| "It Started With Snow" Reviews/Comments [ 140 ] |
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Reviewed By: RedFox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 18:49 CDT
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Enjoyed very much. I know what you mean. Starzie and me couldn't get on for three days. Some people couldn't get on for longer, some shorter. Wonder what's up with that? Oh well. Loved it and I can't wait til you have the time for another chapter.
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl not logged in On: June 28, 2004 22:37 CDT
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Title: Ahhhhhh!
Reviewed By: RedFox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 21:46 CDT
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Oh, please please please please don't hurt the dragons!!!! *sniff* Oh! I'm writing my own cyoa. I'll post it as soon as I get through chappie nine. Review when it comes on. I'd appreciate it much. Til Jou's next month!! (Oh yeah, My sis in law is preg, so I'll be able to give all sorts of funny food combo's!!!! ) Love, me......
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Reviewed By: sakura-dono On: June 13, 2004 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
domo arigato for writing this fic. you write wonderful yaoi lemons but please put one with yami and yugi in the next chapter please. i really loved this story its one of the best jou/seto fics i've ever read. i've read it like five times already. please write the next chapter soon
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Reviewed By: Felidae5 On: June 11, 2004 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Has a far-off look)Sigh, reminds me of that one time, I stepped out of the shower, and my boyfriend had illuminated the bedroom with special spotlights, there were turquise and pink hearts dancing across the walls, and soft music filling the air. And then I was massaged with scented oil until I dozed off..sigh..Where was I? You do wonderful fluff-oh, and that DDR machine is *hell*, I've seen the 'advanced' version, where you have to use your hands too-scary!^^°
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Reviewed By: Felidae5 On: June 11, 2004 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wee, an update!^^ I've waited so long for this. Ahh, so fluffy, so sweet-and I would have paid good money to have seen Yami's and Yugi's faces, when Seto found them on his kitchen table, hehehehee... Now on to the next!
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Reviewed By: Blackrose Thorn On: June 11, 2004 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's about time you wrote I was beinging to think that MBFS killed you behind my back.I love the story!!!Write more!!Scream so loud!!!Ja ne
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Reviewed By: mage of black flames On: June 11, 2004 13:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story just keeps getting better and better!!!!I wish i could write like you and black rose thorn!!!!but you dont know me very well.i can get past any defense if i want to kill the person bad enough.so dont do anything cocky in the story that will get jou hurt and you'll live to enjoy your summer!!!!i've been working on a new curse,and the results aren't pretty!!chow!
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 09:59 CDT
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I love the chappie! LOVE THEM! WRITE MORE!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: RedFox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 02:55 CDT
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This is so sweet. I read this on a late night session, and it's so cute. Keep going. When my mom was pregnant with me, she ate a lot of peanut butter and pickles. Just a suggestion, but use it if you will or won't. Keep it up, and if Jou's dad ever wakes up, remind him that I'll kill him. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Blackrose Thorn On: May 27, 2004 15:27 CDT
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I love this story I just hope Mage of the Black Flames doesn't kill you before you finish the story.I'll try to calm her down for you.:) Kawaii
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Reviewed By: Blackrose Thorn On: May 27, 2004 14:45 CDT
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Hi!!Keep it up.I love reading this story.
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Reviewed By: mage of black flames On: May 26, 2004 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoyed it!!!!!!, i still think your a good writer,evem though you hurt joey.but you didn't have to get so scared. i wasn't going to hurt you.I AM GOING TO KILL YOU!oh and for the record if a fortress and armor is the best you can do..... i suggest you sleep with both eyes open and your hand on the door knob!!!!!! muwhahahah!!
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Reviewed By: Felidae5 On: May 23, 2004 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaaarggh, this story is so good, I can't believe I read it in one go! Seto's so nice and protective, and Jou's simply..amazing, adorable and amazing! Sniff! God, you really know, how to hook people onto your fics, don't you? Please udate soon(hands shinigami709 a Legolas plushie)Go you, yaaayyy!^^
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Reviewed By: Blackrose Thorn On: May 19, 2004 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't worry about the Mage of the Blackflame.She won't hurt you THAT much.(I keep the armor though YOU WILL NEED IT!!)But for the cravings: Pears with BQ ribs and whipped cream.Oh and Skittles with ramen noodles.Don't ask me how I come up with stuff.It creeps me out too!!;)
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