| "It Started With Snow" Reviews/Comments [ 140 ] |
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Reviewed By: Yugis_sweetheart [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 03:04 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooo Putting us on the edge of our seats. Heh...I do read other fics but this one is the best one that i have read lately. *at the edge of her seat* Please continue on...What is wrong with Yami...hopefully he wont regret this yugi looks so happy. GREAT FIC PLEASE CONTINUE!
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Title: This gets better and better
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 01:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This gets better and better. Hmm the ending was interesting. Cant wait till Jou has his.
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Reviewed By: jonez (not logged in) On: September 21, 2004 18:45 CDT
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Jonez; Excellent as usual!!! Keep up the good work! (I'm beginning a JouXSeto ficcy, and it's all thanks to you!) Thanks for the encouragement, and I hope that maybe I'll be able to write a masterpiece like this! Yami; I'M WHAT!?!?!?!? Yugi; Yay! Yami, we're gonna have a family! (starts handing out favors for a baby shower) Seto; Don't worry, Yami I'm sure We'll find a way to pay for your kids' college education... somehow... Jou; C'mon Yug, we're going stroller shopping... Should we get a single, double or triple? Yami; *Faints* P.S. Are you going to do a "Halloween Special" and did any music inspire this fic?
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Title: great story
Reviewed By: Yamia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude,big brother proposed to Yugi!!!!squee!!!!how cute!!!!i need to try and put that Naked Friday rule into affect....it would be to hilarious!!!i also need to get more info out of big brother,i didn't know he was afraid of needles...*giggles*anyway,please hurry and update!!!i wanna read through the rest of Jou's preg.,so please hurry and update!!!!ja!!!!Yami!!!big brother!!!!where are you!!!!
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 21:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha, just finished reading all the chapters... I love this fic! I've had two kids, both boys... I don't remember what my cravings were with my last, (mostly anything that was edible) but I remember distinctly with my first there was the creme soda slushies... I was nasty for them! I craved them constantly... to the point that one time I was about 8 months prego, and we were visiting friends that lived in a small town... I made my then husband drive 45 minutes to the next town to get me one because they didn't have any in that town! You gotta do something like that with Jou and Seto... it would be hilarious! I can't wait until Yami gets pregnant... I'd love to see what an ancient pharoh craves! Try to get foods from the past, and watch yugio panic! rofl!!!!
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Reviewed By: Yugis_sweetheart [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey again! Great chapter! Hopefully you will put more of Yami and Yugi in the hospital after the operation. That would be interesting. And have jou and Seto come to visit them or something. I just cant wait until the twins are born. My Seto and I are focused only on this story. Keep writing!!
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Reviewed By: RedFox [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 22:43 CDT
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Dude, I need to make use of that 'Naked Fridays' rule one day... And my best friend is absolutely terrified of needles, and I have to say, that the reaction is completely on the mark, at least when it came to Kris... ^__^ As always, wonderful work, and I'm sure the next chapter will live up to my expectations. Later, RedFox X3
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Reviewed By: Lil Miss Kitty On: September 13, 2004 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I loved Yami's reaction to needles. I can't wait to see how Yami handles pregnancy. Waddling pot leaf on legs comes to mind. Ooo the size matters comment! Perfect! Wow... you're pretty much through Jou's pregnancy. I can't wait to see what happens next. Dude, I like the everyone naked on fridays law. Kat
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 16:35 CDT
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SQUEE!!! OMG, OMG, OMG, Yami proposed to Yugi! ;;^^ I'm sorry, I just found that image SO KAWAII! *giggles* Yami pregnant... "Pup, if I wanted to make a rule saying everyone had to come to work naked on Fridays, I could." Made me laugh, so much. ^-^ Pls update soon.
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Reviewed By: Hellz Flamez On: September 13, 2004 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yami pregnant would look cute, but most people are more used to Yugi being pregant. But you're right, who would want to hurt Yugi? Update ASAP!
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Reviewed By: mageofblackflames On: September 13, 2004 11:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good job girl, as always. keep up the good work.sorry it took so long for me to review, i went to hell for the summer,satan sends his love(just kidding). i have an idea maybe when yugi is pregnant you should have him get into a car accident,get really hurt,but dosen't lose is kids.
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Reviewed By: yugis_sweetheart [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 17:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it...but i wish that Yugi and Yami could have a kid each...then yugi i think would be satisfied...PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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Title: WEEEEE
Reviewed By: The Pharaohs Mine! On: September 11, 2004 11:20 CDT
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WEEEE MEH PHARAOHS GONNA BE PREGNANT! Yes that's right people, I claimed Yami already. Isn't that right? And Delta claim Jou and Brie claimed Seto. *holds onto Yami tightly* MINE! hisshiss snarl snarl. Just keep it up! I wanna see how bitchy meh pharaoh gets XD
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Reviewed By: Hellz Flamez On: September 10, 2004 15:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Yami's the one who's gonna carry Yugi and Yami's kids? Wow that's gonna be cool. I can't imagine Yami pregnant. Good, Jou's father not coming back. Can't wait till the update! ^o^
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 08:58 CDT
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I love this story. I hope Yami agrees. Yugi and Yami would be great parents. Are any of the others going to be doing this also? Just thought I`d ask. I don`t know how long you intend for the story to be. Update soon.
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