| "It Started With Snow" Reviews/Comments [ 140 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lil Miss Kitty On: September 23, 2004 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*cackles* I can't wait for the next chapter! I loved Jou telling Seto he can be pregnant next time. Soooo, how big a litter will Yami be carrying?? Ah, my friend said it felt like bubbles when the baby first started moving. However she's only pregnant with one. She did like the fish description. Good job!!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 22:10 CDT
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What! Whatr type of ending to a chapter is that?/i> An evil one, that's what. >_< Well, please update soon. *sighs* Oh, poor Mokie, his mind slowly becoming more and more perverted...
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Reviewed By: Hellz Flamez On: September 23, 2004 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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What's wrong with Yami? I thought he wanted the baby. Anyway, your so evil for doing a cliffy! I want to see the pic, please! E-mail -blackrosepinta@hotmail.com E-mail me anytime you want!
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 06:48 CDT
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I love this story. Yugi is sooo excited. What is the matter with Yami. I thought he wanted this too. I can`t wait for Joey to give birth. He will want to kill Seto. At least if my experience says anything.
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 04:21 CDT
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Man, that was hilarious! I remember finding out I was pregnant with my second boy... I had pretty much the same reaction as Yami... it's that 'I'm not so sure anymore about this arrangement." Oh, and you want some good reactions to have for future reference? go watch "Junior", with Arnie boy... I watched that one two weeks before I gave birth to my first son, and I thought it was soooooooooo appropriate! For some reason my ex didn't think so though... wonder why?
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Reviewed By: Yugis_sweetheart [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 03:04 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooo Putting us on the edge of our seats. Heh...I do read other fics but this one is the best one that i have read lately. *at the edge of her seat* Please continue on...What is wrong with Yami...hopefully he wont regret this yugi looks so happy. GREAT FIC PLEASE CONTINUE!
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Title: This gets better and better
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 01:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This gets better and better. Hmm the ending was interesting. Cant wait till Jou has his.
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Reviewed By: jonez (not logged in) On: September 21, 2004 18:45 CDT
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Jonez; Excellent as usual!!! Keep up the good work! (I'm beginning a JouXSeto ficcy, and it's all thanks to you!) Thanks for the encouragement, and I hope that maybe I'll be able to write a masterpiece like this! Yami; I'M WHAT!?!?!?!? Yugi; Yay! Yami, we're gonna have a family! (starts handing out favors for a baby shower) Seto; Don't worry, Yami I'm sure We'll find a way to pay for your kids' college education... somehow... Jou; C'mon Yug, we're going stroller shopping... Should we get a single, double or triple? Yami; *Faints* P.S. Are you going to do a "Halloween Special" and did any music inspire this fic?
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Title: great story
Reviewed By: Yamia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude,big brother proposed to Yugi!!!!squee!!!!how cute!!!!i need to try and put that Naked Friday rule into affect....it would be to hilarious!!!i also need to get more info out of big brother,i didn't know he was afraid of needles...*giggles*anyway,please hurry and update!!!i wanna read through the rest of Jou's preg.,so please hurry and update!!!!ja!!!!Yami!!!big brother!!!!where are you!!!!
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 21:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha, just finished reading all the chapters... I love this fic! I've had two kids, both boys... I don't remember what my cravings were with my last, (mostly anything that was edible) but I remember distinctly with my first there was the creme soda slushies... I was nasty for them! I craved them constantly... to the point that one time I was about 8 months prego, and we were visiting friends that lived in a small town... I made my then husband drive 45 minutes to the next town to get me one because they didn't have any in that town! You gotta do something like that with Jou and Seto... it would be hilarious! I can't wait until Yami gets pregnant... I'd love to see what an ancient pharoh craves! Try to get foods from the past, and watch yugio panic! rofl!!!!
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Reviewed By: Yugis_sweetheart [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey again! Great chapter! Hopefully you will put more of Yami and Yugi in the hospital after the operation. That would be interesting. And have jou and Seto come to visit them or something. I just cant wait until the twins are born. My Seto and I are focused only on this story. Keep writing!!
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Reviewed By: RedFox [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 22:43 CDT
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Dude, I need to make use of that 'Naked Fridays' rule one day... And my best friend is absolutely terrified of needles, and I have to say, that the reaction is completely on the mark, at least when it came to Kris... ^__^ As always, wonderful work, and I'm sure the next chapter will live up to my expectations. Later, RedFox X3
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Reviewed By: Lil Miss Kitty On: September 13, 2004 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I loved Yami's reaction to needles. I can't wait to see how Yami handles pregnancy. Waddling pot leaf on legs comes to mind. Ooo the size matters comment! Perfect! Wow... you're pretty much through Jou's pregnancy. I can't wait to see what happens next. Dude, I like the everyone naked on fridays law. Kat
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 16:35 CDT
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SQUEE!!! OMG, OMG, OMG, Yami proposed to Yugi! ;;^^ I'm sorry, I just found that image SO KAWAII! *giggles* Yami pregnant... "Pup, if I wanted to make a rule saying everyone had to come to work naked on Fridays, I could." Made me laugh, so much. ^-^ Pls update soon.
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Reviewed By: Hellz Flamez On: September 13, 2004 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yami pregnant would look cute, but most people are more used to Yugi being pregant. But you're right, who would want to hurt Yugi? Update ASAP!
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