| "It Started With Snow" Reviews/Comments [ 140 ] |
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Reviewed By: Felidae5 On: June 11, 2004 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wee, an update!^^ I've waited so long for this. Ahh, so fluffy, so sweet-and I would have paid good money to have seen Yami's and Yugi's faces, when Seto found them on his kitchen table, hehehehee... Now on to the next!
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Reviewed By: Blackrose Thorn On: June 11, 2004 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's about time you wrote I was beinging to think that MBFS killed you behind my back.I love the story!!!Write more!!Scream so loud!!!Ja ne
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Reviewed By: mage of black flames On: June 11, 2004 13:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story just keeps getting better and better!!!!I wish i could write like you and black rose thorn!!!!but you dont know me very well.i can get past any defense if i want to kill the person bad enough.so dont do anything cocky in the story that will get jou hurt and you'll live to enjoy your summer!!!!i've been working on a new curse,and the results aren't pretty!!chow!
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 09:59 CDT
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I love the chappie! LOVE THEM! WRITE MORE!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: RedFox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 02:55 CDT
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This is so sweet. I read this on a late night session, and it's so cute. Keep going. When my mom was pregnant with me, she ate a lot of peanut butter and pickles. Just a suggestion, but use it if you will or won't. Keep it up, and if Jou's dad ever wakes up, remind him that I'll kill him. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Blackrose Thorn On: May 27, 2004 15:27 CDT
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I love this story I just hope Mage of the Black Flames doesn't kill you before you finish the story.I'll try to calm her down for you.:) Kawaii
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Reviewed By: Blackrose Thorn On: May 27, 2004 14:45 CDT
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Hi!!Keep it up.I love reading this story.
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Reviewed By: mage of black flames On: May 26, 2004 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoyed it!!!!!!, i still think your a good writer,evem though you hurt joey.but you didn't have to get so scared. i wasn't going to hurt you.I AM GOING TO KILL YOU!oh and for the record if a fortress and armor is the best you can do..... i suggest you sleep with both eyes open and your hand on the door knob!!!!!! muwhahahah!!
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Reviewed By: Felidae5 On: May 23, 2004 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaaarggh, this story is so good, I can't believe I read it in one go! Seto's so nice and protective, and Jou's simply..amazing, adorable and amazing! Sniff! God, you really know, how to hook people onto your fics, don't you? Please udate soon(hands shinigami709 a Legolas plushie)Go you, yaaayyy!^^
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Reviewed By: Blackrose Thorn On: May 19, 2004 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't worry about the Mage of the Blackflame.She won't hurt you THAT much.(I keep the armor though YOU WILL NEED IT!!)But for the cravings: Pears with BQ ribs and whipped cream.Oh and Skittles with ramen noodles.Don't ask me how I come up with stuff.It creeps me out too!!;)
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Reviewed By: Blackrose Thorn On: May 13, 2004 15:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loooove it!!!!Thank you so much for putting my idea into your story.I It's so Kawaii!!(Peanutbutter with steak and cheesecake)
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Reviewed By: MAGE OF BLACK FLAMES!! On: May 10, 2004 11:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im only going to say this once, and once should be enough.YOU BETTER NOT HURT JOEY!!!THE ONLY PERSON WHO SHOULD DIE IS HIS FATHER!!IF YOU HURT HIM YOUR SOUL MAY BELONG TO GOD BUT YOUR ASS IS MINE!!! but the story is getting great keep up the good work im so proud of you. your great!! YOU'VE BEEN WARNED!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Blackrose Thorn On: May 03, 2004 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it.But don't force yourself to write or you'll get burned out sweetie.Jou haveing twins is so cute.I have a idea for Jou's craveings.Chocolate covered chicken with peas and bread.MMuaahhhh!
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Reviewed By: mage of black flames On: April 29, 2004 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hellooooooooooo!!!!!!(just had 5 pounds of surgar) but your story is so awesome i love how its coming along. i keep reading it over and over its just that good and if anyone says any diffrent i wont send them to the shadowrealm i'll send them straight to my homeland: HELL!!!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!! HOLLA!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Death Rose On: April 28, 2004 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally love it! I hope to see future chapters! Please write more! Pwease!
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