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WEEEE MEH PHARAOHS GONNA BE PREGNANT! Yes that's right people, I claimed Yami already. Isn't that right? And Delta claim Jou and Brie claimed Seto. *holds onto Yami tightly* MINE! hisshiss snarl snarl. Just keep it up! I wanna see how bitchy meh pharaoh gets XD
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Reviewed By: Hellz Flamez On: September 10, 2004 15:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Yami's the one who's gonna carry Yugi and Yami's kids? Wow that's gonna be cool. I can't imagine Yami pregnant. Good, Jou's father not coming back. Can't wait till the update! ^o^
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 08:58 CDT
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I love this story. I hope Yami agrees. Yugi and Yami would be great parents. Are any of the others going to be doing this also? Just thought I`d ask. I don`t know how long you intend for the story to be. Update soon.
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Title: Hmm
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 02:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm Yami carrying the babies instead of Yugi that would be something else, I guess he won't be able to wear his leather lol. Please continue its so good!
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Reviewed By: Lil Miss Kitty On: September 10, 2004 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*laughs* It's Who's Line points. Sorry. Oooo that phone call from Yami! That's just beyond hysterical! "There should be no problem with Yami having the procedure." Ooooo PotLeaf-haired Pharoh Pregnant. *roars* I love it!! Can't wait to see his cravings! Hon, I live in California. Those shirts are common! Good work on this chapter! -- Kat
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Title: Another one huh?
Reviewed By: RedFox [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 23:56 CDT
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Coolness. Yami with a baby.... *imagines this and falls out of chair laughing* Poor Yami... I think... So far so good, and I can't wait to find out the sex of the twins. ^__^ Later, RedFox
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 22:47 CDT
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Yes, youwould be sacrificed. And it'd be painful and bloody. NO KILLING TWINS. So...what's the other alternative? Anyway, please update soon.
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Reviewed By: ~DemonandGoddess On: September 06, 2004 19:32 CDT
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Yugi wants to have a little baby of his own? Awww...chibi Yugi and Yami's! Cute! Well, plz update soon, great chapter.
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Reviewed By: j_mame-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 20:11 CDT
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i really liked this chapter and how it was just yugi and jou talking. how cute yugi wants a baby too. that baby would be so cute if they ever made one. update soon. fantastic job.
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Reviewed By: Hellz Fames On: September 04, 2004 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG is Jou's father gonna come back!?! I need to know! PLease update soon!
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Reviewed By: Lil Miss Kitty On: August 25, 2004 10:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yup, this will keep me interested. Damn, that was a freaky dream. Poor Jou, all freaked out like that. Ten points for Seto in knowing what to do. You know, I live in California... the next time I see some kid with a pot leaf on his shirt, I'm gonna see Yami. *laughs hysterically* That'll be worth the strange looks! Thanks! -- Kat
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Title: can't wait
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 02:09 CDT
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can;t wait till the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 21:23 CDT
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That isn't some foreshadowing dream, is it? He's not going to lose the twins, is he? His dream scares me! A bit short, but you updated very quickly, which makes me happy. ^-^ Please update soon.
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